Choose X target permanents you control. You may have any number of those permanent gain indestructible until the end of turn. The rest of those permanents gain "When this card is put into the graveyard from the battlefield, draw a card." until the end of turn.
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Not sure if the wording is right, but the core of it is that you may choose to protect up to X target permanents you control. When those that weren't protected dies this turn, you draw a card.
EDIT: Better rule text.
EDIT 2: There's also another way to phrase this: "Choose X target permanents you control. Until end of turn, each of them gains your choice of indestructible or "When this permanent is put into a graveyard, draw a card."
I don't understand what this card is supposed to do. As written you draw a card when a creature you gave indestructible to (forever? I'm assuming it's supposed to be EOT) dies, but your description says you draw a card when a permanent that wasn't given indestructible dies.
I don't understand what this card is supposed to do. As written you draw a card when a creature you gave indestructible to (forever? I'm assuming it's supposed to be EOT) dies, but your description says you draw a card when a permanent that wasn't given indestructible dies.
His intention was that each permanent targeted is either indestructible or effectively gains "When this creature dies, draw a card." (and I assume "until EOT" was intended for both.)
So, first off, only creatures "die", other permanent types "are put into the graveyard". Only a semantical difference, but that's how they are templated. Tadpole is right that the wording needs to be cleared up to avoid confusion.
Martyr's Bargain
XWW
Instant
Choose X target permanents you control. You may have any number of those permanent gain indestructible until the end of turn. The rest of those permanents gain "When this card is put into the graveyard from the battlefield, draw a card." until the end of turn.
I don't understand what this card is supposed to do. As written you draw a card when a creature you gave indestructible to (forever? I'm assuming it's supposed to be EOT) dies, but your description says you draw a card when a permanent that wasn't given indestructible dies.
His intention was that each permanent targeted is either indestructible or effectively gains "When this creature dies, draw a card." (and I assume "until EOT" was intended for both.)
So, first off, only creatures "die", other permanent types "are put into the graveyard". Only a semantical difference, but that's how they are templated. Tadpole is right that the wording needs to be cleared up to avoid confusion.
Martyr's Bargain
XWW
Instant
Choose X target permanents you control. You may have any number of those permanent gain indestructible until the end of turn. The rest of those permanents gain "When this card is put into the graveyard from the battlefield, draw a card." until the end of turn.
XWW
Instant
Choose X target permanents you control. You may have any number of those permanent gain indestructible until the end of turn. The rest of those permanents gain "When this card is put into the graveyard from the battlefield, draw a card." until the end of turn.
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Not sure if the wording is right, but the core of it is that you may choose to protect up to X target permanents you control. When those that weren't protected dies this turn, you draw a card.
EDIT: Better rule text.
EDIT 2: There's also another way to phrase this: "Choose X target permanents you control. Until end of turn, each of them gains your choice of indestructible or "When this permanent is put into a graveyard, draw a card."
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His intention was that each permanent targeted is either indestructible or effectively gains "When this creature dies, draw a card." (and I assume "until EOT" was intended for both.)
So, first off, only creatures "die", other permanent types "are put into the graveyard". Only a semantical difference, but that's how they are templated. Tadpole is right that the wording needs to be cleared up to avoid confusion.
Martyr's Bargain
XWW
Instant
Choose X target permanents you control. You may have any number of those permanent gain indestructible until the end of turn. The rest of those permanents gain "When this card is put into the graveyard from the battlefield, draw a card." until the end of turn.
Thank you, your wording is much clearer.
Shu Yun, the Silent Tempest WUR Voltron Control
Temmet, Vizier of Naktamun WU Unblockable Mirror Trickery
Ra's al Ghul (Sidar Kondo) and Face-Down Ninjas
Brudiclad, Token Engineer
Vaevictis (VV2) the Dire Lantern
Rona, Disciple of Gix
Tiana the Auror
Hallar
Ulrich the Politician
Zur the Rebel
Scorpion, Locust, Scarab, Egyptian Gods
O-Kagachi, Mathas, Mairsil
"Non-Tribal" Tribal Generals, Eggs