I figured I would post some of them here to see what others think.
======================================================= The One Who Beat Up the Sun
I vent and I seethe
All The anger that breeds
Inside my mind and my mouth
the violence that breathes
as the rage inside me
only escapes though a shout
with quickness and speed
I am deconstructing
everything I've cared about
So here I go.
Other things precede
the birds and the bees
I will not concede
instead we will get in a bout
The anger it feeds
and I guarantee
you're just like a weed
that slowly dies in a drought
So F*** all the seeds
you've planted in me
I just want to be
happier day in and day out
Don’t make me believe
my hearts on my sleeve
I think you should leave
before my mind starts to doubt
I hope you will heed
and start to recede
please do not proceed
into my road or my route
I look at my creed
how it affects me
and slowly I see
that it’s better for me to be out
====================================================== Wasting the Day in the Rain on a Gray Tuesday Morning
I vent and I seethe
All The anger that breeds
Inside my mind and my mouth
the violence that breathes
as the rage inside me
only escapes though a shout
with quickness and speed
I am deconstructing
everything I've cared about
So here I go.
Other things precede
the birds and the bees
I will not concede
instead we will get in a bout
The anger it feeds
and I guarantee
you're just like a weed
that slowly dies in a drought
So **** all the seeds
you've planted in me
I just want to be
happier day in and day out
Don’t make me believe
my hearts on my sleeve
I think you should leave
before my mind starts to doubt
I hope you will heed
and start to recede
please do not proceed
into my road or my route
I look at my creed
how it affects me
and slowly I see
that it’s better for me to be out
JJ: Ironically this was written on a sunny monday afternoon....
======================================================== Stupid Fish
I'm lost in your wake
The river rushes straight, I know
one way to go, you're bait I'm a fish
Stupid like a fish, I know
It's a shiny hook, you as bait but look
maybe its good, I can't wait
I'm a stupid fish.
So I go.
I catch up, I bite in, sink teeth taste blood meat
rip though flesh and barriers of bone I know
this delight, I got it but wait, that was bait I know.
The hook,
Just a shiny glow in your wake, I take bait, can't let go
I'm caught like a stupid fish
oh no, the hook
it pulls on my lips
slowly I rip through the wake,
The hook, I feel the rip, I feel
The air, I feel your grip, it's
on my skin, I am a stupid fish
You're a Crook, you take
me using Bait on hook
you crook, I can't grow in
your grip. Look Crook,
let me go, I know you know
I took your bait. you've had your wish
please let go, because
I am just a stupid fish.
========================================================= What Was Once Lost...
Operas sing in the rain
and I will sing int he sun
Hope will discover, what was once lost
and I will come back from my run
dreaming I take you back to the bed
willows grow in the streets
Hope will discover, what was once lost
and i'll tap along to the beat
riding in submarines under the sea
which turn into planes in the sky
Hope will discover, what was once lost
and i'll wipe the tears from your eyes
smile at me from the back of a boat
I hope you are not too wet
Hope will discover, what was once lost
and i'll wake in a cold sweat
lust will love ladies and men
our hands are battered and torn
Hope will discover, what was once lost
and new children are born
========================================================= Today, Today...
Today, today, sans light of day
By my side and in the fray
I help her up and wish to stay
I know not what I have to say
Today, Today, the light is gray
The moon has stopped and gone away
And hope will help at least I pray
I know that now I am astray
Today, Today, a worst of day
I loathe these words, the way they sway
knowing no one can betray decay
as my life is on display
======================================================= The 3 Seconds I laugh, then say "Ohh, nothing" to the Other Person
Time tells us freely
Minutes came to be
sullen moments compacting
into old chaotic beings
Lifting down my heavy eyes
my muse will come to me
She’ll tell a tale of bitterness
and nihilistic glee
Flickering inside my head
Ideas make me laugh
Tidal waves will wash away
the patterns in the sand
Time told us freely
how minutes came to be
sullen moments compacted
Into old chaotic beings
Lifted down my heavy eyes
My muse has came to me
She told a tale of relevance
and what it’s like to sleep
========================================================= The Slow Descent
We wake in the night
and sleep in the day
like sharks in the sea
we prowl for our prey
that will be torn apart.
slowly limb by limb.
and like ants in a pool
they won't sink or swim
The Indian giver will take
back what it once gave
like the lonely little ants
that fall to watery graves
As this is our life
a continuous mare
we wake in the day
trapped in the snare
Most hope is lost
the rest is all fake
living in a dream
awaiting our wake
memories are slipping
The night takes them away
so we fall back asleep
and dream of our prey
========================================================= Maybe You Can Make Sense Of It
Riffling Rifling Trifling Thieves
whispering whimpering
Twilight comes and we do not sleep
upon a story or a thrip-nap,
do I dream or watch the book I read?
Think now I must now think now I trust
maybe its lust. Or greed or both.
I’m greedy for you are
Gorgeous.
I want all of you, that I can have
Just for a little, in a night, or more
or might I say my dear aunt sally
That is last in first out you know
But alas I am I know it’s true you do know
that I knew, that we know together.
But with a little help from my friends,
the thieves with honor. For we not thieves
but the hopeful owners of a girls heart.
For I am not Earth’s gift to women,
Just the gift for the one I love.
Im Ready are you? Did you hear its true
thrip-nap is made up.
JJ: This was written at 4 ish in the morning after trying to force myself to go into polyphastic sleeping.
yeah - obviously I disagree with you, John. Spam Warning!.....Amazing - even in a forum where posts don't count, there's spam. That proves that getting rid of the post-count won't help getting rid of spam! Thans for this excellent example! - Craven
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=======================================================
The One Who Beat Up the Sun
I vent and I seethe
All The anger that breeds
Inside my mind and my mouth
the violence that breathes
as the rage inside me
only escapes though a shout
with quickness and speed
I am deconstructing
everything I've cared about
So here I go.
Other things precede
the birds and the bees
I will not concede
instead we will get in a bout
The anger it feeds
and I guarantee
you're just like a weed
that slowly dies in a drought
So F*** all the seeds
you've planted in me
I just want to be
happier day in and day out
Don’t make me believe
my hearts on my sleeve
I think you should leave
before my mind starts to doubt
I hope you will heed
and start to recede
please do not proceed
into my road or my route
I look at my creed
how it affects me
and slowly I see
that it’s better for me to be out
======================================================
Wasting the Day in the Rain on a Gray Tuesday Morning
I vent and I seethe
All The anger that breeds
Inside my mind and my mouth
the violence that breathes
as the rage inside me
only escapes though a shout
with quickness and speed
I am deconstructing
everything I've cared about
So here I go.
Other things precede
the birds and the bees
I will not concede
instead we will get in a bout
The anger it feeds
and I guarantee
you're just like a weed
that slowly dies in a drought
So **** all the seeds
you've planted in me
I just want to be
happier day in and day out
Don’t make me believe
my hearts on my sleeve
I think you should leave
before my mind starts to doubt
I hope you will heed
and start to recede
please do not proceed
into my road or my route
I look at my creed
how it affects me
and slowly I see
that it’s better for me to be out
JJ: Ironically this was written on a sunny monday afternoon....
========================================================
Stupid Fish
I'm lost in your wake
The river rushes straight, I know
one way to go, you're bait I'm a fish
Stupid like a fish, I know
It's a shiny hook, you as bait but look
maybe its good, I can't wait
I'm a stupid fish.
So I go.
I catch up, I bite in, sink teeth taste blood meat
rip though flesh and barriers of bone I know
this delight, I got it but wait, that was bait I know.
The hook,
Just a shiny glow in your wake, I take bait, can't let go
I'm caught like a stupid fish
oh no, the hook
it pulls on my lips
slowly I rip through the wake,
The hook, I feel the rip, I feel
The air, I feel your grip, it's
on my skin, I am a stupid fish
You're a Crook, you take
me using Bait on hook
you crook, I can't grow in
your grip. Look Crook,
let me go, I know you know
I took your bait. you've had your wish
please let go, because
I am just a stupid fish.
=========================================================
What Was Once Lost...
Operas sing in the rain
and I will sing int he sun
Hope will discover, what was once lost
and I will come back from my run
dreaming I take you back to the bed
willows grow in the streets
Hope will discover, what was once lost
and i'll tap along to the beat
riding in submarines under the sea
which turn into planes in the sky
Hope will discover, what was once lost
and i'll wipe the tears from your eyes
smile at me from the back of a boat
I hope you are not too wet
Hope will discover, what was once lost
and i'll wake in a cold sweat
lust will love ladies and men
our hands are battered and torn
Hope will discover, what was once lost
and new children are born
=========================================================
Today, Today...
Today, today, sans light of day
By my side and in the fray
I help her up and wish to stay
I know not what I have to say
Today, Today, the light is gray
The moon has stopped and gone away
And hope will help at least I pray
I know that now I am astray
Today, Today, a worst of day
I loathe these words, the way they sway
knowing no one can betray decay
as my life is on display
=======================================================
The 3 Seconds I laugh, then say "Ohh, nothing" to the Other Person
Time tells us freely
Minutes came to be
sullen moments compacting
into old chaotic beings
Lifting down my heavy eyes
my muse will come to me
She’ll tell a tale of bitterness
and nihilistic glee
Flickering inside my head
Ideas make me laugh
Tidal waves will wash away
the patterns in the sand
Time told us freely
how minutes came to be
sullen moments compacted
Into old chaotic beings
Lifted down my heavy eyes
My muse has came to me
She told a tale of relevance
and what it’s like to sleep
=========================================================
The Slow Descent
We wake in the night
and sleep in the day
like sharks in the sea
we prowl for our prey
that will be torn apart.
slowly limb by limb.
and like ants in a pool
they won't sink or swim
The Indian giver will take
back what it once gave
like the lonely little ants
that fall to watery graves
As this is our life
a continuous mare
we wake in the day
trapped in the snare
Most hope is lost
the rest is all fake
living in a dream
awaiting our wake
memories are slipping
The night takes them away
so we fall back asleep
and dream of our prey
=========================================================
Maybe You Can Make Sense Of It
Riffling Rifling Trifling Thieves
whispering whimpering
Twilight comes and we do not sleep
upon a story or a thrip-nap,
do I dream or watch the book I read?
Think now I must now think now I trust
maybe its lust. Or greed or both.
I’m greedy for you are
Gorgeous.
I want all of you, that I can have
Just for a little, in a night, or more
or might I say my dear aunt sally
That is last in first out you know
But alas I am I know it’s true you do know
that I knew, that we know together.
But with a little help from my friends,
the thieves with honor. For we not thieves
but the hopeful owners of a girls heart.
For I am not Earth’s gift to women,
Just the gift for the one I love.
Im Ready are you? Did you hear its true
thrip-nap is made up.
JJ: This was written at 4 ish in the morning after trying to force myself to go into polyphastic sleeping.