You didn't read my card right it doesn't have shroud, it has a new ability I call Elude (Spells that "don't" target this creature, "do not" effect this creature. AKA Day of Judgment, Anger of the Gods, Damnation, Cyclonic Rift do not effect this creature. So when this creature has hexproof the only way to kill it pretty much is make the owner sacrifice it.
It almost seems a little wordy, but really it's sweet and simple and would be very powerful in Commander like you said. I like it, Only thing I could say is, having the power of protection from 4 colors for 4 Mana, which isn't too hard to do with a good mana base is pretty damn powerfull. Not saying it's OP but it just is powerful. And tribal is usually balanced but mixing them together might create loop holes, infinites not sure would have to look into it. But of course that would be the point of a card like this anyway, so bravo I think it's a hit.
Lockar, Master of Elusion WGU
Legendary Creature - Raccoon Wizard MR
Flash
When Lockar, Master of Elusion enters the battlefield it gains hexproof until your next turn.
Spells and abilities that don't target this creature, do not effect this creature.
I really don't even know what to say about this one, I really think you should finish creating your idea before posting it. Seems like a cool idea, first ability reminds me of Wall of Blood. Seems like it it could be a really great combo piece with spells like Fling or Rite of Consumption. Of course with things like this you better have a Apostle's Blessing or something like it or a good Path to Exile will take you out along with lands and discards you used to pump this thing.
Livgrad, Keeper of Forest 5GGG
Legendary Creature - Lizard Dragon MR
Livgrad, Keeper of Forest can only be cast using mana from basic lands.
When Livgrad, Keeper of Forest enters the battlefield destroy target noncreature permanent.
Trample, vigilance
1G: Target creature gains flying until the end of turn.
What's the cost on this creature 1 blue? For one cost or even two cost, leaving the battlefield for drawing two cards is really powerful. With 1 cost instants like cloud shift and essence flux you could be drawing tons of cards while the opponent is only drawing a few. Helps that its legendary so you can't use spells like ghostly flicker on two copy's of the card, but still it's a powerful ability on its own already, I think if it was when it dies it that may be better, or maybe if you gave it shroud so you couldn't exploit it so easily, while still being able to be used with cards like ghostway. But if your going for a flicker deck, Mulldrifter is a nice similar option, that can be envoked for three and then manipulated with 1 cost spells like cloud shift for drawing a quick 4 cards and keeping a 2/2 flying on the battlefield, that can be manipulated again for drawing more cards. But there are some benefits of opponents drawing cards as well in certain decks,but it sounds like this card is going for more of an Dictate of Kruphix effect, basically getting something out there for cheap to get more cards drawn and everyone gets the benefit of it and that's where the flash comes in, to make sure your the first to get the benefit of the enchantment. After all said I think this card would be more appropriate if it were at least three cost and maybe the effect changed a bit, but good idea.
Mystical Cave
Land, Rare
Mystical Cave enters the battlefield with two charge counters on it. As long as Mystical Cave has charge counters on it, it is Legendary.
Tap, for one colorless
Tap, Remove a charge counter from Mystical Cave: Add one mana of any color.
Would be pretty sick as it is with just the damage ability. Pure red for grabbing a forest card is a little weird. I would say make it 2GR and make it a rare, but to each it's own, could be a really nice card.
Mulak, Vermin Overlord 2BB
Lengendary Creature - Rat Wizard MR
Rat creatures you control have deathtouch.
Whenever a Rat dies, Rat creatures you control get +1/+0 until the end of turn.
Whenever you cast a Rat spell, create a 1/1 black rat creature token.
Sacrifice a Rat: Target Rat gains fear until the end of turn.
2/3
It was just suppose to be a fun card, maybe not fitting in to the color pie well. Janus is a girls name, Janius is a spawn of the name Janus I'm pretty sure.
Seem's pretty powerful for a rush deck just other creatures gives a wide variety of creatures you could be sending at your opponent. Usually cards like this are tribal, maybe it should be changed to other human or soldier creatures you control have menace but then again there are cards like Ravos, Soultender, so I don't know, seems like it could be a good mythic rare to me. And the second ability seems to be worded fine and it is quite a nice ability could be very nasty in large numbers. Nice card.
Janius, Controller of Colors GUWBR
Legendary Creature - Human Wizard R
W: Janius deals 1 damage to target black creature or gains protection from black until the end of turn.
U: Janius deals 1 damage to target red creature or gains protection from red until the end of turn.
B: Janius deals 1 damage to target green creature or gains protection from green until the end of turn.
R: Janius deals 1 damage to target blue creature or gains protection from blue until the end of turn.
G: Janius deals 1 damage to target white creature or gains protection from white until the end of turn.
WUBRG: Janius deals 1 damage to target player.
2/2
Even with discarding a card and sacrificing a permanent, untapping all creatures and all artifacts you control with a land is too powerful especially when the land doesn't even come in tapped. Even untapping one artifact or one creature with a land ability could be devastating with some powerful mana abilities that a lot of creatures and artifacts have, ex. Selvala, Heart of the Wilds, Thran Dynamo, this land is easily way too over powered, I would suggest rethinking on it. But overall interesting idea.
Reborn from Banishment XXGWU
Sorcery MR
Kicker GWU
Return target card you own from exile with converted mana cost X to your hand. If that card was a permanent and the kicker cost was paid put that card onto the battlefield instead.
“Even kings who have chosen exile, have risen back up to reclaim there throne.”
On your 1. Yeah it doesn't have to be 5 colors, but why not and it would be a pretty cool commander with all colors.
On your 2. Yeah that is obvious, that ability is only a added bonus for creatures and other cards you have that have already have flash.
On your 3. The card isn't mean't to be the baddest creature out there it already have a some powerful abilities, so I just wanted it to be though enough to block some creatures with out dying and withstand a lightning bolt.
Keep on keeping on: The name seems really off not appealing at all. Could be good for a gruul rush deck especially with hardened scales.
Very interesting mana production. Green and Blue for the colors makes perfect sense. The mana cost is fair because there is no Guarantee you can use the colors that will be given to you or you will have spells you can play as an instant. Kinda like a Fellwar Stone but loads better since this also works with colorless mana and it does not. Would be awesome in group games. Looks like it could be a real card to me, good work.
Janbris, King of Speed GURWB
Legendary Creature - Monkey MR
Flash (You may cast this spell any time you could cast an instant.)
Split second (As long as this spell is on the stack, players can’t cast spells or activate abilities that aren’t mana abilities.) (As long as this spell is on the stack, players can’t cast spells or activate abilities that aren’t mana abilities.)
You may cast creature spells as though they had flash.
When you cast spells with flash, they gain split second.
1/4
Gifts from the Grave - Feels like an enchantment but I see your trying to get something out there that can't be destroyed so easily. Could make it a like a leyline ability seems a little under powered "Reveal gifts from the grave from your opening hand, exile it then
You get an emblem with: "Whenever you would draw a card, draw that card from the bottom of your library instead of from the top."
Wall of Devine Intervention 1UWG
Lengendary Creature - Wall MR
Defender, reach, hexproof
G/W/U: Change a target of target spell or ability to Wall of Divine Intervention.
GUW: You or target creature you control gains hexproof until the end of turn.
props to them for the art, art for demonstration only not to claim or own art.
picture used strictly for demonstration not to claim or own art.
Legendary Artifact MR
(C/P can be paid with either C or 2 life.)
Whenever you cast a spell untap Paradox Clock.
T: Untap another target artifact.
F/T: Legend says when it’s gears start spinning fast enough its unstoppable.
Props to wallup.net for the art they provide free wall paper art, i used it only for demonstration purposes not to claim or own the art.
Art link: https://wallup.net/clock-watch-time-fantasy-steampunk-gears-gear-sci-fi/
Lockar, Master of Elusion WGU
Legendary Creature - Raccoon Wizard MR
Flash
When Lockar, Master of Elusion enters the battlefield it gains hexproof until your next turn.
Spells and abilities that don't target this creature, do not effect this creature.
Livgrad, Keeper of Forest 5GGG
Legendary Creature - Lizard Dragon MR
Livgrad, Keeper of Forest can only be cast using mana from basic lands.
When Livgrad, Keeper of Forest enters the battlefield destroy target noncreature permanent.
Trample, vigilance
1G: Target creature gains flying until the end of turn.
4GG, T: Destroy target creature with flying.
9/12
Mystical Cave
Land, Rare
Mystical Cave enters the battlefield with two charge counters on it. As long as Mystical Cave has charge counters on it, it is Legendary.
Tap, for one colorless
Tap, Remove a charge counter from Mystical Cave: Add one mana of any color.
Mulak, Vermin Overlord 2BB
Lengendary Creature - Rat Wizard MR
Rat creatures you control have deathtouch.
Whenever a Rat dies, Rat creatures you control get +1/+0 until the end of turn.
Whenever you cast a Rat spell, create a 1/1 black rat creature token.
Sacrifice a Rat: Target Rat gains fear until the end of turn.
2/3
Janius, Controller of Colors GUWBR
Legendary Creature - Human Wizard R
W: Janius deals 1 damage to target black creature or gains protection from black until the end of turn.
U: Janius deals 1 damage to target red creature or gains protection from red until the end of turn.
B: Janius deals 1 damage to target green creature or gains protection from green until the end of turn.
R: Janius deals 1 damage to target blue creature or gains protection from blue until the end of turn.
G: Janius deals 1 damage to target white creature or gains protection from white until the end of turn.
WUBRG: Janius deals 1 damage to target player.
2/2
Reborn from Banishment XXGWU
Sorcery MR
Kicker GWU
Return target card you own from exile with converted mana cost X to your hand. If that card was a permanent and the kicker cost was paid put that card onto the battlefield instead.
“Even kings who have chosen exile, have risen back up to reclaim there throne.”
On your 2. Yeah that is obvious, that ability is only a added bonus for creatures and other cards you have that have already have flash.
On your 3. The card isn't mean't to be the baddest creature out there it already have a some powerful abilities, so I just wanted it to be though enough to block some creatures with out dying and withstand a lightning bolt.
Keep on keeping on: The name seems really off not appealing at all. Could be good for a gruul rush deck especially with hardened scales.
Janbris, King of Speed GURWB
Legendary Creature - Monkey MR
Flash (You may cast this spell any time you could cast an instant.)
Split second (As long as this spell is on the stack, players can’t cast spells or activate abilities that aren’t mana abilities.) (As long as this spell is on the stack, players can’t cast spells or activate abilities that aren’t mana abilities.)
You may cast creature spells as though they had flash.
When you cast spells with flash, they gain split second.
1/4
Gifts from the Grave - Feels like an enchantment but I see your trying to get something out there that can't be destroyed so easily. Could make it a like a leyline ability seems a little under powered "Reveal gifts from the grave from your opening hand, exile it then
You get an emblem with: "Whenever you would draw a card, draw that card from the bottom of your library instead of from the top."
Wall of Devine Intervention 1UWG
Lengendary Creature - Wall MR
Defender, reach, hexproof
G/W/U: Change a target of target spell or ability to Wall of Divine Intervention.
GUW: You or target creature you control gains hexproof until the end of turn.
0/8