Welcome to the fourth flavor contest in the process of development of Entropic Vortex.
This time the card is a known one, previously released in the main thread:
I'll be selecting the winning flavor after five days counting from now. This will be one of the ethernal spells in my magic plane, so don't waste this chance to pass to the history!! ;P
If Ondarius agree to add a speaker who said that prhase (I have one of my characters), and if everyone helps to fix a possible detail to be fixed, we have a winner.
"All things start from the earth. All things want to return to the earth. I just give them what they want."
what about:
"All things come from the earth. All things want to return to the earth. I just give them what they want."
It sounds better or its the same? (my english again) :/
Thanks to everyone and I hope to see you back in the next contest! ^^
About having it be a quote from a character: I REALLY wanted to do that originally, but wasnt sure how u would take me just putting a random name there :-P
This time the card is a known one, previously released in the main thread:
I'll be selecting the winning flavor after five days counting from now. This will be one of the ethernal spells in my magic plane, so don't waste this chance to pass to the history!! ;P
Let's go! ^^
What once was there was now still air.
From ep. Who kicks ass
Thanks to PurpleD for the awesome banner!
(Semi-retired)
If Ondarius agree to add a speaker who said that prhase (I have one of my characters), and if everyone helps to fix a possible detail to be fixed, we have a winner.
"All things start from the earth. All things want to return to the earth. I just give them what they want."
what about:
"All things come from the earth. All things want to return to the earth. I just give them what they want."
It sounds better or its the same? (my english again) :/
Thanks to everyone and I hope to see you back in the next contest! ^^
Come does sound a lot better! i approve!
About having it be a quote from a character: I REALLY wanted to do that originally, but wasnt sure how u would take me just putting a random name there :-P
From ep. Who kicks ass
So we have a winner! Congrats Ondarius! And thanks to everyone for taking participation. ^^
EDIT: Even, what about this redaction:
"All things come from the earth. All things want to return there. I just give them what they want."
It's even better or not?
Sorry about the corrections, but an ended flavor can't turn over. :/
All things come from the earth. All things wish to return there. I just give them what they wish.
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From ep. Who kicks ass
I think we got a final version. What about this one?
"All things come from the earth. All things wish to return there. I just give them what they want."
—Endenil, planeswalker
I hope you like it Ondarius! ^^ (and congrats again!)