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Leech (Whenever this creature would deal damage to a player, that player instead discards that many cards and this creature's controller draws that many cards.)
Is this the most succinct way of wording this? Does this even work the way I'd hoped?
Alright, does anyone need any more time to fiddle with their design? If not, then when I go to bed tonight (around 1 or 2 am, EST) I'll unleash the floodgate of critiques. Pipe up!
OK, Jenesis, the reading of Burn the Hourglass was "deals 3 damage to each player and each permanent." By what you have said, that seems to imply that Jace wouldn't have taken damage from Burn the Hourglass, but instead only would take damage from his controller redirecting the three player damage to him. Wouldn't Burn the Hourglass have dealt Jace damage as well? Or can you only deal damage to planeswalkers via targeting a player and redirecting? Or am I touching on some unexplored ground?
Burn the Hourglass3RR
Sorcery (M)
Burn the Hourglass deals 3 damage to each player and each permanent. Remove all counters from each permanent that was dealt damage this way. If a creature dealt damage this way was sent to the graveyard this turn, exile it instead.
Alright, it's an hour and ten past 11:16 on 2/1/2011, I'll make the shorter list. The People who AREN'T receiving the bonus points:
Charlie (Amplify)
And PsiJet, you can stop worrying about adding the render link. I would want people to be able to make simple changes after the deadline like adding renders and fixing typos.
Well, the Choleric and Melancholic teams are fully submitted, the Phlegmatic Team has 1 missing submission and 1 typo (I agree with Rudyard here Goblin, you really should give your creature a P/T), and the Sanguine team has 1 missing submission and 1 placeholder.
Thank you for your suggestion Crazy Matt. If you have any more, I would ask that you PM them to me. I'm done with college and am looking for work, and in the mean time, the CCL has my full an undivided attention.
One thing I can say is that it should AT LEAST read "If you control ANOTHER spell on the stack, EFFECT." That way, they don't always trigger off themselves. Unless that was the intent.
Cloudshape Titan2GWU
Creature - Shapeshifter
Flying, Changeling
Champion a creature with flying (When this enters the battlefield, sacrifice it unless you exile another creature with flying you control. When this leaves the battlefield, that card returns to the battlefield.)
Cloudshape Titan can only block creatures with flying.
6/6
Well, Gerrard's Mom, I think its safe to say that the extra points will motivate people to post quicker. I'll give a full report at the end of the month, but suffice to say, I'm two days ahead of schedule and have 24 people already.
The Sanguine Team
Charlie
DeusofCalamity
The Choleric Team
Monkey Playing MTG
Rimeshade
Ryder052
The Melancholic Team
Koopa
Krey
The Phlegmatic Team
Asrama
Jimmy Groove
Rudyard
Remember, pipe up if you think I've screwed up.
Is this the most succinct way of wording this? Does this even work the way I'd hoped?
Burn the Hourglass 3RR
Sorcery (M)
Burn the Hourglass deals 3 damage to each player and each permanent. Remove all counters from each permanent that was dealt damage this way. If a creature dealt damage this way was sent to the graveyard this turn, exile it instead.
OK, on the battlefield are a Tumble Magnet with 3 charge counters on it, a Jace Beleren with 5 loyalty counters on it, a Scute Mob with 4 +1/+1 counters on it, a Morselhoarder with 2 -1/-1 counters on it, and a Baneslayer Angel.
My question is, what stays on the battlefield and how many counters do those things have left on them?
Charlie (Amplify)
And PsiJet, you can stop worrying about adding the render link. I would want people to be able to make simple changes after the deadline like adding renders and fixing typos.
Things seem to be moving along rather swimmingly.
Cloudshape Titan 2GWU
Creature - Shapeshifter
Flying, Changeling
Champion a creature with flying (When this enters the battlefield, sacrifice it unless you exile another creature with flying you control. When this leaves the battlefield, that card returns to the battlefield.)
Cloudshape Titan can only block creatures with flying.
6/6