Well,you may want to reduce your overall card draw effects,seems like thats alot.also use some more solid removal like oblivion ring,Dispeller's CapsuleWrath of God.Not tryin to be pushy but i run a very similar strat,and ive tested it some and i find i am most out gunned by counters and quick creatures.also i think dovescape is weak compared to other stuff you could run like helm of obedience/leyline of the void or sanguine bond and insert life gain here.stuff like that seems strong in various situations.And also semblance anvil is more benifical to you than helm of awakening and if you really hate your opponent interacting with you use solitary confinement.
you need a whole new approach to mana acceleration.somthing like twelve to fiffteen because if your commander gets knocked off line you still wanna be able to play cards,so i think you shoud try stuff like lotus blossom,gilded lotus,mindstone,coalition relic.theese are just a few,other stuff like tharan dynamo or worn powerstone may be good for you as well.second,searing wind is a auto include.and furthermore i really think you shoud try copy effects like fork,twincast,Reiterateand also go in for some more draw in bigger doses ,such as Opportunity,jace's ingenuity.get theese,that shoud help
I don't understand how Toymaker does anything Karn can't. Am I missing something ? Can you elaborate ?
...well you said somthing like..."The Karn + Voltaic Construct + Mana Artifact is the backbone of many larger combos in the deck"..a good buddy of mine uses a combo alot like yours,so we tried getting rid of his key peice and he simply replaced it with toymaker.using it as a back up and the karn as a kinda bait to see how id play out...karn wasnt his commander though,so just a suggestion
whats up guys n gals......im here and new to ur site but ive been plaing magic for fifteen yrs,i effin love mtg and all its ugly rules and mean players and high individual card prices..my prefered format is commander...but ive been known to play standard and draft a little.send me a message to tlk bout stratgey or decklist..see ya:D
so no dec mailer?can someone give me a link to that info?