Her writing quality has gone downhill. There are many inexplainable problems in the narrative- some parts too slow, some parts too fast, others...with some obvious handwaving.
This would not bother me as much if it was produced by the creative team but Martha was hired For her story writing and I haven’t been very impressed lately
I told you guys that the Story being meh wasn't a function of the writers being terrible, trying to tell a story at the scale they are trying to tell it with the amount of space they are trying to tell it in will fail.
I largely agree with this. I definitely think Martha's been a massive improvement over what came before, but you can still see issues arising from the structure of the storytelling. They needed WAY more space to tell this Dominaria story right.
The structure has been the problem since well the 2 block cycles where they were trying to tell the same level of stories in 2/3 the space, and now they are going to be trying to do it in 1/3 the space.
Her writing quality has gone downhill. There are many inexplainable problems in the narrative- some parts too slow, some parts too fast, others...with some obvious handwaving.
This would not bother me as much if it was produced by the creative team but Martha was hired For her story writing and I haven’t been very impressed lately
I told you guys that the Story being meh wasn't a function of the writers being terrible, trying to tell a story at the scale they are trying to tell it with the amount of space they are trying to tell it in will fail.
Dragons of Legend, Lead by Scion of the UR-Dragon
The Gitrog Monster
Gonti, Lord of Luxury
Shogun Saskia
Hive World
Atraxa hates fun
Abzan
The structure has been the problem since well the 2 block cycles where they were trying to tell the same level of stories in 2/3 the space, and now they are going to be trying to do it in 1/3 the space.
Dragons of Legend, Lead by Scion of the UR-Dragon
The Gitrog Monster
Gonti, Lord of Luxury
Shogun Saskia
Hive World
Atraxa hates fun
Abzan
I told you guys that the Story being meh wasn't a function of the writers being terrible, trying to tell a story at the scale they are trying to tell it with the amount of space they are trying to tell it in will fail.
Dragons of Legend, Lead by Scion of the UR-Dragon
The Gitrog Monster
Gonti, Lord of Luxury
Shogun Saskia
Hive World
Atraxa hates fun
Abzan