MTG Salvation

I saw the card Yotian Dissident from Brother's War and liked it quite a lot and I want to build a deck around it.

The deck combines effects like adding +1/+1 tokens when artifacts are added, creating tokens when +1/+1 are added and so on.

Basically the idea is to create a small army of tokens fast together with a couple of strong artifact creatures.

What do you think of this deck? Do you have any recommendations for me on how to improve it?


https://www.topdecked.com/decks/generator/3af8e3da-fec9-4f74-b22c-61a1030c9910

I didn't look at your deck because I don't have to but consider the fun factor. I can tell you didn't.