Leyh, Hero of Anarchy RRRR
Legendary Creature - Human Hero
When Leyh enters or attacks remove her from combat. Then Leyh deals damage to each creature and player equal to her power.
Whenever another creature dies, exile it and create a treasure token.
At the beginning of each end step, sacrifice all treasure you control. For each treasure sacrificed this way, put a +1/+1 counter on Leyh.
2/4
Edit: dropped "if you do" from first trigger and cleaned up wording.
Unless an effect puts her into play attacking, having her ability trigger on entering doesn't do anything because she can't be removed from combat if she isn't in combat so the "If you do..." part of the effect won't happen. The ability needs to be reworded based on whether you want it to always deal damage on entering or not.
"At the beginning of the end step, sacrifice all treasure. For each treasure sacrificed this way, put a +1/+1 counter on Leyh." - needs to be corrected. You probably meant "at the beginning of your end step". Also, you probably meant "sacrifice all treasures you control" since you can't sacrifice opponent's things.
I agree with rowan, but to simplify the wording I would suggest "Prevent all combat damage that would be dealt to and by Leyh".
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It's meant to trigger each end step not just yours. Is you control needed? As you said you can only sacrifice things you control. I didn't double check the necessary wording.
I considered stopping combat damage but that felt wrong from red and caused issues with her not attacking and being a blocker.
I wanted removal to be a viable answer to her ability but I didn't notice that it effectively stopped the ETB. Removal stopping her ability probably isn't good anyway do dropping the if you do.
I think you can just get rid of the “remove from combat” part then. Wouldn’t that solve the problem?
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I think you can just get rid of the “remove from combat” part then. Wouldn’t that solve the problem?
How does that solve the issue of being a good blocker?
You could make her unable to block. Another option is to make her attack each turn if able.
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Leyh, Hero of Anarchy RRRR
Legendary Creature - Human Hero
When Leyh enters or attacks remove her from combat. Then Leyh deals damage to each creature and player equal to her power.
Whenever another creature dies, exile it and create a treasure token.
At the beginning of each end step, sacrifice all treasure you control. For each treasure sacrificed this way, put a +1/+1 counter on Leyh.
2/4
Edit: dropped "if you do" from first trigger and cleaned up wording.
I agree with rowan, but to simplify the wording I would suggest "Prevent all combat damage that would be dealt to and by Leyh".
pucatrade
big receipts
alpha mox emerald
beta time walk
4 goyfs received
3 liliana of the veil
4 karn liberated
3 force of will
4 grove of the burnwillows
snapcaster mage
3 horizon canopy
2 full art damnation
I considered stopping combat damage but that felt wrong from red and caused issues with her not attacking and being a blocker.
I wanted removal to be a viable answer to her ability but I didn't notice that it effectively stopped the ETB. Removal stopping her ability probably isn't good anyway do dropping the if you do.
pucatrade
big receipts
alpha mox emerald
beta time walk
4 goyfs received
3 liliana of the veil
4 karn liberated
3 force of will
4 grove of the burnwillows
snapcaster mage
3 horizon canopy
2 full art damnation
You could make her unable to block. Another option is to make her attack each turn if able.
pucatrade
big receipts
alpha mox emerald
beta time walk
4 goyfs received
3 liliana of the veil
4 karn liberated
3 force of will
4 grove of the burnwillows
snapcaster mage
3 horizon canopy
2 full art damnation