Yeah, I know its not that good, but I think its okay for my 2nd or maybe 3rd banner I've ever made. The thing I would change on it is I think I sharpened it to much, but it still looks cool like that, in my opinion. (Its a ninja btw. :p)
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It's time to get out of the desert and into the sun.
Not bad...really...I think your right as it does look a little too sharpened it makes it look textured on the left side and more chizeled or pixeled into the sig as you move to the right. I think it is more the lighting that causies an odd shadow on the lines. Either way it is a decent abstract. Add a border though, always.
I'm not exactly sure where the ninja is, but it's a really cool abstract banner. I would probably work on contrast levels a bit...right now it's just a big block of blue. Also, I gotta say that your text is kinda...ick. The font isn't that fun (doesn't fit the flow of the banner at all) and it's too big. Also, I'd probably recommend (as always) adding a border...even just a 1px black line border or something like that.
Yeah, I know its not that good, but I think its okay for my 2nd or maybe 3rd banner I've ever made. [/size][/color][/font] The thing I would change on it is I think I sharpened it to much, but it still looks cool like that, in my opinion.
Call me ign'ant, but... it's bad. It's a blue wall of some kind with etchings on it. The etchings are so obtrusive I feel them like the screeching noise they would make. It hurts.
Then there's a nonsensical thing *kinda* like a skull in there... it clashes...
Also, the caption really doesn't mesh. It's so superimposed - and the fact that it seems to be in a margin as a result of the etchings doesn't help.
I'm saying its bad because I'm getting signal interference. I can't read anything from it.
Midlight?
The second one: It doesn't speak to me, but I wouldn't expect it to. I can only offer technical feedback that you give it a border, and fix up the left side. The left side is like some kinda... powder... damn I wish I had texture lingo...
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Call me ign'ant, but... it's bad. It's a blue wall of some kind with etchings on it. The etchings are so obtrusive I feel them like the screeching noise they would make. It hurts.
Then there's a nonsensical thing *kinda* like a skull in there... it clashes...
Also, the caption really doesn't mesh. It's so superimposed - and the fact that it seems to be in a margin as a result of the etchings doesn't help.
I'm saying its bad because I'm getting signal interference. I can't read anything from it.
Midlight?
The second one: It doesn't speak to me, but I wouldn't expect it to. I can only offer technical feedback that you give it a border, and fix up the left side. The left side is like some kinda... powder... damn I wish I had texture lingo...
Woah, slow down. You're putting WAY too much thought into it. They're his first banners. Calm down a little bit.
They look pretty good for first attempts, Spencerpants. Work a bit on your brushwork & add a border ALWAYS.
Try to work with large arts, too. Instread of just superimposing a small image & brushing around it.
Nice start! <3
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Yeah, I know its not that good, but I think its okay for my 2nd or maybe 3rd banner I've ever made. The thing I would change on it is I think I sharpened it to much, but it still looks cool like that, in my opinion. (Its a ninja btw. :p)
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Looks nice!
<EDIT> — OH!!! I see the ninja now! lol!
..keep your mind open enough and someone is going to throw some crap in..
..cause i'm sick of being treated like i have before
like it's stupid standing for what i'm standing for..
..it's not faith if you're using your eyes..
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Now, criticize the new one please.
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Call me ign'ant, but... it's bad. It's a blue wall of some kind with etchings on it. The etchings are so obtrusive I feel them like the screeching noise they would make. It hurts.
Then there's a nonsensical thing *kinda* like a skull in there... it clashes...
Also, the caption really doesn't mesh. It's so superimposed - and the fact that it seems to be in a margin as a result of the etchings doesn't help.
I'm saying its bad because I'm getting signal interference. I can't read anything from it.
Midlight?
The second one: It doesn't speak to me, but I wouldn't expect it to. I can only offer technical feedback that you give it a border, and fix up the left side. The left side is like some kinda... powder... damn I wish I had texture lingo...
Awesome avatar provided by Krashbot @ [Epic Graphics].
Woah, slow down. You're putting WAY too much thought into it. They're his first banners. Calm down a little bit.
They look pretty good for first attempts, Spencerpants. Work a bit on your brushwork & add a border ALWAYS.
Try to work with large arts, too. Instread of just superimposing a small image & brushing around it.
Nice start! <3