Heartgear Assembler seems really off-color for Green, shouldnt he be Blue? An effect triggering off drawing cards and a tutor based on artifacts feels that way.
Also the Gadgets don't appear to do anything on their own, so nearly the same thing could be achieved with counters and a pay 1 trigger, and having them tap also seems unnecessary.
That said, it's a pretty neat design, and having those Gadgets be their own thing allows you to pour it into another asset (like Energy), but you'd have to differentiate the mechanics besides different numbers.
I like it though, and it reminds me of a Tamiyo's Journal on a stick (which is great).
Here's mine from a different, kinda oddball set meant to be my wastebin for clunky or silly ideas.
Amnesia Veil (3)
Artifact - Equipment
Equipped creature loses all abilities.
Whenever a nontoken creature you control would die & ~ isn’t equipped to a creature, you may regenerate that creature & attach ~ to it.
Reincarnation isn’t as glamorous as they said it would be.
(Sorry for no formatting. On mobile and not well-versed on the codes for them all)
I like the theme (reminds me of the stuff the Seekers were pulling on Esper in one of Tezzeret's comics), however the keyword soup is a little weird to me, and hexproof feels a lot more useful on their turn, to grant a pseudo-protection from sorceries. I'll let you rearrange the abilities as needed, but imo, I'd do Vig+deathtouch on your turn, and hexproof+lifelink on theirs (hex+death seemed a bit too strong but it's your card fam)
Anywho, here's a mythic I've been brewing for a set of mine:
Heir of Autumn3BG
Creature - Plant Giant (M)
When ~ ETBs, all creatures get -3/-3 until EOT if a land was put into your graveyard from the battlefield this turn. 2, Sacrifice a land: You may cast ~ from your graveyard until EOT. Activate this ability only once each turn.
5/4 Its reign as inevitable as the seasons; its crown and throne but fallen leaves.
-He makes himself a 2/1 briefly if his ETB goes through. Now I like this flavor-wise, but it'll kill him with Panharmonicon on board, so should it evade itself like Demon of Dark Schemes does? Or is him offing himself for now worth DOWSING THE BOARD IN -6/-6 GOODNESS?!
-His/her/its activated ability enables his ETB ability.
-His/her/plant donglord's activated ability can be activated at instant-speed on their turn, but you still have to pay his full cost and heed timing restrictions as usual (basically enables other instants or permanents that care about lands going to the graveyard at a specific time/during a turn in a pinch if you don't/can't cast Heir).
Also the Gadgets don't appear to do anything on their own, so nearly the same thing could be achieved with counters and a pay 1 trigger, and having them tap also seems unnecessary.
That said, it's a pretty neat design, and having those Gadgets be their own thing allows you to pour it into another asset (like Energy), but you'd have to differentiate the mechanics besides different numbers.
I like it though, and it reminds me of a Tamiyo's Journal on a stick (which is great).
Here's mine from a different, kinda oddball set meant to be my wastebin for clunky or silly ideas.
Amnesia Veil (3)
Artifact - Equipment
Equipped creature loses all abilities.
Whenever a nontoken creature you control would die & ~ isn’t equipped to a creature, you may regenerate that creature & attach ~ to it.
Reincarnation isn’t as glamorous as they said it would be.
(Sorry for no formatting. On mobile and not well-versed on the codes for them all)
Anywho, here's a mythic I've been brewing for a set of mine:
Heir of Autumn 3BG
Creature - Plant Giant (M)
When ~ ETBs, all creatures get -3/-3 until EOT if a land was put into your graveyard from the battlefield this turn.
2, Sacrifice a land: You may cast ~ from your graveyard until EOT. Activate this ability only once each turn.
5/4
Its reign as inevitable as the seasons; its crown and throne but fallen leaves.
-He makes himself a 2/1 briefly if his ETB goes through. Now I like this flavor-wise, but it'll kill him with Panharmonicon on board, so should it evade itself like Demon of Dark Schemes does? Or is him offing himself for now worth DOWSING THE BOARD IN -6/-6 GOODNESS?!
-His/her/its activated ability enables his ETB ability.
-His/her/plant donglord's activated ability can be activated at instant-speed on their turn, but you still have to pay his full cost and heed timing restrictions as usual (basically enables other instants or permanents that care about lands going to the graveyard at a specific time/during a turn in a pinch if you don't/can't cast Heir).