Thinking about something like this... maybe switching the Jarad with Desecration Demon or trying to fit him in there somewhere at least. Should I put in the Whip instead of the Bow? I knowthe lands are not there is the only problem but aside from that fact which I am aware of is this deck viable? it has a pretty good curve and seems like it if it did curve out with any decency it would do well.
Grisly Salvage is something you should consider, move Heroes Downfall to the sb, or drop it down to 2of and drop jarad to make room. You may want to up your land to 22 or 23, and desecration d would definitely be a good target for scavenging, and discarding to Lotleth, drop Reaper of the Wilds. The Guildmage seems to be a waste of space and could be dropped to make room for other stuff, Experiment One is a really good option, and Kalonian Tusker yes it has two green in its cost, but 2 for a 3/3 not to mention scavenge with Varolz, but I guess that's really your call on how useful in your media the Guildmage is.
Corpsejack menace is the best possible 4 drop for the deck. Other good options are 2 desecration demons. Experiment one works well. Radkos cackler shouldbe considered. I had a similar deck that won a sdcc garruk at my old store
Corpsejack looks good on paper, but he usually is not that big of an impact. Here is something I came up with that might give you some ideas, I don't think the enchantment is necessary but you could sb it or md your call.
3 Korzada Guildmage
3 Lotleth Troll
2 Scavaging Ooze
4 Dred Mangler
4 Varolz, the scar striped
2 Jarad Glgari Lich Lord
3 Reaper of the Wilds
4 Abrupt Decay
4 Thoughtsieze
4 Heroes Downfall
Thinking about something like this... maybe switching the Jarad with Desecration Demon or trying to fit him in there somewhere at least. Should I put in the Whip instead of the Bow? I knowthe lands are not there is the only problem but aside from that fact which I am aware of is this deck viable? it has a pretty good curve and seems like it if it did curve out with any decency it would do well.
4 experiment one
4 radkos cackler
4 lotleth troll
3 valroz
4 scaveging ooze
4 corpsejack menace
2 desecration demon
3 mangler
2 deathrite shaman
2 abrupt decay
3 golgari charm
2 heroes downfall
4x Deathrite Shaman
4x Experiment One
2x Scavenging Ooze
3x Kalonian Tusker
4x Lotleth Troll
3x Varolz, the Scar-Striped
3x Dreg Mangler
2x Desecration Demon
2x Hero's Downfall
3x Thoughtseize
3x Abrupt Decay
4x Grisly Salvage
Land (23)
3x Golgari Guildgate
4x Overgrown Tomb
9x Forest
7x Swamp
Corpsejack looks good on paper, but he usually is not that big of an impact. Here is something I came up with that might give you some ideas, I don't think the enchantment is necessary but you could sb it or md your call.