I think you are more likely to get a quality response if you have your decklist visible in your original post, rather than a link to another website to view your deck. If you need help formatting, there's a handy link in my signature below that will help you with learning the formatting on this website.
Also, I just tried to use your link, and it took me an error page, so I'm afraid you didn't even paste the entire link.
I've used Marath, Will of the Wild a lot and would be happy to provide feedback once I can easily review your decklist.
Your list looks good! Marath is great because he (she?) is so versatile, so there can be many different builds. What you build depends on your preferences, play style, and card availability. I’ll mention some cards that I’ve really had a lot of luck with in my Marath deck, but I understand if these cards do not fit your preference, play style, or you might just not have access to them.
I will along with zendikar resurgent, im also getting rid of ravenous balmoth and maybe obsidian fireheart. They just dont help enough in the way i need them to, mostly balmoth since im not constantly spitting out beasts in my opinion
So i playtested the deck via proxies against a friend's commander deck and i won 2 times (3 if you want to count the misreading of a card) and it read quite well at least in a 1v1 commander match. So now im certain in buying the deck now ^-^
Marath is great for being a swiss army knife in your command zone.
To get more value of his ping ability, giving him deathtouch via Basilisk Collar, Nightshade peddler or similar means turns him into repeatable removal, while Keen Sense makes for a potent draw engine.
1x Marath, will of the wild
Creature (28)
1x Abzan Battle Priest
1x Abzan Falconer
1x Bellowing Aegisaur
1x Champion of Lambholt
1x Fertilid
1x Forgotten Ancient
1x Gahiji, Honored One
1x Garruk's Packleader
1x Grand Abolisher
1x Gyre Sage
1x Incubation Druid
1x Meglonoth
1x Mikaeus, the Lunarch
1x Obsidian Fireheart
1x Omnath, Locus of Rage
1x Rampaging Baloths
1x Ranging Raptors
1x Ravenous Baloth
1x Realm Razer
1x Shinewend
1x Siege Behemoth
1x Smokebraider
1x Spawnwrithe
1x Spellbreaker Behemoth
1x Sun Titan
1x Vastwood Hydra
1x Vigor
1x Wayfaring Temple
1x Blossoming Sands
1x Boros Garrison
1x Boros Guildgate
1x Contested Cliffs
1x Evolving Wilds
10x Forest
1x Gavony Township
1x Gruul Guildgate
1x Gruul Turf
1x Jungle Shrine
1x Kessig Wolf Run
1x Mistveil Plains
3x Mountain
1x Naya Panorama
1x Oran-Rief, the Vastwood
5x Plains
1x Reliquary Tower
1x Rugged Highlands
1x Selesnya Guildgate
1x Selesnya Sanctuary
1x Temple of the False God
1x Terramorphic Expanse
1x Wind-Scarred Crag
Instant (7)
1x Beast Within
1x Boros Charm
1x Krosan Grip
1x Naya Charm
1x Return to Dust
1x Solidarity of Heroes
1x Swords to Plowshares
1x Cathars' Crusade
1x Citadel Siege
1x Hardened Scales
1x Mayael's Aria
1x Oblivion Ring
1x Rhythm of the Wild
1x Smothering Tithe
1x True Conviction
1x Warstorm Surge
1x Wilderness Reclamation
Sorcery (9)
1x Circuitous Route
1x Collective Effort
1x Decimate
1x Fumigate
1x Harmonize
1x Hour of Revelation
1x Rishkar's Expertise
1x Selvala's Stampede
1x Vandalblast
Artifact (7)
1x Boros Signet
1x Bow of Nylea
1x Gruul Signet
1x Illusionist's Bracers
1x Selesnya Signet
1x Sol Ring
1x Swiftfoot Boots
This is my commander deck which i love but have yet to buy, i feel this deck isnt focused enough and would like y'all opinions on it
I think you are more likely to get a quality response if you have your decklist visible in your original post, rather than a link to another website to view your deck. If you need help formatting, there's a handy link in my signature below that will help you with learning the formatting on this website.
Also, I just tried to use your link, and it took me an error page, so I'm afraid you didn't even paste the entire link.
I've used Marath, Will of the Wild a lot and would be happy to provide feedback once I can easily review your decklist.
Currently Playing:
Multiplayer EDH Lists (click italics for a link to the thread!)
[Primer] Lord of Tresserhorn - Don't Tell Me What I Can't Do[Primer] Roon of the Hidden Realm - Rhino Blink
5 Color Tribal Guide (Slivers, Atogs, Allies, Spirits)
Also Playing (most decklists can be found on my profile)
MarathGeistKamahlGrenzoBolasThassaGitrog
PiratesZurVial Smasher&ThrasiosYennettJhoira(cEDH)Strix(Pauper)
Legacy: Maverick
Modern:
Melira PodRIP 1/19/15GWHatebearsCurrently Playing:
Multiplayer EDH Lists (click italics for a link to the thread!)
[Primer] Lord of Tresserhorn - Don't Tell Me What I Can't Do[Primer] Roon of the Hidden Realm - Rhino Blink
5 Color Tribal Guide (Slivers, Atogs, Allies, Spirits)
Also Playing (most decklists can be found on my profile)
MarathGeistKamahlGrenzoBolasThassaGitrog
PiratesZurVial Smasher&ThrasiosYennettJhoira(cEDH)Strix(Pauper)
Legacy: Maverick
Modern:
Melira PodRIP 1/19/15GWHatebearsFair enough. I'd at least add some more card draw to your deck, and Mentor of the Meek is a $0.50 card on TCG, might be worth considering.
Currently Playing:
Multiplayer EDH Lists (click italics for a link to the thread!)
[Primer] Lord of Tresserhorn - Don't Tell Me What I Can't Do[Primer] Roon of the Hidden Realm - Rhino Blink
5 Color Tribal Guide (Slivers, Atogs, Allies, Spirits)
Also Playing (most decklists can be found on my profile)
MarathGeistKamahlGrenzoBolasThassaGitrog
PiratesZurVial Smasher&ThrasiosYennettJhoira(cEDH)Strix(Pauper)
Legacy: Maverick
Modern:
Melira PodRIP 1/19/15GWHatebearsTo get more value of his ping ability, giving him deathtouch via Basilisk Collar, Nightshade peddler or similar means turns him into repeatable removal, while Keen Sense makes for a potent draw engine.
W(W/U)U Ephara - Flash & Taxes W(W/U)U || B(B/G)G Meren - Circle of Life B(B/G)G
RGW Marath - Ever shifting Wilds RGW || (U/R)C(W/B) Breya - Artificial Dominion (U/R)C(W/B)
UBR Becket Brass - take what you can, give nothing back UBR