From the looks of it, your deck is rather top heavy with only a bit of mana accel. This leaves you vulnerable in the early game as most of the creatures you can play early are not ones you want to throw before an attacker. Maybe get a full set of Llanowar Elves for now, or some Elvish Mystics or other such mana dork. Even 2-mana ones should work, because your threats cost 4+ mana anyway, so you can invest turn 2 to get to 4 mana on turn 3 just fine. 2-mana mana dorks are usually a bit sturdier and/or have other useful abilities. For example, a Druid of the Cowl accellerates your mana and is a good blocker early on.
Exploration doesn't do much for you especially as a 1-of, so I'd cut it. Once upon a Time is also essentially just a 2-mana cantrip. You'll get about he same effect by simply cutting the card and reducing your deck size to 60.
Your creature selection is also all over the place. For example, Primeval Titan plays in a totally different league than Colossal Dreadmaw. Try to put most of your meaty beaters in the 4-5 mana range with just a few at 6+ mana. Also, Thrashing Brontodon is a nice threat and answer, so you want more of that. Maybe get some creatures that make creatures fight, like Foe-razer Regent or Affectionate Indrik, to add more removal to your deck to deal with troublesome creatures, that your opponent is not committing to combat.
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Your deck list is still a quite jumbled, and could use some sorting. I usually only use three categories: "Lands", "Creatures", "Others". And sort the cards by converted mana cost within.
Hy this is my favourite deck which I play for fun with my family and was wandering if you could help me to improve it.
I am new to this site and I still need to learn how to appropriately format a deck. I hope it wont be too much trouble for this first time.
I appreciate any help or advice you can give me!
Exploration doesn't do much for you especially as a 1-of, so I'd cut it. Once upon a Time is also essentially just a 2-mana cantrip. You'll get about he same effect by simply cutting the card and reducing your deck size to 60.
Your creature selection is also all over the place. For example, Primeval Titan plays in a totally different league than Colossal Dreadmaw. Try to put most of your meaty beaters in the 4-5 mana range with just a few at 6+ mana. Also, Thrashing Brontodon is a nice threat and answer, so you want more of that. Maybe get some creatures that make creatures fight, like Foe-razer Regent or Affectionate Indrik, to add more removal to your deck to deal with troublesome creatures, that your opponent is not committing to combat.
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If you want to find out, how someone did a tag in their post, just hit the quote button and then examine it in the reply box. There are also the card, cards, deck, and mana tags above the reply window on the right side which insert the appropriate tags. Or simply type them yourself. That's what I do most of the time, because it's faster (for me, anyway).
Your deck list is still a quite jumbled, and could use some sorting. I usually only use three categories: "Lands", "Creatures", "Others". And sort the cards by converted mana cost within.
Former Rules Advisor
"Everything's better with pirates." - Lodge
(The Gamers: Dorkness Rising)
"Any sufficiently analyzed magic is indistinguishable from science."
(Girl Genius - Fairy Tale Theater Break - Cinderella, end of volume 8)
Former Rules Advisor
"Everything's better with pirates." - Lodge
(The Gamers: Dorkness Rising)
"Any sufficiently analyzed magic is indistinguishable from science."
(Girl Genius - Fairy Tale Theater Break - Cinderella, end of volume 8)