Looks very good. But I'll suggest some very minor changes in wording as I read it:
2. Game Resources
Your Library (...) If you are forced to draw a card with zero cards in your library, you automatically lose the game.
I'd reword it as "If you try to draw a card but has zero cards in your library,..."
3. Cards
The Anatomy of a Card D - (...) In our case here, the card is a creature with a subtype Goblin Warrior. The card is a creature with the subtypes Goblin and Warrior
Land Generally speaking, when you use a land called tapping, it generates mana to be used to cast spells,
This reads like the land itself is called tapping, when you mean the action of using it is called tapping. Try something like "when you use (or "tap") a land, it generates..."
* For each of the other card types, you say that in order to cast that card you need to pay its mana cost. It is too repetitive, so you should just state it once, in the Spell entry before the card types.
5. Slinging Spells
Casting Spells ...selecting the part of the spell you are choosing (i.e., when an instant or sorcery says "Choose one --", or choosing the permanent you are trying to attach an Aura to.
You need to close the parenthesis: ...selecting the part of the spell you are choosing (i.e., when an instant or sorcery says "Choose one --"), or choosing the permanent you are trying to attach an Aura to.
Targeting
* Here (and probably in other entries in this part) you're ignoring that Aura spells are also targeted.
6. Playing a Game
Winning the Game
"...This is a very specific strategy for certain decks since the number of cards in the game that can cause a player to get a poison counter. If any player gets 10 or more poison counters, they lose the game."
This reads like there's something missing in the first sentence or between it and the second. Maybe "since the number of cards that can cause a player to get a poison counter is quite limited." or something to that effect.
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2. Game Resources
Your Library
(...) If you are forced to draw a card with zero cards in your library, you automatically lose the game.
I'd reword it as "If you try to draw a card but has zero cards in your library,..."
3. Cards
The Anatomy of a Card
D - (...) In our case here, the card is a creature with a subtype Goblin Warrior.
The card is a creature with the subtypes Goblin and Warrior
Land
Generally speaking, when you use a land called tapping, it generates mana to be used to cast spells,
This reads like the land itself is called tapping, when you mean the action of using it is called tapping. Try something like "when you use (or "tap") a land, it generates..."
* For each of the other card types, you say that in order to cast that card you need to pay its mana cost. It is too repetitive, so you should just state it once, in the Spell entry before the card types.
5. Slinging Spells
Casting Spells
...selecting the part of the spell you are choosing (i.e., when an instant or sorcery says "Choose one --", or choosing the permanent you are trying to attach an Aura to.
You need to close the parenthesis:
...selecting the part of the spell you are choosing (i.e., when an instant or sorcery says "Choose one --"), or choosing the permanent you are trying to attach an Aura to.
Targeting
* Here (and probably in other entries in this part) you're ignoring that Aura spells are also targeted.
6. Playing a Game
Winning the Game
"...This is a very specific strategy for certain decks since the number of cards in the game that can cause a player to get a poison counter. If any player gets 10 or more poison counters, they lose the game."
This reads like there's something missing in the first sentence or between it and the second. Maybe "since the number of cards that can cause a player to get a poison counter is quite limited." or something to that effect.