Artifact Land
T: C
Crew 3
When Ghostship Graveyard becomes crewed it becomes a 3/4 Artifact Spirit creature until end of turn and can’t block or be blocked this turn. If it was crewed by a non-Artifact or a non-Spirit creature, destroy it at the end of turn.
You have a significant problem in that you are turning a land into a creature without any p/t while it waits for its triggered ability to turn it into a creature with p/t. Out of curiosity why have you chosen to move the P/t out of the box and put it in the ability? If you undo this change it fixes the problem completely.
You have a significant problem in that you are turning a land into a creature without any p/t while it waits for its triggered ability to turn it into a creature with p/t. Out of curiosity why have you chosen to move the P/t out of the box and put it in the ability? If you undo this change it fixes the problem completely.
I figured it was just a limitation of whatever was being used to mock up the card
The wording about the non-artifact or non-spirit is confusing to me.
What gets destroyed at end of turn?
Is it the land or the creatures that crewed it?
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You have a significant problem in that you are turning a land into a creature without any p/t while it waits for its triggered ability to turn it into a creature with p/t. Out of curiosity why have you chosen to move the P/t out of the box and put it in the ability? If you undo this change it fixes the problem completely.
Well I was trying to go for it being a manland but at the same time instead of paying mana, it gets crewed instead like a vehicle. What would be a better way to work the card you think if that is what I am wanting?
You have a significant problem in that you are turning a land into a creature without any p/t while it waits for its triggered ability to turn it into a creature with p/t. Out of curiosity why have you chosen to move the P/t out of the box and put it in the ability? If you undo this change it fixes the problem completely.
Well I was trying to go for it being a manland but at the same time instead of paying mana, it gets crewed instead like a vehicle. What would be a better way to work the card you think if that is what I am wanting?
don't make it a triggered ability. Just give it the abilities it wants to have. The only trigger it needs is to give it creature types and a static ability that says its that type as long as it's a creature is better.
This would need to etb tapped at least some of the time. Also, needs the Vehicle subtype.
I like the crewed by spirits flavor, but the crewed by artifacts is weird. I’d make it spirits and pirates rather than spirits and artifacts.
I’d increase the power to 4/4 as well, as tapping 3 power to get 3 power isn’t a great value
But wait, can it be a land and a Vehicle at the same time?
It can, as long as it is an Artifact as well since vehicle is an Artifact sub-type rather than a Land sub-type.
Your card can be formatted thusly:
Ghostship Graveyard
Artifact Land - Vehicle
T: C
Crew 3
When Ghostship Graveyard becomes crewed, if it was crewed by a non-Artifact or a non-Spirit creature, destroy it at the end of turn.
3/4
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T: C
Crew 3
When Ghostship Graveyard becomes crewed it becomes a 3/4 Artifact Spirit creature until end of turn and can’t block or be blocked this turn. If it was crewed by a non-Artifact or a non-Spirit creature, destroy it at the end of turn.
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Art is just for demonstration, I don't not claim or own the art. Credit to rymin07 from Deviant Art.
https://www.deviantart.com/rymin07/art/Where-Airship-dies-563026711
I like the crewed by spirits flavor, but the crewed by artifacts is weird. I’d make it spirits and pirates rather than spirits and artifacts.
I’d increase the power to 4/4 as well, as tapping 3 power to get 3 power isn’t a great value
I figured it was just a limitation of whatever was being used to mock up the card
What gets destroyed at end of turn?
Is it the land or the creatures that crewed it?
I would guess that the land would be destroyed.
pucatrade
big receipts
alpha mox emerald
beta time walk
4 goyfs received
3 liliana of the veil
4 karn liberated
3 force of will
4 grove of the burnwillows
snapcaster mage
3 horizon canopy
2 full art damnation
But wait, can it be a land and a Vehicle at the same time?
Well I was trying to go for it being a manland but at the same time instead of paying mana, it gets crewed instead like a vehicle. What would be a better way to work the card you think if that is what I am wanting?
It can, as long as it is an Artifact as well since vehicle is an Artifact sub-type rather than a Land sub-type.
Your card can be formatted thusly:
Ghostship Graveyard
Artifact Land - Vehicle
T: C
Crew 3
When Ghostship Graveyard becomes crewed, if it was crewed by a non-Artifact or a non-Spirit creature, destroy it at the end of turn.
3/4