Hmmmm... I'd actually want to say you should up the Ad Nauseum count up by one. It's pretty crucial that you draw into it if you want to burn through your health and pull out a Death's Shadow. That or some tutor of somesortoftutor you can use to find the Nauseum.
On the tombstalker note, recurring a Raven's Crime over and over again is really strong, especially with your high land count. Retrace it the first few turns to strip his hand, then play the tombstalker with your own pitched lands and you've got a strong early game threat.
On a more fun note, Bonds of Agony will hurt you and your opponent but also give you enough hurt to put out a good Death's Shadow. Be careful about counterspells though.
I just picked up a set for my old school B/R suicide deck...
I haven't play tested it yet, but I'll let you know (probably this weekend).
I don't remember the whole deck, but its old (and probably not great by today's standards, ~2000ish), but its fun...here's a partial deck list, if it'd be of any help (prolly not)
4 Death's Shadow
4 Tombstalker
Spells: 28
4 Dark Ritual
4 Hymn to Tourach
4 Sign in Blood
4 Thoughtseize
3 Snuff Out
3 Slaughter Pact
3 Night's Whisper
3 Ad Nauseam
11 Swamp
4 Bloodstained Mire
4 Cabal Coffers
4 Polluted Delta
1 Urborg, Tomb of Yawgmoth
Thanks to Darth Monkey and SGT_Chubbz at Damnation Studios for the sig and banner.
On the tombstalker note, recurring a Raven's Crime over and over again is really strong, especially with your high land count. Retrace it the first few turns to strip his hand, then play the tombstalker with your own pitched lands and you've got a strong early game threat.
On a more fun note, Bonds of Agony will hurt you and your opponent but also give you enough hurt to put out a good Death's Shadow. Be careful about counterspells though.
Fattycakes Zombie of Clan Limited
Actually I get pretty low with Ad, but I'd love to have 1 more. Raven also seems good, and takes care of extra Coffers.
I'm not sure what to drop, however, because everything seems so crucial D:
EDIT2:
-1 Snuff Out
+1 Ad
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Old school group, sometimes more beer than cards. Revised thru Tempest block (and a little of Urza), sorry if I don't know all the new cards
Ye' Olde Schoole Casual Decks: BUReanimate -- GRAggro -- BWPestilence -- G10-land Stompy -- GRElfball -- GWEnchantress -- RAnkh Sligh -- BDiscard -- MUC "Draw-go" -- BRSuicide -- UWSkies -- UHigh Tide Mill -- WWeenie -- UMutated Bombers -- URThe great land-toss -- UB Molasass
I haven't play tested it yet, but I'll let you know (probably this weekend).
I don't remember the whole deck, but its old (and probably not great by today's standards, ~2000ish), but its fun...here's a partial deck list, if it'd be of any help (prolly not)
Death's Shadow looks PHENOMENAL...wow!
4 Erg Raiders
4 Fledgling Djinn
3 Tar Pit Warriors
2 Circling Vultures
2 Kjeldoran Dead
4 Skittering Skirge
4 Blood Lust
4 Lightning Bolt
4 Incinerate
4 Terror
1 Necropotence
1 Vampiric Tutor
Just picked up 4 Vampire Lacerators (better than Carnophage, IMO), 4 Brute Force, 3 Unearth and 4 Quest for the gravelord (which might be good for you here?)...not sure what my new list will look like exactly.
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Old school group, sometimes more beer than cards. Revised thru Tempest block (and a little of Urza), sorry if I don't know all the new cards
Ye' Olde Schoole Casual Decks: BUReanimate -- GRAggro -- BWPestilence -- G10-land Stompy -- GRElfball -- GWEnchantress -- RAnkh Sligh -- BDiscard -- MUC "Draw-go" -- BRSuicide -- UWSkies -- UHigh Tide Mill -- WWeenie -- UMutated Bombers -- URThe great land-toss -- UB Molasass
But what do you guys think? I'd probably add Phage before him, but second opinions are good.
Also, at DR: I find Phage to be superior in here, because I generally don't get their life very low until I get 4-5 life :S
Duh *thwacks head*...of course :o.
PS. Forgive my ignorance, what's "Bob"
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EDIT: Oooh, not familiar with that card...pretty nice.
Old school group, sometimes more beer than cards. Revised thru Tempest block (and a little of Urza), sorry if I don't know all the new cards
Ye' Olde Schoole Casual Decks: BUReanimate -- GRAggro -- BWPestilence -- G10-land Stompy -- GRElfball -- GWEnchantress -- RAnkh Sligh -- BDiscard -- MUC "Draw-go" -- BRSuicide -- UWSkies -- UHigh Tide Mill -- WWeenie -- UMutated Bombers -- URThe great land-toss -- UB Molasass