MTG Salvation

While my mind was drifting off at work today, I came up with an idea for a new legend, Behold

Lizan, Prince of Deals 1RWU
Legendary Creature-Goblin Advisor {M}
When ~ enters the battlefield, attach all Equipment on the battlefield to it. (Control of the Equipment doesn't change.)
4, Shuffle two equipment attached to ~ into their owner's library: You may search your library for an Equipment card, reveal it, put it into your hand, then shuffle your library.
1/2

Granted no person, or goblin, of high standing should be without their symbol of authority.

Scepter of the Trade Prince 4
Legendary Artifact {R}
,T: Attach target equipment you don't control to target creature you do control, and attach target equipment you do control to target creature you don't control. Targeted equipment may not be equipped to any other creature until end of turn.

Sorry the wording may be off, but I would really like some feedback on these two cards, thanks in advance.

Sorry to be blunt, but I think you should really use storage counters instead of harvest counters, like in Calciform Pools, City of Shadows, Fountain of Cho. Primarily because it provides an reprint potential for mainly the multicolor lands, an already established counter and synergies for the cards available outside the set.

Jovial Hermit G
Creature-Human Druid
When ~ dies, each player may search his or her library for a land card and put that card into his or her hand. Then each player who searched his or her library this way shuffles it.
0/1

Quote from luminum can

I feel bad that the Rebel type has been shoehorned into this tutoring business. It doesn't have much to do with rebellion at all; it's recruitment. Put that on Soldiers instead. Keeping Rebels connected to this one mechanic also mostly keeps them away from the color red, which is the color that should have the most Rebels of all.

Thank you for posting because this an actual problem that I find with the Rebel sub-type, and I think it would of worked better if they just stuck it on the mercenary cards from the same block. That being said I would really appreciate if some people would bounce some ideas on what a new Rebel mechanic would look like.

Quote from Ryder052

So, how do you actually do anything with Sand-Skimmer Revolutionary? You can't cast it, you can't cheat it into play, nothing

Ky'Rai needs to be Mythic and Legendary, other than that it's good.

Thanks for catching that. I'll change the rarity. It was supposed to be Legendary when I typed it up, but I must of missed it. Also added a Rebel card as a reference to the Rebel mechanic, and how to play the Revolutionary. Oh, and I added 2 new cards as well.

I just have a couple questions, sorry.
1. What is exactly the difference between the Red Zombies and the Blue/Red Mutants, since they both sound very similar?
2. Is Unity for only your permanents you control or the whole board?

This is a card I've been meaning to post for a while. It does require use of the rebel mechanic as illustrated on Ramosian Sergeant, and
I see it as an amalgam of two cards, Evermind and the old Viashino cards similar to Viashino Sandscout.

Sand-Skimmer Revolutionary
Creature - Human Rebel Nomad (C)
(Nonexistent mana costs can't be paid.)
~ is Red
Haste, First Strike
At the beginning of the end step, shuffle ~ into its owner's library
Cycling 1R
2/1

While thinking up this card I came up with a new Rebel Legend that would incorporate three colors.

Ky'Rai of the Twisted Ideal 1WBR
Legendary Creature - Human Rebel Cleric (M)
All Rebel creatures you control have haste
XWB,T:Return target Rebel permanent card with converted mana cost X or less from your graveyard to the battlefield.
3/2

The next cards I've been trying to perfect for Rebels for awhile, but I can't seem to.

War-Trampled Village
Tribal Land - Rebel (U)
T: Add 1 to your mana pool.
2,T: Shuffle a card from your hand into your library
One senseless act of destruction can ignite the flames of an entire revolution.

Rage of the Rebellion 1BR
Tribal Enchantment - Rebel Aura (U)
Enchant Creature
Enchanted creature gets -2/-2 and attacks each turn if able.

This is my first time attempting to design custom cards and would really like some feedback on them.

Hello to everyone. I decided to finally post something after lurking on the forums forever, so I could finally post my created cards

Awesome flavour, and now I wish there were more cards to support spider tribal.

I Love Erza. We really need a general that would work good with equipment, but I really would like her more if she had an ability like Vulshok Battlemaster and would read something like:
Erza, Armory Master 3WUR
Legendary Creature - Human Knight
When Erza, Armory Master enters the battlefield, attach all Equipment on the battlefield to it.
Whenever an equipment becomes unattached from Erza, shuffle it into its owner's library.
2: Shuffle an equipment attached to Erza into its owner's library, then search its owner's library for an equipment card and attach it to Erza.
3/3

Pyromancer's Swath is always a fun card to give to control players

You might want to add Kher Keep. It produces tokens that you would own, so they are donatable and have little risk of back fire.