not sure what this is about, and i obviously don't relate to it, but it flows well, and lots of uncommon words used to make this an interesting read. hopefully you don't get offended, but is this about an acid trip?
I take no offense, but it is not about an acid trip. Its about dreams, more or less. Also, I like the username-comment match up.
That would've been my second guess, i felt a non reality vibe while reading this, i guess my mind just skipped the obvious and went straight for the less likely acid trip. Now that you mention it, i read over it again and it makes more sense. It's didn't lack in anything, i just completely failed to understand it, probably because i'm pretty new to the whole poetry thing.
I take no offense, but it is not about an acid trip. Its about dreams, more or less.
I was just about to ask if it was about dreams. Very cool imagery, and what awesome dreams to have! Was this inspired by dreams you had, or wish you had?
A thousand burning blossoms,
A field, full of snow.
I saw their ocean;
An abyss of fallen stars,
The mirror broken.
I saw their people;
Balanced 'twixt fire and frost,
E'er beautiful.
I saw their castles;
Every stone a memory,
Each spire a soul.
I saw the faeries,
once, and forever after,
behind closed eyes.
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That would've been my second guess, i felt a non reality vibe while reading this, i guess my mind just skipped the obvious and went straight for the less likely acid trip. Now that you mention it, i read over it again and it makes more sense. It's didn't lack in anything, i just completely failed to understand it, probably because i'm pretty new to the whole poetry thing.
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I was just about to ask if it was about dreams. Very cool imagery, and what awesome dreams to have! Was this inspired by dreams you had, or wish you had?
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