Took this to a PTQ on Saturday, my first time playing the deck so I wasn't too used to the sb and such, but I had a lot of games that I lost that were very winnable. Ill play around with pact of negation a bit and see how that goes.
I'm a big advocate of thunderous wrath as a one of in this deck. It's not likely you will draw it in your opening hand, and it's an amazing top deck. Maybe 2 at the most, but a second copy feels too clunky. Since we aren't drawing cards we also don't have to worry about drawing into it. It's worth playtesting I think, tell me what you guys think though.
I have quite a bit of store credit right now and I'll probably make this deck and see how I can tweak it after playtesting a bit. Gerry Thompson went undefeated against non-Jund decks at PTRTR using this deck. The thing I don't like about it is that a turn 1 thoughtseize against us usually means gg or our chances of winning are dramatically decreased. I think bitter blossom could be a big problem as well.
I play an angus mackenzie turbo fog deck but it's more of a multiplayer deck for fun. Idk if that's what you're looking for but it's my favorite deck to play hands down.
I like this deck a lot, and I could make suggestions like war priest of thune and frost titan but really i think you need better win conditions is all. I used to have a flicker deck for EDH and I found i could control very well but just could never win.
A fun card with mimeo (though IDK how good it would be here without too many creatures) is master biomancer. Make mimeo a copy of him with 6 counters? mmmhhhh ill play a 7/8 deathrite shaman
I play a mill deck for multiplayer and I have noticed a few all star cards that mill really fast. First off before you start milling a ton you need to make sure you don't mill to an eldrazi and have them reshuffle. Things like extract, tormod's crypt, leyline of the void, and jester's cap are a few options, the leyline is probably the best option, and combos with the helm for an instant win. Once you deal with that threat you need cards that mill very fast. mesmeric orb is the fastest i have seen. dreamborn muse, keening stone (which is probably way too mana intensive) are a few more.
I don't have time to list more or tell you what to take out but trepanation blade, although being flavorful and having cool art, it usually just very bad.
Good luck man, and good job playing mill, such a fun style IMO.
Also consider Oona as a general over circu, she is better.
Why is black in the list? seems like you could make it bant and throw in fog and rites of flourishing. Im looking to make modern fog also, how does it do in tournys?
Jor kadeen infect is interesting but I had a boros goodstuff aggro in mind, much like asimov's list. Aurelia would be the general because for anyone that cant counter her she becomes a huge problem and will probably win the game. But she still costs 6 which sucks. I think the deck would do well against other aggro though. boros reckoner is a badass afterall
I don't have time to list more or tell you what to take out but trepanation blade, although being flavorful and having cool art, it usually just very bad.
Good luck man, and good job playing mill, such a fun style IMO.
Also consider Oona as a general over circu, she is better.