MTG Salvation

This isn't worded even remotely correctly. The only way I could see it working is if it had the Haunt wording. Even then, this isn't a rare. It's uncommon and doesn't need the comes into play tapped clause.

Ikran, Overbeing of Reality :3mana::symw::symu::symb::symr::symg:
Legendary Creature - Avatar {MR}
~ is unblockable.
Prismatic - When Ikran deals combat damage to a player, if you control a land of each basic land type, target permanent phases out. It may not phase back in.
5/4

Braids, Infernal Adept :2mana::symr::symr:
Legendary Creature - Human Shaman {R}
At the beginning of each player's upkeep, that player may cast an instant or sorcery spell from his or her hand without paying it's mana cost.
2/2

Next: Green Braids.

Chain Reaction says that this is fine.

Lymph Coating :2mana::symw:
Instant {U}
Target creature or player gains Absorb 3 until end of turn.

This should only remove counters during your end step. That way, you don't end up losing all of the counters by the next time an opponent can attack. Also, I agree that Absorb should effect players.

Ehye of the Storm :3mana::symu::symr:
Legendary Creature - Elemental Wizard {MR}
Whenever you cast an instant or sorcery spell, you may pay :2mana:. If you do, copy that spell for each other spell cast this turn. You may choose new targets for the copies.
2/2

Zinra :2mana::symw::symw::symb::symb::symr::symr:
Legendary Creature - Elder Dragon
Flying
When Zinra deals combat damage to a player, that player sacrifices that many permanents.
At the beginning of your upkeep, sacrifice Zinra unless you pay :symw::symb::symr:.
7/7

Next: Squirrels

Definitely fine how it is, seeing as it won't break anything while being good.

:3mana::symg::symg:
Creature - Elf Shaman {R}
:symtap:: Target creature becomes a 1/1 green Squirrel with no abilities until end of turn.
:symtap:: Target creature gets +3/+3 until end of turn.
2/3

Quote from zedruu

honestly, im new here:)

so im just used to review about 2 or 3 pages before

but that doesn't mean im new to Magic.
i know how the metagame is currently works.

and in my post i have explain is just how Sarkhan look alike in red absence.
in every ability i have explain the reason..

i tend to create how Sarkhan to be calmer but still deadly as his predecessor card. green in the form of ramping and black in the form of sacrifice creature

The main problem isn't story. It's the abilities. The first 2 don't fit Sarkhan as a character. The last 2 abilities don't fit the colors.

Seriously, does nobody look at the previous posts to see how posts here are supposed to be done? Review the card before yours, then post. I mean, every time.

First off, the first ability only works if you have a creature. Not only that, but it sucks. For shooting yourself in the foot, you get 2 mana. I'd rather just play Garruk for the 2 mana.
The -1 is fine, but it doesn't fit Sarkhan.
The -3 should double damage to all non dragon creatures.
The ultimate doesn't fit in green + black. Honestly, I don't think Sarkhan fits in Green black.

Aether Break :2mana::symuw::symr:
Instant {U}
Shuffle target creature into it's owner's library.

This card, mechanically, is a mess. Power wise, it shouldn't have Flashback. Honestly, this could possibly be more confusing to people than, say Humility.

Vaporize :2mana::symbr::symw:
Instant {U}
Exile target creature. Vaporize deals 2 damage to that creature's controller.

I'll be honest. I absolutely love this card. Everything about it seems balanced, since even though the mana payments are split up, it's easy to kill.

Soul Reave :2mana::symgw::symb:
Instant {U}
Destroy target creature. You gain life equal to that creature's toughness.

Due to Arcane Melee, I feel that this could cost 2.

The Pine Barrens
Legendary Land {R}
:symtap:: Add to your mana pool.
:symb:,:symtap: Sacrifice The Pine Barrens: Put a 13/13 black demon token with Flying and Trample onto the battlefield. Play this ability only if you control 12 or more creatures.

Rumina Jalix :3mana::symr::symr::symr:
Planeswalker - Rumina {MR}
{+1} Rumina deals 2 damage divided as you choose among one or two target creatures and/or players.
{0} Until end of turn, Rumina becomes a 5/5 Dragon creature with flying that's still a planeswalker. Prevent all damage that would be dealt to her this turn.
{-X} Rumina deals X damage to each creature and to each player.
[4]

Portalmage
Creature - Human Wizard {U}
Whenever a creature enters the battlefield under your control, you may return target creature you control to its owner's hand.
1/1

I think that this could be an uncommon, and that the equip cost should be lowered, since you lose at least 1 creature upon use.

Avelian Arsonist :1mana::symr::symr:
Creature - Goblin {U}
When Avelian Arsonist enters the battlefield, put a blaze counter on target land without a blaze counter on it. For as long as that land has a blaze counter on it, it has "At the beginning of your upkeep, this land deals 1 damage to you."
2/1

Feels like the equip cost should be lowered. Also, I feel that this wouldn't be problematic, because while it can make anything huge, it will most likely be targeted. Also, I like the idea of a weapon that requires legendaries.

Return to Earth :2mana::symg:
Enchantment - Aura {U}
Enchant permanent
Return to Earth can only target a creature
Enchanted permanent is a basic forest.