Mix Master Mikaeus: Watcher of the Veil - Basic, but solid.
scrad_the_wanderer: Lightning Dancer - I'd have to see it in action before calling it not annoying.
doomfish: Little Boy - Speaking of annoying...
FreshMeat: Venomous Roach - Did you intend this to be immune to destruction effects, or just small packets of damage? Because if it's the latter, you need a new template.
PsyOp: Goblin Pest - Oh, the combo potential...
Figurative: Jace's Golem - Sorry, can't get past the flavor WTF of a nonartifact golem.
IcariiFA: Unerring Fist - A bit Combo Platter for my tastes.
SelesnyaNewLife: Timeweaver's Pact - I don't see the point in a pact version of time walk.
bravelion83: Peace Treaty - If you're going to submit a card strictly worse (except in multiplayer) to an existing obscure card, don't bring attention to the existing card.
Jimmy Groove: Peddler of Ignorance - Brilliant.
doomfish: Impatient Fury - I don't get why it's modal.
Jimmy Groove: Prescient Executioner - Brilliant concept, nice execution.
bravelion83: Lontikos, Meletian Oracle - I love this card.
SelesnyaNewLife: Burst from Nothing - Would be the best card of the round if it weren't so often a dead card.
Piar: Necroform - Overcosted.
willows: Opening Twelve Black Gates - It should have a clause keeping it from trying to put an instant or sorcery onto the battlefield. I skimmed over one word that made my original critique invalid. So, uh, nice card.
drewdagreek: Kaimenari of the Tainted Night - I'd begin the last ability "If Kaimenari of the Tainted Night is your commander..."
Paradox Feast1UB
Enchantment (R)
Whenever a uniqueness rule causes a permanent you control to leave the battlefield, put a +1/+1 counter on each legendary creature you control, a charge counter on each noncreature legendary permanent you control, and a loyalty counter on each planeswalker you control.
Motion Elemental1RR
Creature - Elemental (R)
At the beginning of your upkeep, target noncreature artifact you control becomes a creature with power and toughness each equal to its converted casting cost and “At the beginning of next end step, sacrifice this creature.”
At the beginning of your upkeep, if you do not control any noncreature artifacts, sacrifice Motion Elemental.
2/2
Practice Target4
Artifact Creature - Construct (U)
Defender
Whenever Practice Target blocks a creature, put a +1/+1 counter on that creature.
Tap another creature you control: That creature fights Practice Target, then put a +1/+1 counter on that creature.
0/8
bravelion83: Otherworldly Travel - Nice.
IcariiFA: Battle of Honor - A poor man's Overrun, but Overrun's powerful enough that it's not a bad thing.
FreshMeat: Bloodpit of Ruin - I hope you forgot an "until end of turn" in the second ability.
RaikouRider: Whispers from Beyond - I don't trust a one-drop hard tutor, even with suspend 4 slowing it down.
willows: Return to the Garden - I can't get my head around why you'd play this.
2nd) IcariiFA
1st) Jimmy Groove
Sorcery (R)
Destroy all creatures.
Flashback 5BB (You may cast this card from your graveyard for its flashback cost. Then exile it.)
scrad_the_wanderer: Lightning Dancer - I'd have to see it in action before calling it not annoying.
doomfish: Little Boy - Speaking of annoying...
FreshMeat: Venomous Roach - Did you intend this to be immune to destruction effects, or just small packets of damage? Because if it's the latter, you need a new template.
PsyOp: Goblin Pest - Oh, the combo potential...
Figurative: Jace's Golem - Sorry, can't get past the flavor WTF of a nonartifact golem.
2nd) Mix Master Mikaeus
1st) PsyOp
Creature - Spirit (U)
Flying
If Shy Geist is the target of of a spell or ability, return Shy Geist to your hand.
2/1
Flatline: Contari's Mint - Yes, that is exactly what a Silver token would do if there was such a thing.
doomfish: Mindconductor - I do like me some "is the target of a spell or ability" triggers.
Mix Master Mikaeus: Neuron Jacker - Would be more interesting with a smaller P/T boost.
FreshMeat: Vessel of Tainted Oil - Multiple clever interactions between the two abilities.
scrad_the_wanderer: Guildmight Spire - I'm only about 80% sure the last ability works within the rules.
2.) doomfish
1.) FreshMeat
Artifact (R)
T: Add one mana of any color to your mana pool. Target opponent gains control of Roaming Mox.
SelesnyaNewLife: Timeweaver's Pact - I don't see the point in a pact version of time walk.
bravelion83: Peace Treaty - If you're going to submit a card strictly worse (except in multiplayer) to an existing obscure card, don't bring attention to the existing card.
Jimmy Groove: Peddler of Ignorance - Brilliant.
doomfish: Impatient Fury - I don't get why it's modal.
Ninja Caterpie: Arbiter's Decree - Looks fun.
2.) Ninja Caterpie
1.) Jimmy Groove
Creature - Zombie Shaman (M)
Skip your draw step.
T, Pay X life: Draw X cards.
0/3
bravelion83: Lontikos, Meletian Oracle - I love this card.
SelesnyaNewLife: Burst from Nothing - Would be the best card of the round if it weren't so often a dead card.
Piar: Necroform - Overcosted.
willows: Opening Twelve Black Gates -
It should have a clause keeping it from trying to put an instant or sorcery onto the battlefield.I skimmed over one word that made my original critique invalid. So, uh, nice card.drewdagreek: Kaimenari of the Tainted Night - I'd begin the last ability "If Kaimenari of the Tainted Night is your commander..."
2.) Jimmy Groove
1.) bravelion83
Sorcery (C)
Rainbow Axe deals 2 damage to target player for each color of mana spent to play Rainbow Axe.
Altaurus321: Enlight - Clever and flavorful.
Ninja Caterpie: Walker's Aide - Very flavorful.
IcariiFA: Unbreakable Alliance - You... don't get how powerful absorb is, do you?
PsyOp: Axe of the Predator - Yes, that is what Garruk's axe would look like as a card.
Piar: Hero's Boon - Ninja Caterpie already submitted this effect at a more appropriate casting cost.
2.) Altaurus321
1.) PsyOp
Enchantment (R)
Whenever a uniqueness rule causes a permanent you control to leave the battlefield, put a +1/+1 counter on each legendary creature you control, a charge counter on each noncreature legendary permanent you control, and a loyalty counter on each planeswalker you control.
Creature - Elemental (R)
At the beginning of your upkeep, target noncreature artifact you control becomes a creature with power and toughness each equal to its converted casting cost and “At the beginning of next end step, sacrifice this creature.”
At the beginning of your upkeep, if you do not control any noncreature artifacts, sacrifice Motion Elemental.
2/2
Next: Old Fogey, dressed like 90's Kid from Atop the Fourth Wall and using a skateboard as a walking stick.
Artifact Creature - Construct (U)
Defender
Whenever Practice Target blocks a creature, put a +1/+1 counter on that creature.
Tap another creature you control: That creature fights Practice Target, then put a +1/+1 counter on that creature.
0/8