I wouldn't cut Faerie Conclave. I prefer it to Academy Ruins, Sea Gate Restoration, and Jiwari Disruption, as well as several other cards you are running.
You could skip Mimic to add the Hand. Sword of Truth and Justice seems like another good cut for it.
Overall good changes, but I'd keep Arcane Denial. It's still the only hard counter that costs 1U. Maybe cut Chart a Course or don't add Treasure Cruise instead?
I prefer Accorder Paladin to several cards you are running in white: Harmonious Archon, Finale of Glory, Secure the Wastes, Gideon of the Trials, Kjeldoran Outpost. It's a great aggro creature.
Meloku is good enough to stick around on its o wn, but it also combos well with Barrin. I like it more than Thing in the Ice, Sea-Dasher Octopus, Whirler Rogue, one of the Tezzerets, Chart a Course, and Deep Analysis.
I like Berserker more than Immolator, although there probably equal. My cut for Immolator would be Ghirapur Aether Grid or maybe Shrine of Burning Rage.
I always liked Lotleth Troll and Life // Death over Grim Flayer. I'd probably want Qasali Pridemage more than the other two Selesnya cards you are adding, but that would depend on how much artifacts and enchantments are tearing it up.
Those changes seem good, but I think I prefer Flamecaller. I still like Tombstalker but it really can't fit into most cubes these days. I think Doom Whisperer really sealed 'stalker's fate.
If you want to support the persist combo, I'd keep Clique and Melira. I think Darigaaz is better than Korvold as a general Jund card and I prefer Hellkite Overlord to both for supporting Natural Order/Sneak Attack/Eureka/reanimator.
I used to prefer Pridemage to Voice but since you run Knight of Autumn it's not necessary anymore.
You could skip Mimic to add the Hand. Sword of Truth and Justice seems like another good cut for it.
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I prefer Accorder Paladin to several cards you are running in white: Harmonious Archon, Finale of Glory, Secure the Wastes, Gideon of the Trials, Kjeldoran Outpost. It's a great aggro creature.
Meloku is good enough to stick around on its o wn, but it also combos well with Barrin. I like it more than Thing in the Ice, Sea-Dasher Octopus, Whirler Rogue, one of the Tezzerets, Chart a Course, and Deep Analysis.
I like Berserker more than Immolator, although there probably equal. My cut for Immolator would be Ghirapur Aether Grid or maybe Shrine of Burning Rage.
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Have you thought about finding room for Dance of the Dead?
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I used to prefer Pridemage to Voice but since you run Knight of Autumn it's not necessary anymore.
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