No, look at all the posts and see where more than one person made a mistake. Also, two of us posted at the same time frame, causing changes to be skewed. I copy/pasted an incorrect mana cost and Dimi made a positive change when it should have been negative or neutral.
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This is the current state of the card corrected for the issues from my previous post.
Mona Trevask, the Dragon Slayer2WW Legendary Creature - Human Soldier
Reach, Protection from Red
As long as your opponent controls a red creature, ~ gets +2/+2 and has double strike.
2/2
The next change should be positive or neutral.
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Oops, sorry, didn't realize that I got ninja'd as well.
Ok, now:
(+): White has two enemy colors.
Mona Trevask, the Dragon Slayer2WW Legendary Creature - Human Soldier
Reach, Protection from black and from red
As long as your opponent controls a black or a red creature, ~ has +2/+2 and double strike.
2/2
Mona Trevask, the Dragon Slayer2WW
Legendary Creature - Human Soldier
Reach, Protection from black and from red
As long as your opponent controls a black or a red creature, ~ has +2/+2 and First Strike.
2/2
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(+): A dragon slayer brings the fight to the dragon.
Mona Trevask, the Dragon Slayer2WW
Legendary Creature - Human Soldier
Reach, Protection from black and from red
Hunt Dragon (When this creature attacks, you may have target Dragon defending player controls untap and block it if able.)
As long as your opponent controls a black or a red creature, ~ has +2/+2 and First Strike.
2/2
(+) Now she's more good at killing dragons (or any other creature.)
Mona Trevask, the Dragon Slayer2WW
Legendary Creature - Human Soldier
Reach, protetion from black and from red
Hunt Dragon (When this creture attacks, you may have target Dragon defending player controls untap and block it this turn if able.)
As long as an opponent controls a Dragon, Mona has +2/+2 and First Strike.
3/2
Kor Firewalker1WW Creature - Kor Soldier
Protection from red
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, you may gain 1 life.
2/2
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(-) requires some balancing; seems a bit too good with both pro-red, mountainwalk, AND Staff of the Flame Magus. adding 1 to CMC.
Kor Firewalker 2WW
Creature - Kor Soldier
Protection from red, mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, you may gain 1 life.
2/2
Kor Firewalker
Creature - Kor Soldier
Protection from Red, Mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, you may gain 2 life.
2/2
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(8 Total) - May 2015; May 2016; June 2016; August 2016; October 2016; December 2016; October 2017; May 2019
(7 Total) - September 2015; October 2015; January 2016; March 2016; April 2016; July 2016(T); March 2019(T)
Kor Firewalker2WR Creature - Kor Soldier
Mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, you may gain 2 life.
2/2
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Kor Firewalker 2RR
Creature - Kor Soldier
Mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, you may gain 2 life.
2/2
Kor Firewalker 2RR
Creature - Kor Soldier
Mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, you may gain 2 life.
2/2
Multicolor would count as a neutral change, not negative.
The next change can be either positive or negative.
You know, I almost edited this to 1WWR thinking that 2 of 1 color = 1 each of 2 colors. That would have counted as a negative right (1WWR I mean)?
Anyway, I feel this guy needs to change his name, type and ability if he's going to be mono-red. So here's another neutral (I hope ) change:
Goblin Firewalker
Creature - Goblin Soldier
Mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, you may deal 2 damage to target player.
2/2
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(8 Total) - May 2015; May 2016; June 2016; August 2016; October 2016; December 2016; October 2017; May 2019
(7 Total) - September 2015; October 2015; January 2016; March 2016; April 2016; July 2016(T); March 2019(T)
(+) Goblins don't cost that much (by which I mean three quarters of goblins don't cost that much). Also hope you don't mind a wording change?
Goblin Firewalker 1RR
Creature - Goblin Soldier
Mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, you may have Goblin Firewalker deal 2 damage to target player.
2/2
(+) Goblins don't cost that much (by which I mean three quarters of goblins don't cost that much).
Exactly.
Dwarven Firewalker 2RR
Creature - Dwarf Soldier
Mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, Dwarven Firewalker deals 2 damage to target player.
2/2
[(-) Mana cost upped. Name & wording fixed.]
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(+)Now he can Shock. I hope that someone will turn him to a wizard.
Dwarven Electromancer2RR
Creature - Dwarf Soldier
Mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a mountain enters the battlefield, Dwarven Firewalker deals 2 damage to target creature or player.
2/2
(-) Mountainwalk doesn't fit as well with the name change. Also, you forgot to change his name in the text.
Dwarven Electromancer
Creature - Dwarf Soldier
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a mountain enters the battlefield, Dwarven Electromancer deals 2 damage to target creature or player.
2/2
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(8 Total) - May 2015; May 2016; June 2016; August 2016; October 2016; December 2016; October 2017; May 2019
(7 Total) - September 2015; October 2015; January 2016; March 2016; April 2016; July 2016(T); March 2019(T)
It's a chaos wizard (neutral functional change, you'll see why).
Dwarven Electromancer
Creature - Dwarf wizard
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a mountain enters the battlefield, Dwarven Electromancer deals 2 damage to each creature or each player.
2/2
This most certainly needs balancing. Have fun
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(-) too much freedom, hoping someone will change it to three damage so it can be forced to suicide.
Dwarven Electromancer 2RR
Creature - Dwarf Wizard
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a mountain enters the battlefield, Dwarven Electromancer deals 2 damage to target creature.
2/3
Dwarven Electromancer2RR Creature - Dwarf Wizard
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a mountain enters the battlefield, Dwarven Electromancer deals 2 damage to all creatures.
2/3
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(~) Let's get crazy Insane Electromancer2RR
Creature - Human Wizard
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a mountain enters the battlefield, Insane Electromancer deals 2 damage to all creatures.
2/3
Insane Electromancer2RRR Creature - Human Wizard
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, Insane Electromancer deals 2 damage to all creatures. If a creature dealt damage this way dies as a result, exile it.
2/3
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(-) Now he's so insane he won't even live through his own burn!
Insane Electromancer2RRR Creature - Human Wizard
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, ~ deals 2 damage to each creature. If a creature dealt damage this way would die this turn, exile it instead.
2/2
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[c]Lightning Bolt[/c] -> Lightning Bolt
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I will always firmly stand by the belief that Magic is a game first and a collectable second.
Mona Trevask, the Dragon Slayer 2WW
Legendary Creature - Human Soldier
Reach, Protection from Red
As long as your opponent controls a red creature, ~ gets +2/+2 and has double strike.
2/2
The next change should be positive or neutral.
― Anthony Bourdain, Kitchen Confidential
I will always firmly stand by the belief that Magic is a game first and a collectable second.
Ok, now:
(+): White has two enemy colors.
Mona Trevask, the Dragon Slayer 2WW
Legendary Creature - Human Soldier
Reach, Protection from black and from red
As long as your opponent controls a black or a red creature, ~ has +2/+2 and double strike.
2/2
Mona Trevask, the Dragon Slayer 2WW
Legendary Creature - Human Soldier
Reach, Protection from black and from red
As long as your opponent controls a black or a red creature, ~ has +2/+2 and First Strike.
2/2
― Anthony Bourdain, Kitchen Confidential
I will always firmly stand by the belief that Magic is a game first and a collectable second.
Mona Trevask, the Dragon Slayer 2WW
Legendary Creature - Human Soldier
Reach, Protection from black and from red
Hunt Dragon (When this creature attacks, you may have target Dragon defending player controls untap and block it if able.)
As long as your opponent controls a black or a red creature, ~ has +2/+2 and First Strike.
2/2
Mona Trevask, the Dragon Slayer 2WW
Legendary Creature - Human Soldier
Reach, protetion from black and from red
Hunt Dragon (When this creture attacks, you may have target Dragon defending player controls untap and block it this turn if able.)
As long as an opponent controls a Dragon, Mona has +2/+2 and First Strike.
3/2
Kor Firewalker WW
Creature - Kor Soldier
Protection from red
Whenever a player casts a red spell, you may gain 1 life.
2/2
― Anthony Bourdain, Kitchen Confidential
I will always firmly stand by the belief that Magic is a game first and a collectable second.
Kor Firewalker 1WW
Creature - Kor Soldier
Protection from red
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, you may gain 1 life.
2/2
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I will always firmly stand by the belief that Magic is a game first and a collectable second.
Kor Firewalker 2WW
Creature - Kor Soldier
Protection from red, mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, you may gain 1 life.
2/2
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Kor Firewalker
Creature - Kor Soldier
Protection from Red, Mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, you may gain 2 life.
2/2
The next change can be either positive or negative.
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I will always firmly stand by the belief that Magic is a game first and a collectable second.
Kor Firewalker 2WR
Creature - Kor Soldier
Mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, you may gain 2 life.
2/2
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Creature - Kor Soldier
Mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, you may gain 2 life.
2/2
That wasn't white at all! (N)
Creature - Kor Soldier
Mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, you may gain 2 life.
2/2
That wasn't white at all! (N)
You know, I almost edited this to 1WWR thinking that 2 of 1 color = 1 each of 2 colors. That would have counted as a negative right (1WWR I mean)?
Anyway, I feel this guy needs to change his name, type and ability if he's going to be mono-red. So here's another neutral (I hope ) change:
Goblin Firewalker
Creature - Goblin Soldier
Mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, you may deal 2 damage to target player.
2/2
Goblin Firewalker 1RR
Creature - Goblin Soldier
Mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, you may have Goblin Firewalker deal 2 damage to target player.
2/2
Exactly.
Dwarven Firewalker 2RR
Creature - Dwarf Soldier
Mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, Dwarven Firewalker deals 2 damage to target player.
2/2
[(-) Mana cost upped. Name & wording fixed.]
OLD SCHOOL 93/94 «The Pain Train» Black Sligh, Esper «Machine Gun» Artifacts, Jund «Psycho» Ponza-Disko.
Dwarven Electromancer 2RR
Creature - Dwarf Soldier
Mountainwalk
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a mountain enters the battlefield, Dwarven Firewalker deals 2 damage to target creature or player.
2/2
Dwarven Electromancer
Creature - Dwarf Soldier
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a mountain enters the battlefield, Dwarven Electromancer deals 2 damage to target creature or player.
2/2
Dwarven Electromancer
Creature - Dwarf wizard
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a mountain enters the battlefield, Dwarven Electromancer deals 2 damage to each creature or each player.
2/2
This most certainly needs balancing. Have fun
OLD SCHOOL 93/94 «The Pain Train» Black Sligh, Esper «Machine Gun» Artifacts, Jund «Psycho» Ponza-Disko.
Dwarven Electromancer 2RR
Creature - Dwarf Wizard
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a mountain enters the battlefield, Dwarven Electromancer deals 2 damage to target creature.
2/3
Dwarven Electromancer 2RR
Creature - Dwarf Wizard
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a mountain enters the battlefield, Dwarven Electromancer deals 2 damage to all creatures.
2/3
― Anthony Bourdain, Kitchen Confidential
I will always firmly stand by the belief that Magic is a game first and a collectable second.
Insane Electromancer 2RR
Creature - Human Wizard
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a mountain enters the battlefield, Insane Electromancer deals 2 damage to all creatures.
2/3
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Insane Electromancer 2RRR
Creature - Human Wizard
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, Insane Electromancer deals 2 damage to all creatures. If a creature dealt damage this way dies as a result, exile it.
2/3
― Anthony Bourdain, Kitchen Confidential
I will always firmly stand by the belief that Magic is a game first and a collectable second.
Insane Electromancer 2RRR
Creature - Human Wizard
Whenever a player casts a red spell or a Mountain enters the battlefield, ~ deals 2 damage to each creature. If a creature dealt damage this way would die this turn, exile it instead.
2/2
[c]Lightning Bolt[/c] -> Lightning Bolt
[c=Lightning Bolt]Apple Pie[/c] -> Apple Pie
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