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Artifact
Suspend x x must be more than two.
When ~ comes into play, put X charge counters on it were X is the mana spent to suspend it. t, Add 1 to your mana pool for each charge counter on ~.
IIW - A planeswalker of yourself
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Um... Can anyone tell me how to word this
Charge VaultX
Artifact
When Charge Vault enters the battlefield, if you played it from your hand, exile it with X time counters on it. It gains suspend.
:symtap:: Add x to your mana pool.
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A silent evil where there shouldn't be another.
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Flash Flood Warning3UU
Enchantment (R)
When Flash Flood Warning enters the battlefield, each player may pay X. If so, that player returns X creatures they control to their owner's hands.
At the beginning of your upkeep, destroy all creatures without flying and sacrifice Flash Flood Warning.
Orpheus 2B
Creature (Musician) Wizard
Tap: Return target creature in an opponents graveyard to the battlefield.
You have control of that creature while [Orpheus] remains in play.
0/1 "Fair lamp of Night, its ornament and friend, who giv'st to Nature works their destin'd end." Selene - Orpheus
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Oh yeah. Such epic singing music power that it resurrects the dead. Pretty cool, although I feel it's really undercosted. Gruesome Encore is three mana and temporary. This is once a turn starting from turn 4 and is permanent (well, as permanent as this creature). That seems a bit powerful to me. Puppeteer Clique does it twice at most at 5 mana and, while it is a fair amount bigger, it's also temporary.
You misread the card Ninja Caterpie.
"You have control of that creature while [Orpheus] remains in play."
This means the returned card owner gains control of it when [Orpheus] Phases out, or leaves play. It is not like the two cards you mentioned which exile the creature after the turn.
Can I ask your opinion on the card, now that you understand the function?
This means the returned card owner gains control of it when [Orpheus] Phases out, or leaves play. It is not like the two cards you mentioned which exile the creature after the turn.
No, I understood it perfectly. That's why I said it was undercosted. It can stay for more than just a turn and with multiple creatures, while the other cards only do it once, for a single turn and then exile it. Of course, on a frail body like a 0/1, it balances it out a bit, but I still think anything - much less a 3 mana creature - that can repeatedly steal your opponent's dead dudes is a bit much.
HOLDER FOR THE CHALLENGE OF DOOM.
The End of the World As We Know It15UUBBBRR
Sorcery (MR)
Target player draws his or her library plus one, discards his or her hand, sacrifices all permanents he or she controls, exiles his or her graveyard, loses all of his or her life, gets ten poison counters and loses the game.
Every way you can lose, plus some all-new extra-humiliating ones! (also it's ALL IN-COLOUR)
Villainous UltimatumUUBBBRR Sorcery (M)
Exile all cards from target opponent's hand. You may play cards exiled this way as long as they remain exiled. Put a 0/1 colourless Eldrazi Spawn creature token onto the battlefield for each card exiled this way. They have "Sacrifice this creature: Add 1 to your mana pool." Each member of the Super World Domination League played their part in your complete annihilation.
@Eskimo_Rage: Ya I agree with the judgings, but I wanted it to be 2 or more but that let people have six mana turn four in any color which I thought would just be too good with all the titans running amuck.
I REALLY wish I could do this challange. Oh well stupid life and not having time to judge.
Bolabras, Evil Remade4UBBR
Legendary Creature-Eldrazi Dragon Horror {MR}
Flying
Whenever Bolabras deals combat damage to a player, you may pay :sympu::sympb::sympr:. if you do, choose two- that player gains a number of poison counters equal the number of cards in his or her hand; put a number of 0/1 colorless Eldrazi Spawn creature tokens with "Sacrifice this creature: Add 1 to your mana pool" onto the battlefield equal to the number of poison counters on that player; that player draws seven cards or that player discards two cards.
7/7 In one hand, Bolas weight his identity, sanity and destiny and in the other; unlimited power. But that was long ago and in a distant half-remembered lifetime.
Meditation Hedron :sym2u::sym2b::sym2r:
Artifact MR
During your upkeep, choose one: return target permanent to its owner's hand, draw a card and discard a card at random, or proliferate. The perfect place to plot your revenge.
Bolas the Compleat12
Legendary Creature - Dragon {MR}
When you cast Bolas the Compleat, target player discards two cards and you draw two cards.
Flying 2: Bolas the Compleat gains annihilator 1 until end of turn.
7/7 The greatest evil in the multiverse has fallen to its most perfidious curse.
Meditation Hedron :sym2u::sym2b::sym2r:
Artifact MR
During your upkeep, choose one: put a loyalty counter on target Planeswalker, draw a card and discard a card at random, or proliferate. The perfect place to plot your revenge.
IIW: Refined
When would you use the first ability over the third?
I Am A Mother****er4WWW Legendary Creature - Epic Human
First strike, trample, vigilance
When ~ comes into play, destroy all black creatures. "...and his beard, it was just...Epic. There is no other for it..."
6/6
Bolas' compleated Spy5:sympu::sympb::sympr:
Creature - Dragon (M)
Infect, Anihilator 3 UUBBRR: untap ~ and you get an additional combat phase and main phase after the current phase. Play this ability only during your own turn.
3/3
weird challenge calls for weird entries.
about posting an IIW: I check the board 4-5 times a day, don't worry, you'll never go to long without a challenge
A non-flying dragon? I don't like how the player sacs three permanents for 5 mana. And infect. I'm not so sure on the power level on this one.
Poxcrawler4
Creature - Eldrazi (R)
Hexproof, Infect
Whenever Poxcrawler deals combat damage to a player, that player loses 1 life, discards a card, sacrifices a creature, then sacrifices a land.
2/2 "Corruption incarnate, ancient and vile. Just what I needed" - Nicol Bolas
Interesting. I wish that it had more eldrazi flavor, but sacrificing permanents is pretty Eldrazi-ish. Make it attack-trigger and bump up the cost for it to be oozing more Eldrazi. Besides the flavor text, no Nicol Bolas here too.
Bolabras, Evil Remade4UBBR
Legendary Creature-Eldrazi Dragon Horror {MR}
Flying
Whenever Bolabras deals combat damage to a player, you may pay :sympu::sympb::sympr:. if you do, choose two- that player gains a number of poison counters equal the number of cards in his or her hand; put a number of 0/1 colorless Eldrazi Spawn creature tokens with "Sacrifice this creature: Add 1 to your mana pool" onto the battlefield equal to the number of poison counters on that player; that player draws seven cards or that player discards two cards.
7/7 In one hand, Bolas weight his identity, sanity and destiny and in the other; unlimited power. But that was long ago and in a distant half-remembered lifetime.
IIW: Planeshift a planeswalker
This is pretty epic. It manages to ooze all three factions in a awesome way. My only problem is that it's kinda win-more - I mean, why are you dealing poison counters if the card deals regular damage - but funny.
Meditation Hedron :sym2u::sym2b::sym2r:
Artifact MR
During your upkeep, choose one: return target permanent to its owner's hand, draw a card and discard a card at random, or proliferate. The perfect place to plot your revenge.
IIW: Refined
I wish that the effects weren't so general. This doesn't ooze Phyrexia + Nicol Bolas + Eldrazi to me.
Bolas the Compleat12
Legendary Creature - Dragon {MR}
When you cast Bolas the Compleat, target player discards two cards and you draw two cards.
Flying 2: Bolas the Compleat gains annihilator 1 until end of turn.
7/7 The greatest evil in the multiverse has fallen to its most perfidious curse.
IIW: A card that tells a story.
Hey look, here's a cool dragon! My only gripe with it is that it could link to the eldrazi a bit more, but cool.
Winner: My two candidates are Transtorch and Phyrexian Editor.
*rolls dice*
Keeper of Fables1UU
Creature - Human Wizard (R) 2U,T: Each player reveals the top five cards of his or her library and puts them back in any order. Then, each player draws a card. "Now, this one actually happened..."
1/1
Ahmizel the Grim4WWW
Legendary Creature-Angel (MR)
Flying, Vigilance, Lifelink
Whenever a creature you control dies, you may add B to your mana pool. 4BBB: Transform Ahmizel the Grim.
7/7
///////////////////////////////////////////// Ahmizel the Fallen (:symbw:)
Legendary Creature-Demon (MR)
Flying, Vigilance, Deathtouch
Whenever a creature dies, you may add W to your mana pool. 4WWW: Put all creatures on the bottom of their owner's library in any order.
7/7
The Big JC1GWW
Legendary Creature- Human Avatar G: Regenerate target creature.
If The Big JC would leave play, transform him instead.
0/4
/////// JC the Revived
Legendary Creature- Human Avatar 0: Each opponent gains 2 life. Return JC the revived to it's owner's hand. Activate this ability once one each turn.
4/4
IIW: Create a card that is simple to use, but hard to master.
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Villainous UltimatumUUBBBRR Sorcery (M)
Exile all cards from target opponent's hand. You may play cards exiled this way as long as they remain exiled. Put a 0/1 colourless Eldrazi Spawn creature token onto the battlefield for each card exiled this way. They have "Sacrifice this creature: Add 1 to your mana pool." Each member of the Super World Domination League played their part in your complete annihilation.
iiwsig
I'm not a huge fan of this card. I would just play Cruel Ultimatum, and by turn 7 your opponent's hand should be empty. Cool, though.
Young BoyW
Creature - Human Child (M) WW: ~ becomes a 2/2 Human Soldier with First Strike WW: If ~ is a Soldier, ~ becomes a 3/3 Human Warrior with First Strike and Vigilance WW: If ~ is a Warrior, Transform it.
1/1
------------------------------------------------ Isaac, Knight Captain W Legendary Creature - Human Knight
Other creatures you control get +1/+1. WW: ~ becomes a 4/4 Human Advisor with "Other creatures you control get +1/+1 and gain vigilance and first strike." WW: If ~ is an Advisor, It becomes a 5/5 Human Spirit with Flying and "Other Creatures you control get +1/+1 and gain vigilance, first strike, and are indestructable."
4/4
IIW - A planeswalker of yourself
I'm telling a story, not designing a card. "sigh" I can't figure out how to do both.
Wary ExplorerG Creature - Human Scout (C)
Whenever Wary Explorer blocks or becomes blocked, look at the top card of your library. If it’s a land card, you may put it onto the battlefield tapped and regenerate Wary Explorer. “I’m always on the lookout for new places... to hide in.”
1/1
The Tragedy of Iskun Pass1W
Creature — Lorespun Soldier (U) XR, Sacrifice The Tragedy of Iskun Pass: The Tragedy of Iskun Pass deals X damage to target creature. That creature's controller gains X life. The Corvite asked Reste to help man the Dread Legion. A short story later, and he had the perfect volunteer.
2/2
From the short lived Magic Wars. The Lorespun are living stories created by some ancient magic imbued in some giant old lizard-man named Reste. When summoning a Lorespun, you are essentially telling your opponent a story, and watching it play out in front of you. This explains the mechanical tie of having some drawback that grants a bonus to your opponent. They heard the story, after all.
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i'm pretty sure i can find your ***** online within 3 minutes
Thorn, Farm Hand1WW
Creature - Human
Vigilance
Whenever ~ attacks or blocks, put a quest counter on it.
When ~ has four quest counters on it, remove each quest counter from it and flip it.
3/3
------------------------------------------------ Thorn, Princess of Atheia
First strike, vigilance
Soldiers have +1/+1 and vigilance. WWT: Put two 1/1 white Soldier tokens into play.
6/6
Anyone ever read BONE?
IIW: Comics/Graphic Novels
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I don't get how this fulfills the challenge. Maybe I'm just dense. Sorry.
Interesting, but it reveals too much hidden information for me. I don't think this would be a very fun card in practice. Letting each player set up all their draws is just good for the game.
I like where you're going with this, but I think the colors are a little mixed up. People will be confused about why a mono-white creature is making black mana on one side, and why, when the creature does "turn black," it starts producing white mana, and why a Sacrifice-ish ability makes white mana in the first place. I think you have some good ideas here that need paring down to focus on what you really want to do.
I like the idea and flavor a lot, but the rules text alone would not fit on a real card, not to mention with flavor text.
Shouldn't Jesus have Vampire Hexmage/Animate Dead type abilities? Funny to think that mechanically, Jesus really is black! Har har har. On the resurrected version, I think you're missing an "only," because as it's written it sounds like you're required to activate the ability once each turn. I also don't get how resurrected Jesus suddenly becomes not a pacifist anymore (actually based on the Bible he should probably get Shadow or something), but maybe it's "second-coming smite y'all *****es" Jesus so whatever.
I don't understand why you used Figure of Destiny templating when Level Up would have worked perfectly well since your level up costs are all the same anyway. That's my main complaint about what I think is otherwise a potentially interesting card. It's also funny that two young boys could both grow up to be the same general and instantly annihilate each other.
Concise, interesting, flavorful. It's a short story, but it does the job. Nice.
They don't put triggered abilities at "end of turn" anymore, unfortunately, and the emptied mana measurement is odd. Maybe trigger it at the "end of the end step?" Or "end of your postcombat main phase?" Honestly though I think it's fine without providence counters. As a color hoser, just let it add mana whenever an opponent casts a blue spell. It wouldn't be particularly broken.
Funky. If I were a lorespun I would want to keep that story going as long as possible. "No! There's more characters! I DON'T WANT to live happily ever after! THE END? GOD NOOOooooo..." This is pretty high-concept stuff. I'm not sure I get all the layers going on here. Mechanically I like it.
There is no way this text will all fit on a flip card. I'll assume you meant transform. (I think you're missing Legendary Creature - Human Something on the grown-up version too.) Thorn's boost is strange in that it affects your opponent's creatures too, not the norm for modern lords. I like the story that's told, though, and the second ability is nice.
For knowing how to edit the story he's telling, Stapler takes the win. Everyone gets a prize, though. That's right, you get to FILL THE BOX!
NOT THISMake 2 uncommon/common cards that are pretty bad on their own but can combo together to do powerful things that you can draft in a limited environment (like Memory's Journey and Runic Repetition).
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Charge Vault
Artifact
Suspend x
x must be more than two.
When ~ comes into play, put X charge counters on it were X is the mana spent to suspend it.
t, Add 1 to your mana pool for each charge counter on ~.
IIW - A planeswalker of yourself
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Um... Can anyone tell me how to word this
Long live CLAN FLAMINGO
Make wall support cards or a legendary wall
Winner is also Judge = 2
Club Flamingo/Megiddo's Magic Pimp Shack = 4
Maybe:
Charge Vault X
Artifact
When Charge Vault enters the battlefield, if you played it from your hand, exile it with X time counters on it. It gains suspend.
:symtap:: Add x to your mana pool.
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Magic Wars: DaesseclusMagic Wars Reboot Race:Emesmaa
Orammis Bhasir
Asirri Rokhane
Ursinus Koliel
Flash Flood Warning 3UU
Enchantment (R)
When Flash Flood Warning enters the battlefield, each player may pay X. If so, that player returns X creatures they control to their owner's hands.
At the beginning of your upkeep, destroy all creatures without flying and sacrifice Flash Flood Warning.
IIW: Eldrazi + Phyrexia + Nicol Bolas
You misread the card Ninja Caterpie.
"You have control of that creature while [Orpheus] remains in play."
This means the returned card owner gains control of it when [Orpheus] Phases out, or leaves play. It is not like the two cards you mentioned which exile the creature after the turn.
Can I ask your opinion on the card, now that you understand the function?
Magic Work Station Winston-180 http://forums.mtgsalvation.com/showthread.php?t=315755
No, I understood it perfectly. That's why I said it was undercosted. It can stay for more than just a turn and with multiple creatures, while the other cards only do it once, for a single turn and then exile it. Of course, on a frail body like a 0/1, it balances it out a bit, but I still think anything - much less a 3 mana creature - that can repeatedly steal your opponent's dead dudes is a bit much.
HOLDER FOR THE CHALLENGE OF DOOM.
The End of the World As We Know It 15UUBBBRR
Sorcery (MR)
Target player draws his or her library plus one, discards his or her hand, sacrifices all permanents he or she controls, exiles his or her graveyard, loses all of his or her life, gets ten poison counters and loses the game.
Every way you can lose, plus some all-new extra-humiliating ones! (also it's ALL IN-COLOUR)
IIW: Epic flavour text.
You got 99 attackers but I'm blocking with 1.
The Winner is Judge | 7
This Winner is Also Judge | 6
Club Flamingo | Lots
Sorcery (M)
Exile all cards from target opponent's hand. You may play cards exiled this way as long as they remain exiled. Put a 0/1 colourless Eldrazi Spawn creature token onto the battlefield for each card exiled this way. They have "Sacrifice this creature: Add 1 to your mana pool."
Each member of the Super World Domination League played their part in your complete annihilation.
iiwsig
I REALLY wish I could do this challange. Oh well stupid life and not having time to judge.
Long live CLAN FLAMINGO
Make wall support cards or a legendary wall
Winner is also Judge = 2
Club Flamingo/Megiddo's Magic Pimp Shack = 4
Legendary Creature-Eldrazi Dragon Horror {MR}
Flying
Whenever Bolabras deals combat damage to a player, you may pay :sympu::sympb::sympr:. if you do, choose two- that player gains a number of poison counters equal the number of cards in his or her hand; put a number of 0/1 colorless Eldrazi Spawn creature tokens with "Sacrifice this creature: Add 1 to your mana pool" onto the battlefield equal to the number of poison counters on that player; that player draws seven cards or that player discards two cards.
7/7
In one hand, Bolas weight his identity, sanity and destiny and in the other; unlimited power. But that was long ago and in a distant half-remembered lifetime.
IIW: Planeshift a planeswalker
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Magic Wars: DaesseclusMagic Wars Reboot Race:Emesmaa
Orammis Bhasir
Asirri Rokhane
Ursinus Koliel
Artifact MR
During your upkeep, choose one: return target permanent to its owner's hand, draw a card and discard a card at random, or proliferate.
The perfect place to plot your revenge.
IIW: Refined
[Clan Flamingo]
Great entries.
Legendary Creature - Dragon {MR}
When you cast Bolas the Compleat, target player discards two cards and you draw two cards.
Flying
2: Bolas the Compleat gains annihilator 1 until end of turn.
7/7
The greatest evil in the multiverse has fallen to its most perfidious curse.
IIW: A card that tells a story.
When would you use the first ability over the third?
[Clan Flamingo] Tier Archivist
[15:21] <@CC> Remember, if you argue, you are an idiot.
Untrophied Wins:
Perfect MCC Scores: 2
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[Clan Flamingo]
Judgings coming soon.
Epic.
A non-flying dragon? I don't like how the player sacs three permanents for 5 mana. And infect. I'm not so sure on the power level on this one.
Interesting. I wish that it had more eldrazi flavor, but sacrificing permanents is pretty Eldrazi-ish. Make it attack-trigger and bump up the cost for it to be oozing more Eldrazi. Besides the flavor text, no Nicol Bolas here too.
This is pretty epic. It manages to ooze all three factions in a awesome way. My only problem is that it's kinda win-more - I mean, why are you dealing poison counters if the card deals regular damage - but funny.
I wish that the effects weren't so general. This doesn't ooze Phyrexia + Nicol Bolas + Eldrazi to me.
Hey look, here's a cool dragon! My only gripe with it is that it could link to the eldrazi a bit more, but cool.
Winner: My two candidates are Transtorch and Phyrexian Editor.
*rolls dice*
Make a card that tells a story.
Keeper of Fables 1UU
Creature - Human Wizard (R)
2U,T: Each player reveals the top five cards of his or her library and puts them back in any order. Then, each player draws a card.
"Now, this one actually happened..."
1/1
IIW: A flavourful piece of haunted equipment.
You got 99 attackers but I'm blocking with 1.
The Winner is Judge | 7
This Winner is Also Judge | 6
Club Flamingo | Lots
Fable of Wolf and Owl?Ahmizel the Grim 4WWW
Legendary Creature-Angel (MR)
Flying, Vigilance, Lifelink
Whenever a creature you control dies, you may add B to your mana pool.
4BBB: Transform Ahmizel the Grim.
7/7
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Ahmizel the Fallen (:symbw:)
Legendary Creature-Demon (MR)
Flying, Vigilance, Deathtouch
Whenever a creature dies, you may add W to your mana pool.
4WWW: Put all creatures on the bottom of their owner's library in any order.
7/7
IIW: The Great Pandemonium
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Magic Wars: DaesseclusMagic Wars Reboot Race:Emesmaa
Orammis Bhasir
Asirri Rokhane
Ursinus Koliel
Legendary Creature- Human Avatar
G: Regenerate target creature.
If The Big JC would leave play, transform him instead.
0/4
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JC the Revived
Legendary Creature- Human Avatar
0: Each opponent gains 2 life. Return JC the revived to it's owner's hand. Activate this ability once one each turn.
4/4
IIW: Create a card that is simple to use, but hard to master.
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I'm not a huge fan of this card. I would just play Cruel Ultimatum, and by turn 7 your opponent's hand should be empty. Cool, though.
Creature - Human Child (M)
WW: ~ becomes a 2/2 Human Soldier with First Strike
WW: If ~ is a Soldier, ~ becomes a 3/3 Human Warrior with First Strike and Vigilance
WW: If ~ is a Warrior, Transform it.
1/1
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Isaac, Knight Captain
W Legendary Creature - Human Knight
Other creatures you control get +1/+1.
WW: ~ becomes a 4/4 Human Advisor with "Other creatures you control get +1/+1 and gain vigilance and first strike."
WW: If ~ is an Advisor, It becomes a 5/5 Human Spirit with Flying and "Other Creatures you control get +1/+1 and gain vigilance, first strike, and are indestructable."
4/4
IIW - A planeswalker of yourself
I'm telling a story, not designing a card. "sigh" I can't figure out how to do both.
Long live CLAN FLAMINGO
Make wall support cards or a legendary wall
Winner is also Judge = 2
Club Flamingo/Megiddo's Magic Pimp Shack = 4
Creature - Human Scout (C)
Whenever Wary Explorer blocks or becomes blocked, look at the top card of your library. If it’s a land card, you may put it onto the battlefield tapped and regenerate Wary Explorer.
“I’m always on the lookout for new places... to hide in.”
1/1
iiwsig
Creature — Lorespun Soldier (U)
XR, Sacrifice The Tragedy of Iskun Pass: The Tragedy of Iskun Pass deals X damage to target creature. That creature's controller gains X life.
The Corvite asked Reste to help man the Dread Legion. A short story later, and he had the perfect volunteer.
2/2
From the short lived Magic Wars. The Lorespun are living stories created by some ancient magic imbued in some giant old lizard-man named Reste. When summoning a Lorespun, you are essentially telling your opponent a story, and watching it play out in front of you. This explains the mechanical tie of having some drawback that grants a bonus to your opponent. They heard the story, after all.
Creature - Human
Vigilance
Whenever ~ attacks or blocks, put a quest counter on it.
When ~ has four quest counters on it, remove each quest counter from it and flip it.
3/3
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Thorn, Princess of Atheia
First strike, vigilance
Soldiers have +1/+1 and vigilance.
WWT: Put two 1/1 white Soldier tokens into play.
6/6
Anyone ever read BONE?
IIW: Comics/Graphic Novels
FILL FILL FILL, FILL FILL THE BOX OH WELL-A FILL FILL FILL, FILL FILL THE BOX
All right, enough. Your new challenge is:
NOT THIS
Make 2 uncommon/common cards that are pretty bad on their own but can combo together to do powerful things that you can draft in a limited environment (like Memory's Journey and Runic Repetition).