The transformed side sounds legendary. A consideration, perhaps?
Also, its a 5/3 unblockable. It wants to attack. Maybe deathtouch wouldn't be the best idea- when will you use it? And if you were going for that oddness, to call it out, wouldn't it be better to give it provoke instead?
Edit:
I think that those should be when clauses, not ifs; not sure on that. For example, "When a player has more than 5 poison counters, remove all poison counters from all players, and flip ~."
Lastly, if this is a parody of Ma-Ro, Wyrdling should leave the poison counters on- he didn't want to make another leeches, after all.
Daybreak Ranger was my MVP. Everytime he came out, he sniped all of their evasive creatures. Garruk was a close followup, giving me a swarm, and once getting me through for the win. Never flipped him though. The other rares I got were Charmbreaker Devils and Bloodgift Demon, and in my prize pack I opened a Stony Silence.
Who am I?
I am the sun, raised and set, born and died.
I am rebirth, trial by fire, a new beginning.
I rise from the ashes, ever stronger.
The first time I died, I was fourteen,
Still a child, barely born.
I was pushed down a staircase for being gay.
I stayed dead for almost a year.
The second time, I killed myself.
I sealed myself off. I felt only anger.
I stayed dead for a miserable summer,
storms broke, and the sun stayed far away.
The third time, I was used.
I was a sacrifice to bring happiness and well-being.
It worked.
I guttered out to nothingness.
She flared to life.
What will the fourth time be?
As long as there is a fire in my eyes
I will fight. I will not go quietly.
I don’t want to be a phoenix.
I want to live.
It's right up there with Deathtouch, First Strike, Flying, etc...
Keyword abilities ≠ Ability words. Funny, I know.
Quote from M:TG Comp Rules »
206.2c An ability word appears in italics at the beginning of some abilities on cards. Ability words
are similar to keywords in that they tie together cards that have similar functionality, but they have no special rules meaning and no individual entries in the Comprehensive Rules. The ability
words are channel, chroma, domain, grandeur, hellbent, imprint, join forces, kinship, landfall,
metalcraft, radiance, sweep, and threshold.
So I dunno.
Edit: The post above me clarifies better. That's a shame though- would be nice if you could search for ability words. Might be too parasitic though.
Perhaps: "Your opponent skips the first Untap Step of each of their turns. At the beginning of enchanted player's second main phase each turn, that player gets an additional untap step after this step."
Something like that? Wording being cobbled from the cards that skip steps and Paradox Haze.
Why doesn't Fury-Born Hellkite have flying? It's a dragon, and there's a reason they're called hellkites. I think he may be too swingy.
Celestial Rider seems alright, though immune to just about all spot removal.
Storm Harbinger seems fine.
Why is Windbreaker Mammoth a 6/6? It breaks the cycle. Also, change the name- as it is, well.. what's breaking wind? Unless that's how it kills everything with flying.
Scion of the Grave.. Hmm. I dunno. Comparing to Reya, seems fine.
Also, its a 5/3 unblockable. It wants to attack. Maybe deathtouch wouldn't be the best idea- when will you use it? And if you were going for that oddness, to call it out, wouldn't it be better to give it provoke instead?
Edit:
I think that those should be when clauses, not ifs; not sure on that. For example, "When a player has more than 5 poison counters, remove all poison counters from all players, and flip ~."
Lastly, if this is a parody of Ma-Ro, Wyrdling should leave the poison counters on- he didn't want to make another leeches, after all.
It does let you stack your next three draws, though.
1 Isolated Chapel
1 Clifftop Retreat
2 Ghost Quarter
7 Forest
5 Plains
1 Mountain
Creatures
2 Voiceless Spirit
1 Daybreak Ranger
1 Avacyn's Pilgrim
1 Angelic Overseer
1 Selfless Cathar
1 Essence of the Wild
1 Unruly Mob
1 Grizzled Outcasts
1 Chapel Geist
1 Fiend Hunter
1 Spare from Evil
1 Smite the Monstrous
1 Travel Preparations
1 Geistflame
1 Moment of Heroism
1 Unburial Rites
1 Moonmist
1 Spider Spawning
1 Cobbled Wings
1 Blazing Torch
1 Traveler's Amulet
1 Garruk Relentless
Daybreak Ranger was my MVP. Everytime he came out, he sniped all of their evasive creatures. Garruk was a close followup, giving me a swarm, and once getting me through for the win. Never flipped him though. The other rares I got were Charmbreaker Devils and Bloodgift Demon, and in my prize pack I opened a Stony Silence.
And Caw-Blade for that matter. And misstep is only legal in standard, modern, and vintage? Or was it already banned in modern?
Jeez. Lotta bannings of late.
I am the sun, raised and set, born and died.
I am rebirth, trial by fire, a new beginning.
I rise from the ashes, ever stronger.
The first time I died, I was fourteen,
Still a child, barely born.
I was pushed down a staircase for being gay.
I stayed dead for almost a year.
The second time, I killed myself.
I sealed myself off. I felt only anger.
I stayed dead for a miserable summer,
storms broke, and the sun stayed far away.
The third time, I was used.
I was a sacrifice to bring happiness and well-being.
It worked.
I guttered out to nothingness.
She flared to life.
What will the fourth time be?
As long as there is a fire in my eyes
I will fight. I will not go quietly.
I don’t want to be a phoenix.
I want to live.
Keyword abilities ≠ Ability words. Funny, I know.
So I dunno.
Edit: The post above me clarifies better. That's a shame though- would be nice if you could search for ability words. Might be too parasitic though.
Something like that? Wording being cobbled from the cards that skip steps and Paradox Haze.
Celestial Rider seems alright, though immune to just about all spot removal.
Storm Harbinger seems fine.
Why is Windbreaker Mammoth a 6/6? It breaks the cycle. Also, change the name- as it is, well.. what's breaking wind? Unless that's how it kills everything with flying.
Scion of the Grave.. Hmm. I dunno. Comparing to Reya, seems fine.
That kills you before you can win, though.