Deceitful LionWB
Creature - Lion (R)
When Deceitful Lion enters the battlefield each opponent reveals their hand.
When Deceitful Lion deals combat damage to a player you may name a card. That player reveals their hand. If the named card is in that player’s hand exile it. Proud it may be, but true it isn’t.
3/1
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Doombringer, I think Pray's a really interesting ability. Is it an alternate casting ability though, or is today's submission just missing a mana cost?
Why not simplify it to a Saytr Wayfinder ability from hand that can only be cast if you have not played a land this turn?
Huge amount of the same functionality without a lot of the rules shennanigans...
The risk of not hitting a land (very rare) balances the slight increase in versatility.
Dark Puppet1B
Artifact Creature - Construct (R)
If a spell or ability an opponent controls causes you to discard a card, you may discard Dark Puppet instead.
1/1
I wonder if wording is proper here.
Seems like the correct way to do the replacement ability though because this is in a hidden zone (the hand) I think this needs to be revealed.
EG: Dark Puppet1B
Artifact Creature - Construct (R)
If a spell or ability an opponent controls causes you to discard a card, you may reveal Dark Puppet from your hand. If you do, you may discard Dark Puppet instead.
1/1
No love for the elegant french vanilla scorpion?
I'm really suprised it hasn't been made yet.
Also just wanna say I've been really enjoying some of NVRBLND's designs but your landfall creature has the wrong text and needs to create token copies. The design is good but not the wording. Keep them up.
Seems people didn't really enjoy Torn from Reality. I thought the forced sacrifice and the XXX cost really lent itself to an Eldrazi spell.
Was it colour pie concerns, power level or just not interesting enough?
Anyway I've done another crack at the pray mechanic today.
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Thinly veiled snipes at other members of the community is not nice. If you have an issue bring it up with the moderators in appropriate channels.
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Anyway seems people were not so keen on my Ooze today. Any feedback jump to mind?
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Just missing a mana cost. Should just cost W
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I had a english fail. I meant Satyr Wayfinder.
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Huge amount of the same functionality without a lot of the rules shennanigans...
The risk of not hitting a land (very rare) balances the slight increase in versatility.
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Seems like the correct way to do the replacement ability though because this is in a hidden zone (the hand) I think this needs to be revealed.
EG:
Dark Puppet 1B
Artifact Creature - Construct (R)
If a spell or ability an opponent controls causes you to discard a card, you may reveal Dark Puppet from your hand. If you do, you may discard Dark Puppet instead.
1/1
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I'm really suprised it hasn't been made yet.
Also just wanna say I've been really enjoying some of NVRBLND's designs but your landfall creature has the wrong text and needs to create token copies. The design is good but not the wording. Keep them up.
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Also what did people think of my legendary card?
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Was it colour pie concerns, power level or just not interesting enough?
Anyway I've done another crack at the pray mechanic today.
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Yeh new mechanics and Planeswalkers both tend to do badly it seems.
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Well I feel silly now.
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