Bravelion83:
I think the artifact is a little overcosted. Given the cost of activating it, I'm not sure if it needs to cost 4 as well as have the active cost XRR.
Creature is novel. I like the effect, but I feel like it would be better on a slightly larger body. Shame you have to use the awkward "controller controls" wording. The flavour text is kind of goofy.
doomfish:
Artifact is cool, lots of potential for trickery and mana production. I dunno how big the additional cost is, but it does feel like a fair bit.
Creature is solid in flavour, and fits into the colours pretty well. Maybe some flavour text would've been nice to get a sense of who they are as a legendary as opposed to just a frost elemental.
NVRBLND:
Artifact is simple and flavourful. It's "probably" not busted but it certainly has potential. I'm not sure if the creature is specifically green - blue or white, or with a S cost on the ability seems to make more sense to me. Either way, it's a simple self-synergy.
Jimmy Groove:
Er, mate, this challenge is for a black-border set, which I don't think presents are appropriate for. Regardless, artifact is kind of a clever way to riff on present, but I feel like if too many of these cards exist, opening presents becomes too risky. The creature is also really cool present synergy, and it's probably fine because it's rather expensive.
Moss_Elemental:
Artifact seems pretty strong, actually. I mean, I guess it will take a while to set up if you want it to burn a lot, but it can get a lot of value. I supposed it'd really depend on the speed of the limited format.
Sentinel is boring but efficient. Fat and hexproof means it's super hard to deal with, while trample and vigilance mean it'll always be doing something.
SelesnyaNewLife:
Artifact is fine - seems slow, but doesn't hurt your creatures so I guess it has to be. Creature has a cool effect, solid flavour. Permanent transformation is always fun.
Top 3:
1. SelesnyaNewLife
2. Moss_Elemental
3. doomfish
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Alchemist's Fire: Name sounds like it should be a sorcery. Also, I think it should be rare. Shaman of the Wilds: Flavour is good. landfall ability is a little powerful.
willows
Emberfly Bottle: I like it. Growling Brother: Not too crazy about the name. Some flavour text would have been nice.
IcariiFA
Radiant Pyre Lantern: Not too crazy about the wording. Might be better if it was "... deals 1 damage to each creature of the colour of your choice." Banisher from the Wood: Second line should include the phrase "They're still lands."
GGCrono
Heatstone:Shrine of Burning Rage, but with a mana ability. It hink it should be rare. Deepwood Preserver: Makes Nissa, Worldwaker look even more broken. Flavour is bland.
Egak
Ruby Lens: I see this as undercosted. Flavour is good. Snowmare: Interesting that you made a nongreen creature. Unfortunately, except for the high toughness, it doesn't look like a protector from a flavour standpoint.
JudaaMarr
Clockwork Firestarter: I'm not too crazy about the restriction on the first ability. Graspbranch Wraith: Flavour text doesn't fit the card's abilities.
I think the artifact is a little overcosted. Given the cost of activating it, I'm not sure if it needs to cost 4 as well as have the active cost XRR.
Creature is novel. I like the effect, but I feel like it would be better on a slightly larger body. Shame you have to use the awkward "controller controls" wording. The flavour text is kind of goofy.
doomfish:
Artifact is cool, lots of potential for trickery and mana production. I dunno how big the additional cost is, but it does feel like a fair bit.
Creature is solid in flavour, and fits into the colours pretty well. Maybe some flavour text would've been nice to get a sense of who they are as a legendary as opposed to just a frost elemental.
NVRBLND:
Artifact is simple and flavourful. It's "probably" not busted but it certainly has potential. I'm not sure if the creature is specifically green - blue or white, or with a S cost on the ability seems to make more sense to me. Either way, it's a simple self-synergy.
Jimmy Groove:
Er, mate, this challenge is for a black-border set, which I don't think presents are appropriate for. Regardless, artifact is kind of a clever way to riff on present, but I feel like if too many of these cards exist, opening presents becomes too risky. The creature is also really cool present synergy, and it's probably fine because it's rather expensive.
Moss_Elemental:
Artifact seems pretty strong, actually. I mean, I guess it will take a while to set up if you want it to burn a lot, but it can get a lot of value. I supposed it'd really depend on the speed of the limited format.
Sentinel is boring but efficient. Fat and hexproof means it's super hard to deal with, while trample and vigilance mean it'll always be doing something.
SelesnyaNewLife:
Artifact is fine - seems slow, but doesn't hurt your creatures so I guess it has to be. Creature has a cool effect, solid flavour. Permanent transformation is always fun.
Top 3:
1. SelesnyaNewLife
2. Moss_Elemental
3. doomfish
You got 99 attackers but I'm blocking with 1.
The Winner is Judge | 7
This Winner is Also Judge | 6
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SelesynaNewLife
Shaman of the Wilds: Flavour is good. landfall ability is a little powerful.
Growling Brother: Not too crazy about the name. Some flavour text would have been nice.
Banisher from the Wood: Second line should include the phrase "They're still lands."
Deepwood Preserver: Makes Nissa, Worldwaker look even more broken. Flavour is bland.
Snowmare: Interesting that you made a nongreen creature. Unfortunately, except for the high toughness, it doesn't look like a protector from a flavour standpoint.
Graspbranch Wraith: Flavour text doesn't fit the card's abilities.
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2. SelesnyaNewLife
3. GG Crono