I would think this would make a cuter red card. There has been at least one other, bouncing ball threaten enchantment before in that colour, and blue is just a funny place to put threaten these days to begin with. Also coercion is a pretty iconic bad common.
Hellish OfferingXR
Sorcery (U)
Hellish Offering deals X damage to target creature or player, you gain life equal to your devotion to black. "The dark powers of this world demand sacrifice, by no means must it be self-sacrifice."
Hellish OfferingXR
Sorcery (U)
Hellish Offering deals X damage to target creature or player, you gain life equal to your devotion to black. "The dark powers of this world demand sacrifice, by no means must it be self-sacrifice."
Interesting, rather unique life drain spell.
Time Slip Trap :symu::symu::symg::5mana:
Instant - Trap
Split Second
If an opponent is taking an extra turn, you may pay rather than play Time Slip Trap's mana cost.
End the turn. Exile Time Slip Trap.
"With a bit of a mind flip...You are into the time slip...and nothing can ever be the same"
Time Slip Trap :symu::symu::symg::5mana:
Instant - Trap
Split Second
If an opponent is taking an extra turn, you may pay rather than play Time Slip Trap's mana cost.
End the turn. Exile Time Slip Trap.
"With a bit of a mind flip...You are into the time slip...and nothing can ever be the same"
I don't think that 0 is the right cost for the end the extra turn, but it's close enough. A split second time stop that costs 1G more. I guess it fits in green? It sort of has the feels of a Seedtime?
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Coat of Blubber - U
Enchantment - Aura
Enchant Creature.
Enchanted creature gets +0/+3 has protection from Snow.
Whenever enchanted creature becomes the target of a red spell untap enchanted creature, sacrifice Coat of blubber, then draw a card.
@igzex, with time slip trap:
loved the flavor text:D if prophet of Kruphix is any indication messing with teh time stream is moving into blue green, so points for having a spot on colour identity for a fairly rare ability. And the trap mechanic works well here.
I have one issue with this card. to get max benefit out of playing this card youd need to play it during an opponents turn before they untap and draw. thats a very brief window of time. its not that this would neccesarily make the card much harder to play ( unless of course your playing with a lightning fast rules lawyer) but that it makes a card like this less fun to play. this may just be my timmy sensibilities at play, its just they haven't really done anything worth foiling yet and so i wouldn't fell the same sense of smug triumph if i'd countered a massive creature or torn apart a major attack thanks to a combat trick.
whoops. sorry blue, i didn't notice your card there.
hmm its either a buff with the downside of arming a red opponent with removal or if you happen to be red/blue removal with the downside of buffing an opponents creature first. also belated cantrip.
hmmm, while versatile this card that versatility is upset by too much dependence on other factors. and a tad too much downside. i'd rather just have a buff or a removal with downside (in exhange for a cheaper price or out of colour identity).
You're not really convincing me the wording is incorrect by showing me a card that does exactly what i want in the way that i want it to happen.
It's what you want that I'm questioning. Riddle me this: Why should tokens and reanimated dudes be denied bloodthirst privileges?
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Conjure--First of all, needs a shuffle clause. I'm guessing you intended it as an alternate cost that adds a creature tutor effect and attaches the aura to the tutored creature.
To add modularity, why not Conjure 2--2GG, so the tutored creature isn't necessarily limited to a particular CMC?
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Walkabout1GG
Enchantment (U) 1GG: Target creature you control with no +1/+1 counters on it that hasn't been chosen for this ability this turn becomes 0/1 until end of turn. Put a +1/+1 counter on that creature at the beginning of the next end step. Activate this ability only during a player's upkeep.
Props to anyone who can correctly guess which card inspired this design w/o peeking at Gatherer or magiccards.info
@igzex, with time slip trap:
loved the flavor text:D if prophet of Kruphix is any indication messing with teh time stream is moving into blue green, so points for having a spot on colour identity for a fairly rare ability. And the trap mechanic works well here.
I have one issue with this card. to get max benefit out of playing this card youd need to play it during an opponents turn before they untap and draw. thats a very brief window of time. its not that this would neccesarily make the card much harder to play ( unless of course your playing with a lightning fast rules lawyer) but that it makes a card like this less fun to play. this may just be my timmy sensibilities at play, its just they haven't really done anything worth foiling yet and so i wouldn't fell the same sense of smug triumph if i'd countered a massive creature or torn apart a major attack thanks to a combat trick.
conjure 2gg - search your library for a creature card with cmc 2 or less and put it into play with this card attached.
Not expensive enough. 2 cmc for 4 mana and you get an additional effect. Look how expensive Bestow is. There's a reason cards like bestow are so expensive and living weapon gives you a 0/0.
It's what you want that I'm questioning. Riddle me this: Why should tokens and reanimated dudes be denied bloodthirst privileges?
nah i want it to affect future creatures you cast. The other emblems have the ability to deal with creatures already on the battlefield. Sounds like something you want not moi.
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Conjure--First of all, needs a shuffle clause. I'm guessing you intended it as an alternate cost that adds a creature tutor effect and attaches the aura to the tutored creature.
To add modularity, why not Conjure 2--2GG, so the tutored creature isn't necessarily limited to a particular CMC?
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Walkabout1GG
Enchantment (U) 1GG: Target creature you control with no +1/+1 counters on it that hasn't been chosen for this ability this turn becomes 0/1 until end of turn. Put a +1/+1 counter on that creature at the beginning of the next end step. Activate this ability only during a player's upkeep.
Props to anyone who can correctly guess which card inspired this design w/o peeking at Gatherer or magiccards.info
It's a walkabout. I'm mr. Birdman.
Looks like a cocoon esque ability. I think it's super restrictive all for the idea that you get a +1/+1 counter. Why did you make them go through so many hoops?
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Portlandia
Land - Island
Portlandia enters the battlefield tapped. 2U,t, discard a land card: Draw a card.
Walkabout1GG
Enchantment (U) 1GG: Target creature you control with no +1/+1 counters on it that hasn't been chosen for this ability this turn becomes 0/1 until end of turn. Put a +1/+1 counter on that creature at the beginning of the next end step. Activate this ability only during a player's upkeep.
Props to anyone who can correctly guess which card inspired this design w/o peeking at Gatherer or magiccards.info
The super long "with no +1/+1 counters on it that hasn't been chosen for this ability this turn" seems awkward. I understand the first part, but if the activation cost is so high and the creature becomes 0/1, you should be rewarded for making the creature last that long and not have to deal with not being able to choose it again on a second activation.
Elin Tree Dungeon: Southern Forest Land {U} T: Add G to your mana pool. 2G,T: Put a 1/1 green Ooze creature token onto the battlefield.
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Ur green land is very good in limited. especially with populate.
Blood Hunter 1WB
creature - vampire (U)
Flying 1WBTarget player sacrifices a non black or white creature, you gain life equal to its toughness.
2/2
well it's definitely not an uncommon at that cost to activate. Repeatable cheap removal even restrictive can be devastating in a limited format and amazing in a constructed format that doesn't favor white/black creatures.
Portlandia
Land - Island
Portlandia enters the battlefield tapped. 2U,t, discard a land card: Draw a card.
Seems...okay, I guess? I mean, the cantrip effect is okay.
Invisibility Cloak4
Enchantment Artifact - Aura Equipment (r)
Enchant permanent
Attached permanent can't be blocked and has hexproof.
Equip - Reveal the top card of your library.
Seems pretty powerful at 4 mana. Also, while this is an enchantment artifact, it has no static ability like the others. I would fix that.
Dead Reformed3BB
Creature - Shapeshifter
Changeling
When you cast ~, you may exile a creature card from your graveyard. If you do, ~ enters the battlefield as a copy of that creature and has changeling.
0/0
Invisibility Cloak4
Enchantment Artifact - Aura Equipment (r)
Enchant permanent
Attached permanent can't be blocked and has hexproof.
Equip - Reveal the top card of your library.
Hmm... having two types and one subtype of each of those two types is quite a lot to put on a card. This basically only reads enchant creature, since Equipment that's attached to a noncreature permanent falls off instantly as a state-based action. It sucks, though, because not only will most players not realize that, but this seems like an alright way to give a permanent hexproof.
As for the equip cost, I don't really get how revealing the top card of your library means anything, but alright, I suppose.
Dead Reformed3BB
Creature - Shapeshifter
Changeling
When you cast ~, you may exile a creature card from your graveyard. If you do, ~ enters the battlefield as a copy of that creature and has changeling.
0/0
I like it. Fits flavorfully in black (although it could use a bit of blue), the mechanics of the card are easy to follow, and it can be devastating as a pseudo-reanimation spell.
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GankG Instant {C}
The next creature spell you cast this turn can be cast as though it has flash. When that creature enters the battlefield, it gains deathtouch. (It gains deathtouch indefinitely.)
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I think Gank may need to cost 2G at least. 1 mana for this sort of trick is way too good IMO. Sure, we have the other 1cc effects that allow you to instant-cast creatures, but that at least doesn't have a kill-spell auto-included...
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Crumbling Horizons3WW
Enchantment (M)
Crumbling Horizons enters the battlefield with ten depletion counters on it.
At the beginning of your upkeep, each player chooses X permanents he or she controls and sacrifices the rest, where X is the number of depletion counters on Crumbling Horizons. Then remove a depletion counter from Crumbling Horizons.
So, after a while, people will end up playing with just a few lands since they've already lost most of the rest. Comments?
Crumbling Horizons3WW
Enchantment (M)
Crumbling Horizons enters the battlefield with ten depletion counters on it.
At the beginning of your upkeep, each player chooses X permanents he or she controls and sacrifices the rest, where X is the number of depletion counters on Crumbling Horizons. Then remove a depletion counter from Crumbling Horizons.
So, after a while, people will end up playing with just a few lands since they've already lost most of the rest. Comments?
I don't particularly like this type of "everybody shares the pain" card. But as far as the card goes, I think it's alright at that cost. I think white's orderliness and fairness is highlighted by the fact that it also affects you. But if this gets down to 0 counters, it's basically a stalemate, as everybody is going to sacrifice every single permanent they have.
Not to mention, pair this with Vampire Hexmage and wreak some havoc, or play Sigarda, Host of Herons against it and watch as your opponent playing this desperately tries to ruin your game plan to no avail.
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Daneira of the Twin Arc (♀)4GW Legendary Creature - Elf Archer {M}
Reach
~ and other green creatures you control have hexproof.
~ and other white creatures you control have double strike.
Whenever ~ or a green or white creature you control deals combat damage to a player, put a +1/+1 counter on that creature.
3/3
The main question for this card is its mana cost. Is it okay at 4GW, or does it have to be more color-saturated at 2GGWW or 3GGWW? Or could it even be 3GW?
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I don't particularly like this type of "everybody shares the pain" card. But as far as the card goes, I think it's alright at that cost. I think white's orderliness and fairness is highlighted by the fact that it also affects you. But if this gets down to 0 counters, it's basically a stalemate, as everybody is going to sacrifice every single permanent they have.
Not to mention, pair this with Vampire Hexmage and wreak some havoc, or play Sigarda, Host of Herons against it and watch as your opponent playing this desperately tries to ruin your game plan to no avail.
Sigarda doesn't work here. And vampire hexmage does show that the card needs to die if there aren't any counters on it anymore. Otherwise you could hexmage then naturalize and onesided obliterate.
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Daneira of the Twin Arc (♀)4GW Legendary Creature - Elf Archer {M}
Reach
~ and other green creatures you control have hexproof.
~ and other white creatures you control have double strike.
Whenever ~ or a green or white creature you control deals combat damage to a player, put a +1/+1 counter on that creature.
3/3
The main question for this card is its mana cost. Is it okay at 4GW, or does it have to be more color-saturated at 2GGWW or 3GGWW? Or could it even be 3GW?
When you include itself you don't need to qualify it: Green creatures you control have hexproof accomplishes the same thing.
reach
Green creatures you control have hexproof.
White creatures you control have double strike.
When a green or white creature you control deals combat damage to a player put a +1/+1 counter on that creature.
Well I know it's only a 3/3 for 6 with reach but it's pretty aggressive. It has six power when attacking, can't be killed directly (which protects your investment), and works really well with Dryad Militant and Watchwolf and Loxodon Smiter which can be your 1 2 and 3 turn creatures. I feel like it's really powerful and as much as i hate hexproof it's not too overpowered for a mythic.
but inspired by your card and cuz I like cards that do way too much but are fair.
Peak Performance -
Instant
Target creature gets +1/+1 until end of turn for each of its colors. If it's white it gains vigilance until end of turn. If it's blue it gains flying until end of turn. If it's black it gains lifelink until end of turn. If it's red it gains haste until end of turn. If it's green untap it.
Sigarda doesn't work here. And vampire hexmage does show that the card needs to die if there aren't any counters on it anymore. Otherwise you could hexmage then naturalize and onesided obliterate.
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When you include itself you don't need to qualify it: Green creatures you control have hexproof accomplishes the same thing.
reach
Green creatures you control have hexproof.
White creatures you control have double strike.
When a green or white creature you control deals combat damage to a player put a +1/+1 counter on that creature.
Well I know it's only a 3/3 for 6 with reach but it's pretty aggressive. It has six power when attacking, can't be killed directly (which protects your investment), and works really well with Dryad Militant and Watchwolf and Loxodon Smiter which can be your 1 2 and 3 turn creatures. I feel like it's really powerful and as much as i hate hexproof it's not too overpowered for a mythic.
but inspired by your card and cuz I like cards that do way too much but are fair.
Peak Performance -
Instant
Target creature gets +1/+1 until end of turn for each of its colors. If it's white it gains vigilance until end of turn. If it's blue it gains flying until end of turn. If it's black it gains lifelink until end of turn. If it's red it gains haste until end of turn. If it's green untap it.
Very good card especially in Wedge theme decks 3.6/5 I like it
Lecia's Pipe 1WGB
Legendary Enchantment
Creatures you control are spirits in addition to their other types and gain Lifelink. As long as you control a white, green and black creature ~ also becomes an artifact equipment with, WGB: Return a creature that died this turn to the battlefield tapped under your control.
Equip: Sacrifice a creature.
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Creature - Vampire Assassin
Haste First Strike
1/1
Very good card especially in Wedge theme decks 3.6/5 I like it
Lecia's Pipe 1WGB
Legendary Enchantment
Creatures you control are spirits in addition to their other types and gain Lifelink. As long as you control a white, green and black creature ~ also becomes an artifact equipment with, WGB: Return a creature that died this turn to the battlefield tapped under your control.
Equip: Sacrifice a creature.
I see the synergy with the equip cost and the return ability, but maybe you can just change it to Legendary Enchantment Artifact - Equipment. Just get rid of the "becomes an artifact equipment" clause, and it becomes easier to read overall.
Ink-Soaked Ronin2WB
Creature - Fox Samurai
First strike, bushido 1
As long as ~'s power is exactly 3, it gains deathtouch.
2/2
<Random Creature Name>3BR
Creature - Ogre (MR)
Battle Cry
Whenever a creature you control attacks, ~ gets +1/+0 until end of turn.
Creatures with power less than ~ power can't block.
2/4
Emperor Maximus:
Why exactly 3? Why even make it a timed and clause'd thing in the first place. You've certainly achieved something sorta extra complicated, but I'm just not too sure why hon.
Ayssia:
Your card seems fine. Seems like it's a high impact card that comes down a little too late and demands a removal spell or your board position becomes a complete disaster.
Canyon Trapper2R
Creature - Human Rogue (U)
Canyon Trapper enters the battlefield with a Trick Counter on it.
Remove a counter from Canyon Trapper: Target creature cannot block until end of turn.
3/3
I thought red could use a better 3 drop or two. I'm sure red isn't supposed to get splashable 3/3s but I think that's pretty stupid, but if you like you can imagine there is an extra red in its cost.
The Veronicas1BR
Legendary Enchantment Creature - Elf Goblin Mutant (MR)
Bestow - Sacrifice two creatures
Desthtouch
Enchanted creature gets +3/+1 and has deathtouch
As long as you control exactly two copies of The Veronicas, they or enchanted creature get +3/+0 and have first strike and trample.
3/1
EDIT: got 'Nathed. Canyon Trapper is decent enough.
I think player is not able to control two copies of The Veronicas because of:
205.4d Any permanent with the supertype “legendary” is subject to the state-based action for legendary permanents, also called the “legend rule” (see rule 704.5k).
704.5k If a player controls two or more legendary permanents with the same name, that player chooses one of them, and the rest are put into their owners’ graveyards. This is called the “legend rule.”
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<Random Creature Name>4RWW
Creature - Giant Warrior (MR)
Double strike, Trample, Protection from blue Sweep — Whenever ~ attacks, you may return any number of lands you control to their owner's hand. ~ deals 1 damage to each other creature for each land returned this way.
4/4
The Veronicas1BR
Legendary Enchantment Creature - Elf Goblin Mutant (MR)
Bestow - Sacrifice two creatures
Desthtouch
Enchanted creature gets +3/+1 and has deathtouch
As long as you control exactly two copies of The Veronicas, they or enchanted creature get +3/+0 and have first strike and trample.
3/1
EDIT: got 'Nathed. Canyon Trapper is decent enough.
I see what you're trying to do, but I'm wondering if it works. However, the bestow cost is too high. I would maybe bump that down to only one.
<Random Creature Name>4RWW
Creature - Giant Warrior (MR)
Double strike, Trample, Protection from blue Sweep — Whenever ~ attacks, you may return any number of lands you control to their owner's hand. ~ deals 1 damage to each other creature for each land returned this way.
4/4
I like it, and I don't see anything wrong with it. Seems balanced for that cost.
Rofimin the Endless2U
Legendary Creature - Illusion Grandeur - Discard another card named ~: ~ can't be blocked until end of turn.
Whenever ~ deals combat damage to a player, draw a card.
A deck can have any number of cards named ~.
2/3
Rofimin the Endless 2U
Legendary Creature - Illusion
Grandeur - Discard another card named ~: ~ can't be blocked until end of turn.
Whenever ~ deals combat damage to a player, draw a card.
A deck can have any number of cards named ~.
2/3
So basically it's a 2 power swing every turn and you get to draw cards but you're likely to just keep drawing copies of this card. Hopefully it doesn't get extirpated!
I think player is not able to control two copies of The Veronicas because of:
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<Random Creature Name>4RWW
Creature - Giant Warrior (MR)
Double strike, Trample, Protection from blue Sweep — Whenever ~ attacks, you may return any number of lands you control to their owner's hand. ~ deals 1 damage to each other creature for each land returned this way.
4/4
Well that's definitely a mythic rare. Sweep 8 the turn after you cast it 24 damage + get through all the blockers cuz...well you did 8 damage to everything. Makes trample quite uselss most of the time though.
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Victory Garden - 1:symrw::symg:
Enchantment - Aura
Enchant land you control
Enchanted land has, "t: Draw a card if a creature you control dealt combat damage to an opponent this turn"
Victory Garden - 1:symrw::symg:
Enchantment - Aura
Enchant land you control
Enchanted land has, "t: Draw a card if a creature you control dealt combat damage to an opponent this turn"
Nice card. This is one of those cards where it makes absolutely no sense for it to cost RGW, and that uses non-blue card draw to tie in flavor and mechanics very well. Hey, you've won a battle or two, so why not claim that prize?
I might even cost it (R/W)G to see whether it's too powerful. It might be, given Zoo decks, but who knows?
Plateau GoblinR
Creature - Goblin Archer (c)
As long as you control a Plains, Plateau Goblin gets +0/+1 and has, ":symtap:: Plateau Goblin deals 2 damage to target attacking creature."
2/1
More ways to make Zoo just a little bit better, huh? It's a bit weird that it's 2/1 for just R only to be boosted more for controlling a Plains, and the ability it's granted encourages some sort of red non-aggro playstyle. Definitely not something you would see everyday, but I still think it's pretty neat.
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Aegis ArtsWU
Art shows a pair of hanging earrings with silver metal on each of them. The silver metal is engraved with the emblem of the floating islands of Emelyn: the combination of an angel's wing and a water droplet. The loop on which the silver metal rests is imbued with a magical, white aura. Enchantment - Aura {C}
Enchant creature
Hexproof
Enchanted creature has hexproof.
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Nice card. This is one of those cards where it makes absolutely no sense for it to cost RGW, and that uses non-blue card draw to tie in flavor and mechanics very well. Hey, you've won a battle or two, so why not claim that prize?
I might even cost it (R/W)G to see whether it's too powerful. It might be, given Zoo decks, but who knows?
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More ways to make Zoo just a little bit better, huh? It's a bit weird that it's 2/1 for just R only to be boosted more for controlling a Plains, and the ability it's granted encourages some sort of red non-aggro playstyle. Definitely not something you would see everyday, but I still think it's pretty neat.
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Aegis ArtsWU
Art shows a pair of hanging earrings with silver metal on each of them. The silver metal is engraved with the emblem of the floating islands of Emelyn: the combination of an angel's wing and a water droplet. The loop on which the silver metal rests is imbued with a magical, white aura. Enchantment - Aura {C}
Enchant creature
Hexproof
Enchanted creature has hexproof.
Because of its limited functionality I'd say this could be an uncommon. It's not something you'd want in your draft deck unless the format was removal heavy and the hexproof on the aura is only good if the format is also heavy in enchantment removal.
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Mana Surplus - 1R
Instant
Double the amount of mana in your mana pool.
Draw a card
Mana Surplus - 1R
Instant
Double the amount of mana in your mana pool.
Draw a card
You need to reword it to something like "for each type of mana in your mana pool, double it." Also "draw a card" seems really cheap and out of color for this card.
Hellish Offering XR
Sorcery (U)
Hellish Offering deals X damage to target creature or player, you gain life equal to your devotion to black.
"The dark powers of this world demand sacrifice, by no means must it be self-sacrifice."
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Interesting, rather unique life drain spell.
Time Slip Trap :symu::symu::symg::5mana:
Instant - Trap
Split Second
If an opponent is taking an extra turn, you may pay
End the turn. Exile Time Slip Trap.
"With a bit of a mind flip...You are into the time slip...and nothing can ever be the same"
I don't think that 0 is the right cost for the end the extra turn, but it's close enough. A split second time stop that costs 1G more. I guess it fits in green? It sort of has the feels of a Seedtime?
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Coat of Blubber - U
Enchantment - Aura
Enchant Creature.
Enchanted creature gets +0/+3 has protection from Snow.
Whenever enchanted creature becomes the target of a red spell untap enchanted creature, sacrifice Coat of blubber, then draw a card.
loved the flavor text:D if prophet of Kruphix is any indication messing with teh time stream is moving into blue green, so points for having a spot on colour identity for a fairly rare ability. And the trap mechanic works well here.
I have one issue with this card. to get max benefit out of playing this card youd need to play it during an opponents turn before they untap and draw. thats a very brief window of time. its not that this would neccesarily make the card much harder to play ( unless of course your playing with a lightning fast rules lawyer) but that it makes a card like this less fun to play. this may just be my timmy sensibilities at play, its just they haven't really done anything worth foiling yet and so i wouldn't fell the same sense of smug triumph if i'd countered a massive creature or torn apart a major attack thanks to a combat trick.
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conjure, an enchant mechanic 1g
enchant - aura (c)
enchanted creature gets +1/+1
conjure 2gg - search your library for a creature card with cmc 2 or less and put it into play with this card attached.
hmm its either a buff with the downside of arming a red opponent with removal or if you happen to be red/blue removal with the downside of buffing an opponents creature first. also belated cantrip.
hmmm, while versatile this card that versatility is upset by too much dependence on other factors. and a tad too much downside. i'd rather just have a buff or a removal with downside (in exhange for a cheaper price or out of colour identity).
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Conjure--First of all, needs a shuffle clause. I'm guessing you intended it as an alternate cost that adds a creature tutor effect and attaches the aura to the tutored creature.
To add modularity, why not Conjure 2--2GG, so the tutored creature isn't necessarily limited to a particular CMC?
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Walkabout 1GG
Enchantment (U)
1GG: Target creature you control with no +1/+1 counters on it that hasn't been chosen for this ability this turn becomes 0/1 until end of turn. Put a +1/+1 counter on that creature at the beginning of the next end step. Activate this ability only during a player's upkeep.
Not expensive enough. 2 cmc for 4 mana and you get an additional effect. Look how expensive Bestow is. There's a reason cards like bestow are so expensive and living weapon gives you a 0/0.
nah i want it to affect future creatures you cast. The other emblems have the ability to deal with creatures already on the battlefield. Sounds like something you want not moi.
It's a walkabout. I'm mr. Birdman.
Looks like a cocoon esque ability. I think it's super restrictive all for the idea that you get a +1/+1 counter. Why did you make them go through so many hoops?
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Portlandia
Land - Island
Portlandia enters the battlefield tapped.
2U,t, discard a land card: Draw a card.
Oh hey, it's Cycle of Life! (I think.)
The super long "with no +1/+1 counters on it that hasn't been chosen for this ability this turn" seems awkward. I understand the first part, but if the activation cost is so high and the creature becomes 0/1, you should be rewarded for making the creature last that long and not have to deal with not being able to choose it again on a second activation.
Elin Tree Dungeon: Southern Forest
Land {U}
T: Add G to your mana pool.
2G,T: Put a 1/1 green Ooze creature token onto the battlefield.
[c]Lightning Bolt[/c] -> Lightning Bolt
[c=Lightning Bolt]Apple Pie[/c] -> Apple Pie
Vowels-Only Format
Minimum deck size: 60
Maximum number of identical cards: 4
Ban list: Cards whose English names begin with a consonant, Unglued and Unhinged cards, cards involving ante, Ancestral Recall
Blood Hunter 1WB
creature - vampire (U)
Flying
1WBTarget player sacrifices a non black or white creature, you gain life equal to its toughness.
2/2
Ophelia Le Doux (R/B)
Creature - Vampire Assassin
Haste First Strike
1/1
Gold: 0
Inventory: Clothes
Abilities:
Traits: Speed
Experience: 6/20
Mana: R
Odula Besa (U/B)
Creature - Vampire Artificer
T: Target artifact creature gets your choice of -1/-0 or +1/+0 until end of turn.
1/1
Gold: 41
Inventory: Adventurer's Clothes, Basic Artificer Toolkit, 3 pounds of Basic metal.
Abilities: N/A
Current Goals:
Experience: 1/20
Mana: 2(U/B)(U/B)
well it's definitely not an uncommon at that cost to activate. Repeatable cheap removal even restrictive can be devastating in a limited format and amazing in a constructed format that doesn't favor white/black creatures.
Portlandia
Land - Island
Portlandia enters the battlefield tapped.
2U,t, discard a land card: Draw a card.
Seems pretty powerful at 4 mana. Also, while this is an enchantment artifact, it has no static ability like the others. I would fix that.
Dead Reformed 3BB
Creature - Shapeshifter
Changeling
When you cast ~, you may exile a creature card from your graveyard. If you do, ~ enters the battlefield as a copy of that creature and has changeling.
0/0
Hmm... having two types and one subtype of each of those two types is quite a lot to put on a card. This basically only reads enchant creature, since Equipment that's attached to a noncreature permanent falls off instantly as a state-based action. It sucks, though, because not only will most players not realize that, but this seems like an alright way to give a permanent hexproof.
As for the equip cost, I don't really get how revealing the top card of your library means anything, but alright, I suppose.
I like it. Fits flavorfully in black (although it could use a bit of blue), the mechanics of the card are easy to follow, and it can be devastating as a pseudo-reanimation spell.
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Gank G
Instant {C}
The next creature spell you cast this turn can be cast as though it has flash. When that creature enters the battlefield, it gains deathtouch. (It gains deathtouch indefinitely.)
[c]Lightning Bolt[/c] -> Lightning Bolt
[c=Lightning Bolt]Apple Pie[/c] -> Apple Pie
Vowels-Only Format
Minimum deck size: 60
Maximum number of identical cards: 4
Ban list: Cards whose English names begin with a consonant, Unglued and Unhinged cards, cards involving ante, Ancestral Recall
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Crumbling Horizons 3WW
Enchantment (M)
Crumbling Horizons enters the battlefield with ten depletion counters on it.
At the beginning of your upkeep, each player chooses X permanents he or she controls and sacrifices the rest, where X is the number of depletion counters on Crumbling Horizons. Then remove a depletion counter from Crumbling Horizons.
So, after a while, people will end up playing with just a few lands since they've already lost most of the rest. Comments?
I don't particularly like this type of "everybody shares the pain" card. But as far as the card goes, I think it's alright at that cost. I think white's orderliness and fairness is highlighted by the fact that it also affects you. But if this gets down to 0 counters, it's basically a stalemate, as everybody is going to sacrifice every single permanent they have.
Not to mention, pair this with Vampire Hexmage and wreak some havoc, or play Sigarda, Host of Herons against it and watch as your opponent playing this desperately tries to ruin your game plan to no avail.
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Daneira of the Twin Arc (♀) 4GW
Legendary Creature - Elf Archer {M}
Reach
~ and other green creatures you control have hexproof.
~ and other white creatures you control have double strike.
Whenever ~ or a green or white creature you control deals combat damage to a player, put a +1/+1 counter on that creature.
3/3
The main question for this card is its mana cost. Is it okay at 4GW, or does it have to be more color-saturated at 2GGWW or 3GGWW? Or could it even be 3GW?
[c]Lightning Bolt[/c] -> Lightning Bolt
[c=Lightning Bolt]Apple Pie[/c] -> Apple Pie
Vowels-Only Format
Minimum deck size: 60
Maximum number of identical cards: 4
Ban list: Cards whose English names begin with a consonant, Unglued and Unhinged cards, cards involving ante, Ancestral Recall
Sigarda doesn't work here. And vampire hexmage does show that the card needs to die if there aren't any counters on it anymore. Otherwise you could hexmage then naturalize and onesided obliterate.
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When you include itself you don't need to qualify it: Green creatures you control have hexproof accomplishes the same thing.
reach
Green creatures you control have hexproof.
White creatures you control have double strike.
When a green or white creature you control deals combat damage to a player put a +1/+1 counter on that creature.
Well I know it's only a 3/3 for 6 with reach but it's pretty aggressive. It has six power when attacking, can't be killed directly (which protects your investment), and works really well with Dryad Militant and Watchwolf and Loxodon Smiter which can be your 1 2 and 3 turn creatures. I feel like it's really powerful and as much as i hate hexproof it's not too overpowered for a mythic.
but inspired by your card and cuz I like cards that do way too much but are fair.
Peak Performance -
Instant
Target creature gets +1/+1 until end of turn for each of its colors. If it's white it gains vigilance until end of turn. If it's blue it gains flying until end of turn. If it's black it gains lifelink until end of turn. If it's red it gains haste until end of turn. If it's green untap it.
Very good card especially in Wedge theme decks 3.6/5 I like it
Lecia's Pipe 1WGB
Legendary Enchantment
Creatures you control are spirits in addition to their other types and gain Lifelink. As long as you control a white, green and black creature ~ also becomes an artifact equipment with,
WGB: Return a creature that died this turn to the battlefield tapped under your control.
Equip: Sacrifice a creature.
Ophelia Le Doux (R/B)
Creature - Vampire Assassin
Haste First Strike
1/1
Gold: 0
Inventory: Clothes
Abilities:
Traits: Speed
Experience: 6/20
Mana: R
Odula Besa (U/B)
Creature - Vampire Artificer
T: Target artifact creature gets your choice of -1/-0 or +1/+0 until end of turn.
1/1
Gold: 41
Inventory: Adventurer's Clothes, Basic Artificer Toolkit, 3 pounds of Basic metal.
Abilities: N/A
Current Goals:
Experience: 1/20
Mana: 2(U/B)(U/B)
I see the synergy with the equip cost and the return ability, but maybe you can just change it to Legendary Enchantment Artifact - Equipment. Just get rid of the "becomes an artifact equipment" clause, and it becomes easier to read overall.
Ink-Soaked Ronin 2WB
Creature - Fox Samurai
First strike, bushido 1
As long as ~'s power is exactly 3, it gains deathtouch.
2/2
"Exactly 3" seems strange...but well, nice design.
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<Random Creature Name> 3BR
Creature - Ogre (MR)
Battle Cry
Whenever a creature you control attacks, ~ gets +1/+0 until end of turn.
Creatures with power less than ~ power can't block.
2/4
Why exactly 3? Why even make it a timed and clause'd thing in the first place. You've certainly achieved something sorta extra complicated, but I'm just not too sure why hon.
Ayssia:
Your card seems fine. Seems like it's a high impact card that comes down a little too late and demands a removal spell or your board position becomes a complete disaster.
Canyon Trapper 2R
Creature - Human Rogue (U)
Canyon Trapper enters the battlefield with a Trick Counter on it.
Remove a counter from Canyon Trapper: Target creature cannot block until end of turn.
3/3
I thought red could use a better 3 drop or two. I'm sure red isn't supposed to get splashable 3/3s but I think that's pretty stupid, but if you like you can imagine there is an extra red in its cost.
Cube talk, design community and much much more!
I think player is not able to control two copies of The Veronicas because of:
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<Random Creature Name> 4RWW
Creature - Giant Warrior (MR)
Double strike, Trample, Protection from blue
Sweep — Whenever ~ attacks, you may return any number of lands you control to their owner's hand. ~ deals 1 damage to each other creature for each land returned this way.
4/4
I see what you're trying to do, but I'm wondering if it works. However, the bestow cost is too high. I would maybe bump that down to only one.
I like it, and I don't see anything wrong with it. Seems balanced for that cost.
Rofimin the Endless 2U
Legendary Creature - Illusion
Grandeur - Discard another card named ~: ~ can't be blocked until end of turn.
Whenever ~ deals combat damage to a player, draw a card.
A deck can have any number of cards named ~.
2/3
Legendary Creature - Illusion
Grandeur - Discard another card named ~: ~ can't be blocked until end of turn.
Whenever ~ deals combat damage to a player, draw a card.
A deck can have any number of cards named ~.
2/3
So basically it's a 2 power swing every turn and you get to draw cards but you're likely to just keep drawing copies of this card. Hopefully it doesn't get extirpated!
Well that's definitely a mythic rare. Sweep 8 the turn after you cast it 24 damage + get through all the blockers cuz...well you did 8 damage to everything. Makes trample quite uselss most of the time though.
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Victory Garden - 1:symrw::symg:
Enchantment - Aura
Enchant land you control
Enchanted land has, "t: Draw a card if a creature you control dealt combat damage to an opponent this turn"
Nice card. This is one of those cards where it makes absolutely no sense for it to cost RGW, and that uses non-blue card draw to tie in flavor and mechanics very well. Hey, you've won a battle or two, so why not claim that prize?
I might even cost it (R/W)G to see whether it's too powerful. It might be, given Zoo decks, but who knows?
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More ways to make Zoo just a little bit better, huh? It's a bit weird that it's 2/1 for just R only to be boosted more for controlling a Plains, and the ability it's granted encourages some sort of red non-aggro playstyle. Definitely not something you would see everyday, but I still think it's pretty neat.
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Aegis Arts WU
Art shows a pair of hanging earrings with silver metal on each of them. The silver metal is engraved with the emblem of the floating islands of Emelyn: the combination of an angel's wing and a water droplet. The loop on which the silver metal rests is imbued with a magical, white aura.
Enchantment - Aura {C}
Enchant creature
Hexproof
Enchanted creature has hexproof.
[c]Lightning Bolt[/c] -> Lightning Bolt
[c=Lightning Bolt]Apple Pie[/c] -> Apple Pie
Vowels-Only Format
Minimum deck size: 60
Maximum number of identical cards: 4
Ban list: Cards whose English names begin with a consonant, Unglued and Unhinged cards, cards involving ante, Ancestral Recall
Because of its limited functionality I'd say this could be an uncommon. It's not something you'd want in your draft deck unless the format was removal heavy and the hexproof on the aura is only good if the format is also heavy in enchantment removal.
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Mana Surplus - 1R
Instant
Double the amount of mana in your mana pool.
Draw a card
You need to reword it to something like "for each type of mana in your mana pool, double it." Also "draw a card" seems really cheap and out of color for this card.
Godzilla 2RG
Legendary Creature - Giant Lizard Mutant
Wither
RR, T: ~ fights target creature.
GG: Regenerate ~.
5/5