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Jul 17, 2016Posted in: Monthly Contests Archivebravelion83 — Throw the Stone
I feel bad that I really don't have anything to say about your card. I wouldn't mind having one in my Ezuri deck, though.
Voxzorz — Numot's Majesty
I don't see any white or blue in this card; land destruction and burn are both primarily, if not exclusively, red. Your render is missing its set code, language code, artist credit, and copyright notice (™ & © 2016 Wizards of the Coast).
doomfish — Influx Channeler
I wonder why (other than for challenge fulfillment) it has a red kicker cost but lets you pay black for other kickers.
Flatline — Ickspitter Asp
I like the name. X3 The low-key removal kicker is a nice touch, too.
theazurespirit — Shoot Down
Total flavor win. I love it.
netn10 — Style of the Three Winds
The copy ability should be a trigger, and thus start with “Whenever a spell targets enchanted creature…”. If the last ability keys off the kicker cost, why doesn't the card say that? and furthermore, why is there no way to keep track of the value of X (e.g. charge counters)?
1. Shoot Down
2. Ickspitter Asp
3. Throw the Stone
Jul 10, 2016Allez les Bleus !Posted in: Monthly Contests Archive
Illus. Reine Lavender
Fujihime, Queen of Hoenn 2RWU
Legendary Creature — Pokemon Wizard (M)
If Fujihime, Queen of Hoenn is your commander, all damage dealt by her is commander damage.
RWU, T: Fujihime deals damage to target player equal to the number of cards in his or her hand. If Fujihime was kicked, she deals double that damage instead.
Jul 10, 2016Halian posted a message on July CCL Round 1 — “Let’s Get Kicking!” — CRITIQUESPosted in: Monthly Contests Archivedrewdagreek — Oakspring Shepherd
I think eight mana for a total of 16 power is too low — consider decreasing the number of Saprolings kicked onto the battlefield. “…into play.” should be “…onto the battlefield.”.
willows — Galvanic Discharge
CMC 4 may be a bit high, depending on the as-fan of instants and sorceries — I want to say that you want to be dealing four damage at CMC 4?
void_nothing — Mirari's Appearance
Hey, that name sounds familiar… The kicker is overpriced with X = 1 (see: Abzan Ascendancy and Titania's Boon). I like the flavor text.
mirrodin71 — Angel of Redemption
I think it's underpriced with flying. So is the kicker; direct reanimation in white costs four mana (Breath of Life, False Defeat, Resurrection). Should be “…enters the battlefield, if it was kicked, return target creature…”. Wrong name/typeline/P/T and OCR area fonts; you should download the font pack from msetemps on SourceForge. Missing set and language codes, as well as the copyright notice (™ & © 2016 Wizards of the Coast). You are also missing an artist credit link in your post. Please rectify this immediately.
Zervintz — Fiery Ball
I think both mana costs may be too low, but I'm not sure.
AnonymousBadger — Planar Devastation
I think the kicker may be underpriced??? The token clause should read ‘…put a 1/1 colorless Eldrazi Scion creature token onto the battlefield for each creature destroyed this way. It has “Sacrifice this creature: Add C to your mana pool.”’
1. Mirari's Appearance
2. Fiery Ball
3. Angel of Redemption
Jul 6, 2016Halian posted a message on July CCL Round 1 — “Let’s Get Kicking!” — CRITIQUESPosted in: Monthly Contests Archive
Illus. Vitaliy Nikolaev
Mount Aran Honor Guard 3RW
Creature — Angel Knight (R)
Flash, flying, kicker RW
When Mount Aran Honor Guard enters the battlefield, if it was cast any time you couldn't have cast a sorcery and was kicked, it deals 2 damage to target creature an opponent controls. Creatures dealt damage this way can't be regenerated this turn. Tap that creature.
Aug 17, 2015Halian posted a message on Again looking for a designer in a closer time zoneSaid designer has said job. We need a new designer desperately now. ;-;Posted in: Custom Card Creation
Jul 24, 2015Halian posted a message on Again looking for a designer in a closer time zoneHey all. :3Posted in: Custom Card Creation
My custom block, Safiria, is proceeding apace, with about 210 cards made so far in the initial design phase. However, one of our main designers may be getting a job soon (and lives in Australia regardless, while the other two of us live in the USA), so I was hoping to be able to find another, US-based designer to help us with R&D. If one of y'all could help us out with that (and has Skype and ideally also Facebook), please let me know, because that would be awesome.
Mar 17, 2015Interrogate X [i](X: Target player reveals a random card from their hand. If it's a nonland card, put a +1/+1 counter on this creature.)[/i]Posted in: Custom Card Creation
Mindmeld [i](This creature enters the battlefield with a number of additional +1/+1 counters on it equal to the number of cards you?ve drawn this turn.)[/i]
Mindswarm [i](Whenever a player discards a card, creatures you control get +1/+1 until end of turn.)[/i]
[i]Concentration[/i] -- As long as you have less than four cards in hand, [effect].
Psycholocate. [i](Look at the top card of your library. If it' a land card, reveal it and put it into your hand. Otherwise, you may shuffle your library.)[/i][/list]
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Feb 19, 2015Hey all. I'm looking for a co-designer for "Mind" and "Body" that's located in UTC-5 to UTC-8, to alleviate the problems I've been having with nonmatching schedules with a co-designer in a more distant time zone.Posted in: Custom Card Creation
The block is a monocolor tribal block set in the distant plane of Safiria, where psionics are more common than magic almost to the latter's exclusion, and as a result this plane introduces psionic cards and various mechanics that care about them as well as the size and contents of a planeswalker's mind (hand). It also introduces the safir, a race of blue-skinned, four-armed psionic elflike beings; and the dreamweavers, a race of giant sapient psionic spiders. Both of them are native to the plane, and currently locked in a cold war with each other as well as Safiria's angels, dragons, and nagas.
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