First thoughts are... No 4 dark confidant? So we want 4 Arenas; 4 Zealous persecution seems a lot, i would run 3... Almost all your ways to put a body in the table are cost (3) crusaders and souls... So... The best to do is to cut some of those creatures and use others like cost 2: Tidehollow Sculler; 1 Sorin is fine, could be x2... And blind obedience is something i dont like... U dont have too much life loss (No confidant, no thoughtseize, no fetchlands, no shocklands)...
Also... Dont you like Pack Rats? Its my favorite creature here =P and one of the reasons i'm not playing BW tokens, u should try it!
Removal: (7-8)
4 Path to exile
1-2 Darkblast (Great removal against Affinity, delver, etc... Can fill graveyard to cast Lingering souls or Tasigur)
2 Dismember
Lands: (It would really help u get at least 4 Marsh Flats and 1 Godless Shrine)
6x Plains
4x Swamp
4x Caves of Koilos
4x Isolated Chapel
3x Scoured Barrens
And about cool lands you have Mutavault 2/2 sometimes wins the game, immune to Wrath effects and sinergy with Pack Rats... And Vault of the Archangel as a x1 sometimes is good... Also there is Tectonic Edge agains Tron or Tricolor Decks
Creatures: (14)
4x Mirran Crusader
4x Phyrexian Crusader
2x Blood Baron of Vizkopa
4x Lingering Souls
Removal: (8)
4x Path to Exile
2x Go for the Throat
2x Dismember
Discard: (7)
4x Inquisition of Kozilek
3x Castigate
Others: (10)
3x Blind Obedience
2x Phyrexian Arena
1x Sorin, Solemn Visitor
4x Zealous Persecution
First thoughts are... No 4 dark confidant? So we want 4 Arenas; 4 Zealous persecution seems a lot, i would run 3... Almost all your ways to put a body in the table are cost (3) crusaders and souls... So... The best to do is to cut some of those creatures and use others like cost 2: Tidehollow Sculler; 1 Sorin is fine, could be x2... And blind obedience is something i dont like... U dont have too much life loss (No confidant, no thoughtseize, no fetchlands, no shocklands)...
Also... Dont you like Pack Rats? Its my favorite creature here =P and one of the reasons i'm not playing BW tokens, u should try it!
What about something like this:
Creatures: (15-16)
4 Lingering Souls
4 Mirran Crusader
3 Pack Rat
3 Tidehollow Sculler
1-2 Gurmag Angler or Tasigur, the Golden Fang (Depends on your cash)
Removal: (7-8)
4 Path to exile
1-2 Darkblast (Great removal against Affinity, delver, etc... Can fill graveyard to cast Lingering souls or Tasigur)
2 Dismember
Discard: (7)
4x Inquisition of Kozilek
3x Castigate
Others: (6)
3x Phyrexian Arena
1x Sorin, Solemn Visitor
2x Zealous Persecution
Lands: (It would really help u get at least 4 Marsh Flats and 1 Godless Shrine)
6x Plains
4x Swamp
4x Caves of Koilos
4x Isolated Chapel
3x Scoured Barrens
And about cool lands you have Mutavault 2/2 sometimes wins the game, immune to Wrath effects and sinergy with Pack Rats... And Vault of the Archangel as a x1 sometimes is good... Also there is Tectonic Edge agains Tron or Tricolor Decks
Also... If you are not running Dark confidant you can have in your deck these: Murderous Cut, Tasigur, the Golden Fang or Gurmag Angler
//Criaturas (8)
4 Dark Confidant
4 Pack Rat
//Hechizos (18)
4 Lingering Souls
4 Path to exile
4 Inquisition of Kozilek
3 Thoughtseize
2 Slaughter pact
1 Darkblast
//Tierras (24)
4 MArsh Flats
4 Godless Shrine
2 Isolated Chapel
4 Mutavault
2 Tectonic Edge
1 Urborg, Tomb of Yawgmoth
2 Verdant Catacombs
1 Arid Mesa
2 Plains
2 Swamp
So... 50 cards, 10 slots... Tidehollow Sculler ? Blade splicer and Restoration Angel?
... Zealous persecution and Bitterblossom? Or maybe Auriok Champion... Sword of Light and Shadow or Fire and Ice??? I'm really lost here
Love the deck not being T1 and evolving from Tokens
Cheers from Argentina!