Jhoira, Time Artificer 1UR
Legendary Planeswlaker - Jhoira (M)
+1: Create two 1/2 red warrior creature token with Vanishing 2
0: Remove a time counter from a suspended card or a permanent you control, then put a loyalty counter on Jhoira equals to the remaining time counters on that card or permanent.
-1: Put X time counters on target face up exile nonland card you own. If it doesn’t have suspend, it gains suspend. X is the number of loyalty counter on Jhoira
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Yria ThiefWU
Creature - Fox Rogue (U)
Prowess, Skulk (This creature can’t be blocked by creatures with greater power.)
Whenever Yria Thief deal combat damage to a player you may draw a card. Underestimating is the last thing you want.
0/2
Side A (White) Zesperia, Fate Defier1WW
Legendary Creature - Human Lord (R)
First strike, Lifelink, Vigilance
Partner (You can have two commanders if both have partner.)
When Zesperia enters the battlefield if you played three or more times from your command zone you may transform it.
3/2
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Side B (Black) Zesperia Trascended
Legendary Creature - Angel (R)
Deathtouch, Flying
Whenever a creature dealt damage by Zesperia Trascended this turn dies, it’s controller lose life equal to toughness of that creature.
5/5
Gear Crafting 2
Artifact - Equipment (U)
Whenever equipped creature deals combat damage, create a colorless Gear artifact token with “Sacrifice X Gears: Return target artifact with converted mana cost less than X from your graveyard to the battlefield”
Equip 2
Angelus, Who Never Gone4WWW
Legendary Creature - Dragon Beast (M)
Flying, First Strike
Angelus can block any number of creatures.
When Angelus dies, you may exile it with X plus one time counters on it, and it gains Suspend. X is the number of creatures blocked by Angelus this turn.
4/4
Split Growing 2UG
Enchantment (R)
Whenever a Ooze creature you control dies, create X X/X green Ooze creature tokens. Where X is half power of that creature rounded down.
Blinded by the Light2W
Sorcery - (R)
Until your next turn, target creature can't attack or block and its activated abilities can't be activated. Exile Blinded by the Light with two time counters on it.
Suspend 2 —W (Rather than cast this card from your hand, you may pay W and exile it with two time counters on it. At the beginning of your upkeep, remove a time counter. When the last is removed, cast it without paying its mana cost.)
Entangle 2W
Enchantment (U)
At the beginning of your upkeep, target creature can attack or block until your next turn. Then if an Albus planeswalker is on the battlefield, you target an additional creature.
Femeref Griot WG
Creature - Human Cleric (U)
Enchantment spells you cast cost 1 mana less to cast. It is said that a griot can read ancient stories in the sun beams and in the flight of birds, and can listen to the ancient incantations of the rustling leaves and the rushing rivers
2/2
Outwordly Guardian 1WU
Creature - Illusion (Rare)
You may cast Outwordly Guardian from exile.
Exile Outwordly from your graveyard or your hand: Prevent all damage that would be dealt to target legendary creature or planeswalker you control.
3/3
Sinergica, I see potential to play in many decks of edh, part of the challenge was that the card was uncomun points less (3)
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Conclave Miscreant 2UB
Creature - Faerie Rogue (U)
Flash
Flying
When Conclave Miscreant enters the battlefield, target creature gets -1/-1 until end of turn. Xyli has taught me new tricks she learned from outside the Conclave.
2/2
Very weak, I do not see synergy, versatile as a non-direct removal, if you lower the cost to UB it could be considered as a better card, since it does not impact much the state of the game.
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Gerula's Tormentor 2BR
Creature-Nightmare Horror (U)
Whenever you pay life, Gerula's Tormenter deal 1 damage to each opponent
Pay 2 life: Gerula's Tormentor gains lifelink until end of turn. Activate this ability only once each turn. You will become what you have fled. So run, and leave a trail of oil shining in your wake. -Azax-Azog
3/4
Woow, if your card is good, I have in mind several decks that could be rotated around it with either one or several cards. For its writing I consider that you forced the rarity to cover the requirements of the event because I would make it rare. (2)
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Mindblitz Familiar 1R (U)
Creature - Elemental Bird
Flying
Whenever you cast an instant or sorcery spell, put a +1/+1 counter on Mindblitz Familiar. "It feeds off my lightning and I have something to blast when I'm angry. We both win."
- Misandra, Ruin Maniac
Lots of flavor with the first entry, it could even be used with other decks of thematic storm.
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Collector of Breath WUB
Creature - Zombie Wizard(U)
Flying
Whenever Collector of Breath becomes tapped, target opponent loses 3 life and you gain 3 life. When Breaker's spark ignited and he pulled Innistrad into the Lost Shoud, he brought an era of three centuries of peace and tranquility. All it cost the citizens was a portion of their souls.
0/4
It feels that the objectives of the challenge are met, but it is still a broken card, since by itself it takes 3 lives without the need to attack (say an Opposition or Azami, Lady of Scrolls, to mention a few), it is outside the range of damages to remove the card.
Suppression Hawk 1(W/B)
Creature - Bird
Flying, deathtouch
Sacrifice Suppression Hawk: Attacking creatures don’t untap during their controller’s next untap step. “The pleasure of hunting is the pleasure of waiting.”
1/2
Koopa
In my oppinion the first ability is weak can improve if look two cards instead one, an the second may be a +1 instead 0. The main problem in your desing is the emblem, this create a loop, and make your opponent lose by library.
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Sheoldred
Very interesting, maybe replace the loyalty cost X for a constant negative valor
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Subject16
Clear an simple desing no risk
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Jimmy Groove
No comments
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Hemlock
I change the +2 with +1 and -1 with -2, considerate have access to enchantment how doublig season, parallel lives or similars
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netn10
No comments
Ancient Slates (2/W)(2/U)(2/B)(2/R)(2/G)
Legendary Artifact - Equipment (M)
At the beginning of your end step, if Ancient Slates is equipped, create a token thats a copy of Ancient Slates.
When Ancient Slates is put in a graveyard from the battlefield you may destroy target permanent.
Equip CC
Albus Corvus 1WB
Legendary Planeswalker - Albus (M)
[3]
+1: Create an artifact token named Bladetrap with “Sacrifice Bladetrap: Bladetrap deals 1 damage to each attacking creature.
0: Until your next turn, the next permanent deals damage to you or a permanent you control, his or her controller sacrifice it.
-X: Target player sacrifices a creature with converted mana cost X.
Name: Albus Corvus
Race: Kor
Gender: Male
Planar Origin: Zendikar
Main Job: Trapper
Midna, the ExiledWB
Legendary Creature - Twili Wizard (M)
Shadow (This creature can block or be blocked by only creatures with shadow.)
Whenever a creature you control deals combat damage to a player put the many loyalty counters on Midna, the Exiled.
If two or more creatures you control attacks transform Midna, the Exiled at the end of turn.
2/3
// Midna, Twilight Princess
Legendary Planeswalker - Midna (M)
-2: Each opponent lose 2 life. You gain life equal to the damage dealt this way.
-X: Up to X target creatures you control gets shadow until end of turn. Transform Midna at the end of turn.
-5: Search your library for a card and put that card into your hand. Then shuffle your library.
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Roen DeneithRGW
Legendary Planeswalker - Roen (MR)
+1: Roen Deneith 2 deals damage to target creature, it’s controller gain 2 life.
0: Until end of turn, Roen Deneith becomes a Human Soldier creature with indestructible and power and toughness each equal to the number of loyalty counters on it. It’s still a planeswalker.
-5: You get an emblem with “Whenever a source deals damage to Roen planeswalker put that many loyalty counters on it instead”.
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Legendary Planeswlaker - Jhoira (M)
+1: Create two 1/2 red warrior creature token with Vanishing 2
0: Remove a time counter from a suspended card or a permanent you control, then put a loyalty counter on Jhoira equals to the remaining time counters on that card or permanent.
-1: Put X time counters on target face up exile nonland card you own. If it doesn’t have suspend, it gains suspend. X is the number of loyalty counter on Jhoira
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Creature - Fox Rogue (U)
Prowess, Skulk (This creature can’t be blocked by creatures with greater power.)
Whenever Yria Thief deal combat damage to a player you may draw a card.
Underestimating is the last thing you want.
0/2
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Zesperia, Fate Defier 1WW
Legendary Creature - Human Lord (R)
First strike, Lifelink, Vigilance
Partner (You can have two commanders if both have partner.)
When Zesperia enters the battlefield if you played three or more times from your command zone you may transform it.
3/2
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Side B (Black)
Zesperia Trascended
Legendary Creature - Angel (R)
Deathtouch, Flying
Whenever a creature dealt damage by Zesperia Trascended this turn dies, it’s controller lose life equal to toughness of that creature.
5/5
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Side A
Side B
Artifact - Equipment (U)
Whenever equipped creature deals combat damage, create a colorless Gear artifact token with “Sacrifice X Gears: Return target artifact with converted mana cost less than X from your graveyard to the battlefield”
Equip 2
Legendary Creature - Dragon Beast (M)
Flying, First Strike
Angelus can block any number of creatures.
When Angelus dies, you may exile it with X plus one time counters on it, and it gains Suspend. X is the number of creatures blocked by Angelus this turn.
4/4
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Enchantment (R)
Whenever a Ooze creature you control dies, create X X/X green Ooze creature tokens. Where X is half power of that creature rounded down.
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Sorcery - (R)
Until your next turn, target creature can't attack or block and its activated abilities can't be activated. Exile Blinded by the Light with two time counters on it.
Suspend 2 —W (Rather than cast this card from your hand, you may pay W and exile it with two time counters on it. At the beginning of your upkeep, remove a time counter. When the last is removed, cast it without paying its mana cost.)
Enchantment (U)
At the beginning of your upkeep, target creature can attack or block until your next turn. Then if an Albus planeswalker is on the battlefield, you target an additional creature.
Creature - Human Cleric (U)
Enchantment spells you cast cost 1 mana less to cast.
It is said that a griot can read ancient stories in the sun beams and in the flight of birds, and can listen to the ancient incantations of the rustling leaves and the rushing rivers
2/2
Synergistic, but it's a less powerful Herald of the Pantheon
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Creature - Illusion (Rare)
You may cast Outwordly Guardian from exile.
Exile Outwordly from your graveyard or your hand: Prevent all damage that would be dealt to target legendary creature or planeswalker you control.
3/3
Sinergica, I see potential to play in many decks of edh, part of the challenge was that the card was uncomun points less (3)
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Creature - Faerie Rogue (U)
Flash
Flying
When Conclave Miscreant enters the battlefield, target creature gets -1/-1 until end of turn.
Xyli has taught me new tricks she learned from outside the Conclave.
2/2
Very weak, I do not see synergy, versatile as a non-direct removal, if you lower the cost to UB it could be considered as a better card, since it does not impact much the state of the game.
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Creature-Nightmare Horror (U)
Whenever you pay life, Gerula's Tormenter deal 1 damage to each opponent
Pay 2 life: Gerula's Tormentor gains lifelink until end of turn. Activate this ability only once each turn.
You will become what you have fled. So run, and leave a trail of oil shining in your wake. -Azax-Azog
3/4
Woow, if your card is good, I have in mind several decks that could be rotated around it with either one or several cards. For its writing I consider that you forced the rarity to cover the requirements of the event because I would make it rare. (2)
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Creature - Elemental Bird
Flying
Whenever you cast an instant or sorcery spell, put a +1/+1 counter on Mindblitz Familiar.
"It feeds off my lightning and I have something to blast when I'm angry. We both win."
- Misandra, Ruin Maniac
Lots of flavor with the first entry, it could even be used with other decks of thematic storm.
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Creature - Zombie Wizard(U)
Flying
Whenever Collector of Breath becomes tapped, target opponent loses 3 life and you gain 3 life.
When Breaker's spark ignited and he pulled Innistrad into the Lost Shoud, he brought an era of three centuries of peace and tranquility. All it cost the citizens was a portion of their souls.
0/4
It feels that the objectives of the challenge are met, but it is still a broken card, since by itself it takes 3 lives without the need to attack (say an Opposition or Azami, Lady of Scrolls, to mention a few), it is outside the range of damages to remove the card.
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2.- Sheoldred
3.- netn10
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2.- picnic_bomber
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Suppression Hawk 1(W/B)
Creature - Bird
Flying, deathtouch
Sacrifice Suppression Hawk: Attacking creatures don’t untap during their controller’s next untap step.
“The pleasure of hunting is the pleasure of waiting.”
1/2
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Koopa
In my oppinion the first ability is weak can improve if look two cards instead one, an the second may be a +1 instead 0. The main problem in your desing is the emblem, this create a loop, and make your opponent lose by library.
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Sheoldred
Very interesting, maybe replace the loyalty cost X for a constant negative valor
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Subject16
Clear an simple desing no risk
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Jimmy Groove
No comments
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Hemlock
I change the +2 with +1 and -1 with -2, considerate have access to enchantment how doublig season, parallel lives or similars
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netn10
No comments
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2.- Sheoldred
3.- Subject16
Legendary Artifact - Equipment (M)
At the beginning of your end step, if Ancient Slates is equipped, create a token thats a copy of Ancient Slates.
When Ancient Slates is put in a graveyard from the battlefield you may destroy target permanent.
Equip CC
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Albus Corvus 1WB
Legendary Planeswalker - Albus (M)
[3]
+1: Create an artifact token named Bladetrap with “Sacrifice Bladetrap: Bladetrap deals 1 damage to each attacking creature.
0: Until your next turn, the next permanent deals damage to you or a permanent you control, his or her controller sacrifice it.
-X: Target player sacrifices a creature with converted mana cost X.
Name: Albus Corvus
Race: Kor
Gender: Male
Planar Origin: Zendikar
Main Job: Trapper
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Legendary Creature - Twili Wizard (M)
Shadow (This creature can block or be blocked by only creatures with shadow.)
Whenever a creature you control deals combat damage to a player put the many loyalty counters on Midna, the Exiled.
If two or more creatures you control attacks transform Midna, the Exiled at the end of turn.
2/3
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Midna, Twilight Princess
Legendary Planeswalker - Midna (M)
-2: Each opponent lose 2 life. You gain life equal to the damage dealt this way.
-X: Up to X target creatures you control gets shadow until end of turn. Transform Midna at the end of turn.
-5: Search your library for a card and put that card into your hand. Then shuffle your library.
0
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Legendary Planeswalker - Roen (MR)
+1: Roen Deneith 2 deals damage to target creature, it’s controller gain 2 life.
0: Until end of turn, Roen Deneith becomes a Human Soldier creature with indestructible and power and toughness each equal to the number of loyalty counters on it. It’s still a planeswalker.
-5: You get an emblem with “Whenever a source deals damage to Roen planeswalker put that many loyalty counters on it instead”.
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