Power of ExtinctionBG
Instant (U)
Target creature gets +X/+X until end of turn where X is the number of cards in all graveyards. Destroy that creature at the beginning of the next end step.
Recast 2BG (When you cast a spell with the same name as this card from your hand, you may cast this card from your graveyard for its recast cost.)
*grumbles about a lack of team name in posts and lack of internet at home*
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[spoiler=Rocket_Powered_Turbo_Slug] Post here
I like it. Has some potential to be broken, but nothing obvious that I can see. Mildly amusing that you tie up your elephant allies at the end of the day Not sure why one would need a hitching post for an elephant either, pretty sure an elephant goes where it wants too.
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[spoiler=Koopa] Post here
Elf tribal land. Quite honestly, not all that exciting. Probably could've been an uncommon due to the counter limit. At rare, I'd expect a repeatable regeneration clause. Perhaps "1G, :symtap:, Regenerate target elf. Only use this ability if you control 3 or more elves."
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[spoiler=Krey] Post here
I feel like you're trying to do too much on one card. First off, your creatures shouldn't be able to attack or block, their in a shelter in the ground (or, it makes my horde of 1/1's a perfect blocking wall). Also, if I attack with everything but the creature equipped with this shelter, I can then tap the creature with the shelter to make all my attackers indestructable. The CC cost and equip cost should probably be more 4/4 or 5/5. Pick one, the coverted mana cost or the creature type, one or the other, both is just a mental bog to read. Also, darksteel items themselves are indestrucable, they don't grant it to other things (except for Darksteel Forge), go read flavor. Also (and I'm well aware that I am the pot calling the kettle black here), Darksteel is Mirriden in origin.
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[spoiler=Maokun] Post here
I like this, it's simple and concise. Lack of rarity makes this card hard to judge, but I'd say it would be fair at a rare level.
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[spoiler=Ryder052] Post here
This seems like it might be edging towards microtext due to the amount of flavor text. The flavor text itself seemed a little disconnected. "What does fruit have to do with the druid?" was the first thing that popped into my head. Aside from that, this seems to be a balanced card.
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[spoiler=Gerrard's Mom] Post here
I like it, but if you were aiming to model exactly from the flavor of the area, you missed the danger part. This card does have some potential to be broken (Scapeshift), but not too much. I might bump this up to mythic rarity due to the lack of a drawback.
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[spoiler=MichMash] Post here
Good concept, but it triggers off itself. I don't really think this needs to be a tribal artifact, but as it is worded currently, you could've just written, "Whenever...Use this ability at any time you could use an instant."
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[spoiler=Umi_no_Samui]
No card to crit.
Thus. FALCON PUNCH!!!11!!1one
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[spoiler=Favorites, I pick them]
1) Maokun
2) Gerrard's Mom
3) Koopa
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I choose these three based off of simplicity, synergy with avatar and several other factors (one of which may have been my own amusement).
Oh yes, I'd like to apologize for not providing a render or cleaning up my final entry any, I haven't had steady internet access for the psat three days and won't until Wednesday at the earliest.
The heat is unbearable from the lava pools that aren't even anywhere near you, you're likely to die from being exposed too long. Furthermore, the currents of the lava rivers could at any moment change and simply engulf you're camp.
Hmmm...do ninjas even need rest? In any case:
Shinobi Outpost
Land (U)
~ enters the battlefield tapped.
:symtap:: Add or to your mana pool. UB, :symtap::Return target creature you control to its owner's hand. That player then discards a card. There's a reason ninja are never surprised.
Survival Kunai
Artifact - Equipment
Equipped creature gets +1/+1 and ":symtap:: Return this creature to its owner's hand."
Equip
Shielding Cloak
Artifact - Equipment
Equipped creature has ":symtap:: Prevent all damage that would be dealt to this creature." UU: Attach Healer's ~ to target creature you control.
Equip
Mattock of the Eons
Artifact - Equipment
Equipped creature gets +3/+3.
When the equipped creature deals combat damage, destroy all lands.
Whenever ~ is equipped to a creature, destroy target land.
Equip
Next: Something that is on fire and shoots lightning bolts.
Dagoth Ur RRRRR
Lengendary Creature - Wizard Avatar
When ~ enters the battlefield, it deals X damage to you where X is the number of mountains you control.
At the beginning of your precombat main phase, add one to your mana pool for each mountain you control.
2/3
Radha's Delicious Apples x
Artifact
Radha's Delicious Apples enters the battlefield with X charge counters. t, Remove a charge counter from ~: Put a Fruit counter on target creature (fruity creatures may block if they have more than ten fruit counters as and if
Zzapper - :symur::symur:
Instant (R)
Destroy target permanent with a Z in its name. I'm the Z zapper. I zap Z's. I really don't like Z's. I just don't. I mean, who needs them? Z's. pfffft.
I'd like to just say to a couple of people reviewing my cards, thank you for your imput, I really do value it, that Ninjitsu meshes quite well with the ally theme because when you use the Ninjutsu ability, it triggers all the ally abilities. I've seen a couple people either miss this connection, or are confused about how these two things interact, but it does work like this...I think...XP
Recast 2BG (When you cast a spell with the same name as this card, you may pay the recast cost. If you do, cast this without paying its mana cost.)
I'm almost sure I have the wording correct, I think the last sentence needs a little bit of help here
Power of Extinction BG
Instant (U)
Target creature gets +X/+X until end of turn where X is the number of cards in all graveyards. Destroy that creature at the beginning of the next end step.
Recast 2BG (When you cast a spell with the same name as this card from your hand, you may cast this card from your graveyard for its recast cost.)
[spoiler=Critical Hit Region is the Abdomen]
[spoiler=Rocket_Powered_Turbo_Slug]
Post here
I like it. Has some potential to be broken, but nothing obvious that I can see. Mildly amusing that you tie up your elephant allies at the end of the day
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[spoiler=Koopa]
Post here
Elf tribal land. Quite honestly, not all that exciting. Probably could've been an uncommon due to the counter limit. At rare, I'd expect a repeatable regeneration clause. Perhaps "1G, :symtap:, Regenerate target elf. Only use this ability if you control 3 or more elves."
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[spoiler=Krey]
Post here
I feel like you're trying to do too much on one card. First off, your creatures shouldn't be able to attack or block, their in a shelter in the ground (or, it makes my horde of 1/1's a perfect blocking wall). Also, if I attack with everything but the creature equipped with this shelter, I can then tap the creature with the shelter to make all my attackers indestructable. The CC cost and equip cost should probably be more 4/4 or 5/5. Pick one, the coverted mana cost or the creature type, one or the other, both is just a mental bog to read. Also, darksteel items themselves are indestrucable, they don't grant it to other things (except for Darksteel Forge), go read flavor. Also (and I'm well aware that I am the pot calling the kettle black here), Darksteel is Mirriden in origin.
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[spoiler=Maokun]
Post here
I like this, it's simple and concise. Lack of rarity makes this card hard to judge, but I'd say it would be fair at a rare level.
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[spoiler=Ryder052]
Post here
This seems like it might be edging towards microtext due to the amount of flavor text. The flavor text itself seemed a little disconnected. "What does fruit have to do with the druid?" was the first thing that popped into my head. Aside from that, this seems to be a balanced card.
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[spoiler=Gerrard's Mom]
Post here
I like it, but if you were aiming to model exactly from the flavor of the area, you missed the danger part. This card does have some potential to be broken (Scapeshift), but not too much. I might bump this up to mythic rarity due to the lack of a drawback.
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[spoiler=MichMash]
Post here
Good concept, but it triggers off itself. I don't really think this needs to be a tribal artifact, but as it is worded currently, you could've just written, "Whenever...Use this ability at any time you could use an instant."
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[spoiler=Umi_no_Samui]
No card to crit.
Thus.
FALCON PUNCH!!!11!!1one
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[spoiler=Favorites, I pick them]
1) Maokun
2) Gerrard's Mom
3) Koopa
[/spoiler]
I choose these three based off of simplicity, synergy with avatar and several other factors (one of which may have been my own amusement).
Oh yes, I'd like to apologize for not providing a render or cleaning up my final entry any, I haven't had steady internet access for the psat three days and won't until Wednesday at the earliest.
The heat is unbearable from the lava pools that aren't even anywhere near you, you're likely to die from being exposed too long. Furthermore, the currents of the lava rivers could at any moment change and simply engulf you're camp.
Hmmm...do ninjas even need rest? In any case:
Shinobi Outpost
Land (U)
~ enters the battlefield tapped.
:symtap:: Add
UB, :symtap::Return target creature you control to its owner's hand. That player then discards a card.
There's a reason ninja are never surprised.
Survival Kunai
Artifact - Equipment
Equipped creature gets +1/+1 and ":symtap:: Return this creature to its owner's hand."
Equip
Shielding Cloak
Artifact - Equipment
Equipped creature has ":symtap:: Prevent all damage that would be dealt to this creature."
UU: Attach Healer's ~ to target creature you control.
Equip
Artifact - Equipment
Equipped creature gets +3/+3.
When the equipped creature deals combat damage, destroy all lands.
Whenever ~ is equipped to a creature, destroy target land.
Equip
Next: Something that is on fire and shoots lightning bolts.
The other just fixes the colors.
Artifact - Equipment
Equipped creature's activated abilities cost
Equip
I want...a pocket sized nuke...
Lengendary Creature - Wizard Avatar
When ~ enters the battlefield, it deals X damage to you where X is the number of mountains you control.
At the beginning of your precombat main phase, add one
2/3
Next: Micky Mouse
Artifact
Radha's Delicious Apples enters the battlefield with X charge counters.
t, Remove a charge counter from ~: Put a Fruit counter on target creature (fruity creatures may block if they have more than ten fruit counters
asand ifCreature - Elemental
Haste, flying, vigilance
When ~ enters the battlefield, you may tap target creature.
3/3
I was lucky, I got mine in before my internet went down. Is your ISP comcast perchance?
Good luck to everyone! This was a fun round!
Love it! Thanks!
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Hmmmmm....
And for everyone missing the blue element of Oboro's Exile, well:
Oboro Envoy
Bewilder
Constricting Tendrils
Disorient
Dizzy Spell
Fleeting Distraction
Morphling
To name a few. -X/-0 is a common enough blue theme for this card to be blue.
Creature - Human Knight
First Strike, vigilance, haste
2/2
Creature - Human
Haste, trample
If ~ would deal damage to a player, it deals twice that damage instead.
3/2
Lassie