I smell waffles?? YAY!!! Anyways, sorry purpleD. I didn't think of the night skin. Although if you plan to read it, it's not like the 12th chapter where ...
WARNING!!! SEVERE TRUE SPOILERS,AS I DON'T LIE!!
Razia is brutally killed by Szadek...btw, he teams up with Momir Vig and tries to truly destroy the Guildpact.
Currently eating: Turkey panini with chips and celery
EDIT: THERE WILL BE NO VIOLENCE IN THIS COFFEE HOUSE!!!...Oh wait...purpleD is already dead...:crying:
Your probally right cuz thats how we work...NONSTOP!
OH right, I have a life...
Funny thing happened to a friend of mine today...(kinda friend) she was part of a group of 11th grade girls, they hang out and all that. The problem with her is, she drinks and smokes and other Unmentioned stuff, they don't so Sadie had a party and didn't invite "her", "She" found out about it and got Pissed at Sadie. Now Sadie and Group don't talk to "her" because of how she acts...Its rather funny and about time somone told "her" how they think. Another awkward thing Is that "she" used to go out with my best friend...It was kindof a wierd relationship...but that ended, kindof horribly...At least "she" is moving in 2 weeks.
YAY
EDIT, that was cheap...
ummm I research my self back into the library!
To touch her lips as soft as morning dew,
An appetite I now cannot resist.
Held together by eternal glue,
As though this was the first time that we kissed.
And throughout our sweet and long embrace,
Our love will slowly spirit us away.
Forever will I feel your lovely taste
As we go tumbling in the auburn hay.
Throughout there is no time to disagree,
Now you speak and tell me to desist.
But I had thought for sake of you and me,
You would never tear me from my bliss.
And though this poem is quite lewd
It would be nice to have you in the nude.
I like it alot.
Oh, this fight blows. I have a machine gun! YOU LOSE!
Shadowfox: Yeah, you do feel pretty guilty after laughing at it, but probably not as bad as you would feel for this lady. http://www.killsometime.com/Video/video.asp?ID=457 I'd bet she could sue for trauma, hell, I would.
To touch her lips as soft as morning dew,
An appetite I now cannot resist.
Held together by eternal glue,
As though this was the first time that we kissed.
And throughout our sweet and long embrace,
Our love will slowly spirit us away.
Forever will I feel your lovely taste
As we go tumbling in the auburn hay.
Throughout there is no time to disagree,
Now you speak and tell me to desist.
But I had thought for sake of you and me,
You would never tear me from my bliss.
And though this poem is quite lewd
It would be nice to have you in the nude.
I like it alot.
Oh, this fight blows. I have a machine gun! YOU LOSE!
Photon Eater has protection from all colors, artifacts, and lands as long as you control a MTGS account.
Afraid you'll have to try a bit harder. Now, Divine Intervention, it's time to cut it out.
Hmmm... how serious is this piece supposed to be? It's pretty good up until the final two lines, which in my opinion sort of put a serious damper on it.
Also, rethink the use of the word glue in a romantic context. It... just doesn't evoke a very nice image.
But ethersphere is the one to turn to for classical poetry, he's got a better sense for it. I'm classically trained, but have little taste for traditional poetry, so I'm not the best judge.
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[16:23] Alacar Leoricar: maybe if you do it'll make the porn more meaningful
I can't judge poetry, so I'm going to reserve judgment for someone who knows and has an appreciation for it.
Well, I'm staying out of this fight, but I'll watch it... *Orders popcorn and sips tea*
Hey, Omna, can my title be "Snobby tea drinker"?
That would be the Windreaver to my Morphling I think, considering I am already the resident Tea Connaisseur. But feel free to take it.
(I promise I'll stop being so snarky in a bit guys, I've had a long day.)
Ok ok...I like the last lines but If a few more people tell me to change them I will. Thanks for the feedback
I think it just takes the subtlety of the emotional context and rips it apart by directly stating it. It's sort of like tacking "And this is my poem about sex, THE END". But if you really like it, feel free to keep it.
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[16:23] Alacar Leoricar: maybe if you do it'll make the porn more meaningful
Its raining, Poring, Im almost snoring....zzz...zzz...zzz...zzz
OH right, umm why are you fighting about a title that Omna gives you, its not like you make your title, she gives it to you after observing your posts.
Well, I was going to go for a bike ride, but the rain made me stop. I suppose I should write my report for health...
OUch!!! That really hurt. Sorry Photon, but I didnt...
*gets smacked with iron again*
... know that it meant that much to you...
*wakes away dizzily*
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comon there should be no fighting here
*stands between them...*
thanks DarkNightCavalier for the sig!
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Stop talking.
*stabs you with a kitchen skewer*
*covers himself in blanket
There now I guess I can't stop your fighting...
*sneaks away...
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He really doesnt like me
* PurpleD keels over and dies
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*Removes blanket, pulls out lightsabre*
Thats it! Im going Starwars on you guys!
*swings it in cool jedi action
HIYA!
thanks DarkNightCavalier for the sig!
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WARNING!!! SEVERE TRUE SPOILERS,AS I DON'T LIE!!
Currently eating: Turkey panini with chips and celery
EDIT: THERE WILL BE NO VIOLENCE IN THIS COFFEE HOUSE!!!...Oh wait...purpleD is already dead...:crying:
I stabbed him, actually.
But you can be next.
*thrusts grappler face down into the deep fryer*
Take that!
*swings lightsabre at photon
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Counterspell, Swords to Plowshares
Sorry no. You aren't awesome enough for an action sequence.
*cracks his knuckles*
I'm done now. Someone get me some tea.
OH right, I have a life...
Funny thing happened to a friend of mine today...(kinda friend) she was part of a group of 11th grade girls, they hang out and all that. The problem with her is, she drinks and smokes and other Unmentioned stuff, they don't so Sadie had a party and didn't invite "her", "She" found out about it and got Pissed at Sadie. Now Sadie and Group don't talk to "her" because of how she acts...Its rather funny and about time somone told "her" how they think. Another awkward thing Is that "she" used to go out with my best friend...It was kindof a wierd relationship...but that ended, kindof horribly...At least "she" is moving in 2 weeks.
YAY
EDIT, that was cheap...
ummm I research my self back into the library!
thanks DarkNightCavalier for the sig!
My Trade Thread
Heres my new sonnet! Please give comments!
Sonnet
To touch her lips as soft as morning dew,
An appetite I now cannot resist.
Held together by eternal glue,
As though this was the first time that we kissed.
And throughout our sweet and long embrace,
Our love will slowly spirit us away.
Forever will I feel your lovely taste
As we go tumbling in the auburn hay.
Throughout there is no time to disagree,
Now you speak and tell me to desist.
But I had thought for sake of you and me,
You would never tear me from my bliss.
And though this poem is quite lewd
It would be nice to have you in the nude.
I like it alot.
Oh, this fight blows. I have a machine gun! YOU LOSE!
*draws*
NO I DREW MYSELF...
*plays*
there now Im back!
*uses force to jam gun*
thanks DarkNightCavalier for the sig!
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Photon Eater has protection from all colors, artifacts, and lands as long as you control a MTGS account.
Afraid you'll have to try a bit harder. Now, Divine Intervention, it's time to cut it out.
Hmmm... how serious is this piece supposed to be? It's pretty good up until the final two lines, which in my opinion sort of put a serious damper on it.
Also, rethink the use of the word glue in a romantic context. It... just doesn't evoke a very nice image.
But ethersphere is the one to turn to for classical poetry, he's got a better sense for it. I'm classically trained, but have little taste for traditional poetry, so I'm not the best judge.
Well, I'm staying out of this fight, but I'll watch it... *Orders popcorn and sips tea*
Hey, Omna, can my title be "Snobby tea drinker"?
*Alright, hows this for a way to kill Photon? You Don't!*
That would be the Windreaver to my Morphling I think, considering I am already the resident Tea Connaisseur. But feel free to take it.
(I promise I'll stop being so snarky in a bit guys, I've had a long day.)
I think it just takes the subtlety of the emotional context and rips it apart by directly stating it. It's sort of like tacking "And this is my poem about sex, THE END". But if you really like it, feel free to keep it.
Hey hey hey. I'm the one who sips tea in every post, not you. *Sips tea in an obnoxious manner*
I'm always sipping tea, and have been sipping all sorts of snobbishly obscure teas since day 1.
Day one was a month ago, so being elitist doesn't work. Sorry. No offense meant...
OH right, umm why are you fighting about a title that Omna gives you, its not like you make your title, she gives it to you after observing your posts.
Well, I was going to go for a bike ride, but the rain made me stop. I suppose I should write my report for health...
thanks DarkNightCavalier for the sig!
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