Quote from NimblestMongoose »Anyways, I took a stab at re-writing it. Tell me this isn't better?
Frankly, it's not. Don't get me wrong, I agree that the comics tend to use a bit too much text, but your attempt at an improvement took the simplification too far (you should have kept the postman's text in the delivery panel - then we might be talking imo).
However, I wouldn't call Cardboard Crack the pinnacle of webcomics, but for me it was entertaining enough to check the site every now and then and it gave me at least a grin quite often. So, kinda sad to see them go.