Great WP you got here. It's been a while since I became excited for a WP other than my own.
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" I came to them in a flock of ravens that filled a northern sky at dawn...
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
It seems like you have pretty much everything under control. As for a tip, I think all I can advise you is, never let things remain stagnant. RPers like surprises and twists, and as a former WP maker, it's fun to play around with the plot. Furthermore, it will keep things interesting and never boring. Good luck.
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" I came to them in a flock of ravens that filled a northern sky at dawn...
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
" I came to them in a flock of ravens that filled a northern sky at dawn...
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
Yes, I would also like to send my congratulations. It has been very enjoyable, and the larger amount of Moderators makes it easier for someone to keep the plot going.
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Born in Darkness,
Raised in Chaos,
Filled with Chewy Nougat!
Vow to keep checking the Quincy HQ for my posts then, because I post there 24/7. I don't like waiting. I'm impatient. Especially when I'm excited.
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" I came to them in a flock of ravens that filled a northern sky at dawn...
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
I wonder how he managed to get Aethershunt his tag, while sent the fact he's going to help us mod... In the same post, I asked him to give shadow the tag he deserves...
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We have laboured long to build a heaven, only to find it populated with horrors.
Don't worry. Sen does things at his own pacing. Nobody tells him what to do.
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" I came to them in a flock of ravens that filled a northern sky at dawn...
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
Look who's got a shiny and spiffy new tag. Congrats shadow_agent.
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" I came to them in a flock of ravens that filled a northern sky at dawn...
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
Quote:I walk opto the men and say Hi nutshead, learn my some new spells, ya understand?
Two mistakes: Horrible spelling mistakes and first person view.
Now, nothing against the mods or anything, but you guys post in Second Person Point of View.
Example:
Quote: You see a large outcropping a few feet away.
Mistake: Instead of using the character's name, you guys use 'You'.
Well, that's all, just wanted to enlighten you guys.
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" I came to them in a flock of ravens that filled a northern sky at dawn...
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
Just say the character's name. It's quick and painless.
Example:
Akira saw a large outcropping a few feet away.
Another thing I think would make this WP even better than it already is now is for everybody to post in PAST tense.
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" I came to them in a flock of ravens that filled a northern sky at dawn...
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
Past tense? I'd say posting in present tense is easier to understand:
~ jumps up and slashes ~.
~ jumped up and slashed ~.
One says it is being done while the other says it has been done, although different people have different RP-ing methods.
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"Comedy is simply a funny way of being serious." - Peter Ustinov
"Never let your sense of morals get in the way of doing what's right." - Isaac Asimov "To gain that which is worth having, it may be necessary to lose everything else." - Burnadette Devlin
" I came to them in a flock of ravens that filled a northern sky at dawn...
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
Except when talking :p, yeah, Rodyle's right, limiting people will only anger them.
Counter example :D:
Akira jumps up and slashes down, trying to cleave through the evil and ugly looking monster dude.
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"Comedy is simply a funny way of being serious." - Peter Ustinov
"Never let your sense of morals get in the way of doing what's right." - Isaac Asimov "To gain that which is worth having, it may be necessary to lose everything else." - Burnadette Devlin
" I came to them in a flock of ravens that filled a northern sky at dawn...
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
I wonder why only one other person likes the arrancar
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"Comedy is simply a funny way of being serious." - Peter Ustinov
"Never let your sense of morals get in the way of doing what's right." - Isaac Asimov "To gain that which is worth having, it may be necessary to lose everything else." - Burnadette Devlin
It is much appreciated if you do.
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
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Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
COLOHOLICS ANONYMOUS
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
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Raised in Chaos,
Filled with Chewy Nougat!
However, someone's going to pay for it if this one doesn't last long, and don't care who that person is.
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
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Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
COLOHOLICS ANONYMOUS
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
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I have a little something to say regarding this forum's Codes of Conduct, Section 2.
http://forums.mtgsalvation.com/showpost.php?p=1116960&postcount=2
Section 2 states that:
2. Post normal sentences and in third person.
Quote: I walk opto the men and say Hi nutshead, learn my some new spells, ya understand?
Two mistakes: Horrible spelling mistakes and first person view.
Now, nothing against the mods or anything, but you guys post in Second Person Point of View.
Example:
Quote: You see a large outcropping a few feet away.
Mistake: Instead of using the character's name, you guys use 'You'.
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
COLOHOLICS ANONYMOUS
Example:
Akira saw a large outcropping a few feet away.
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
COLOHOLICS ANONYMOUS
~ jumps up and slashes ~.
~ jumped up and slashed ~.
One says it is being done while the other says it has been done, although different people have different RP-ing methods.
"Comedy is simply a funny way of being serious." - Peter Ustinov
"To gain that which is worth having, it may be necessary to lose everything else." - Burnadette Devlin
Akira jumped up and slashed down, trying to cleave the evil and ugly looking monster dude.
With the past tense, you are forced to EXPLICITLY say your intentions for a certain action. Present tense can still imply the wrong message:
Akira jumps up and slashes at the evil and ugly looking monster dude.
It can still be interpreted as the deed being done.
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
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However, the future tence should be avoided...
Counter example :D:
Akira jumps up and slashes down, trying to cleave through the evil and ugly looking monster dude.
"Comedy is simply a funny way of being serious." - Peter Ustinov
"To gain that which is worth having, it may be necessary to lose everything else." - Burnadette Devlin
I'm probably just used to writing my stories in novel form, hence the past tense.
[Ok, now back to work! Someone mod for my quest! :D]
Magic shall be written upon the sky by the rain but they shall not be able to read it;
Magic shall be written on the faces of the stony hills but their minds shall not be able to contain it..."
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I wonder why only one other person likes the arrancar
"Comedy is simply a funny way of being serious." - Peter Ustinov
"To gain that which is worth having, it may be necessary to lose everything else." - Burnadette Devlin