Too few lands and spells that are pointless or win more. I'm not quite sure what direction you're going for but an Enigma Drake deck likely does it better and is a better home for Guttersnipe.
I was hoping to be able to have a swarm of creatures as a sort of wall while I collect my lands, instants and Tezzeret, Artifice Master to make a final winning move like Omniscience. I thought Squee, the Immortal would be neat to kind of activate Desecrated Tomb while also using my instants. I guess you could say this deck is ment to be taxful and suppose to put pressure on the opponent.
18 lands is way too low of a count for a deck that with barely any card draw, and no ramp/fixing. Not to mention, you have six cards with CMC higher than 5 that you will likely never play. Also, what are you even doing with Omniscience? It's not a finisher by itself. It's an enabler that lets you play other cards, which, incidentally, also describes the Tezzeret ultimate that you need to play the thing in the first place.
The thing about Planeswalkers, don't build around them for their ultimate; since it's pretty rare to hit it outside of a control deck.
Right off the bat, I'd Drop Tezz and Omniscience. Then take the land count to at least 23 for now. Then I'd decide what kind of deck I want. There's plenty of Izzet decks for inspiration: Enigma Drake, Wizards, Enchantments.
Then go from there. Sometimes it's better to trash an idea. Not all decks can make it.
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2 Tetsuko Umezawa, Fugitive
4 Omenspeaker
4 Squee, the Immortal
4 Guttersnipe
Enchantment
2 The Mirari Conjecture
2 Omniscience
Land
4 Sulfur Falls
7 Mountain
7 Island
2 Desecrated Tomb
Instant
4 Unwind
2 Disperse
4 Trumpet Blast
4 Lightning Strike
4 Shock
Planeswalker
4 Tezzeret, Artifice Master
4 Detection Tower
maybe explain your gameplan?
Disperse to return Omenspeaker for more scry's.
Desecrated Tomb for an added bonus to returning Squee, the Immortal to the field.
Unwind just looks like a awesome card. Free noncreature counter?
Trumpet Blast for a possible win by just having enough creatures to do it? Especially since having Tetsuko Umezawa, Fugitive on the field could help to ensure an unblocked assault.
Lightning Strike and Shock to fuel Guttersnipe and combo with a finisher like Omniscience?
Tezzeret, Artifice Master helping with the free summoning of Omniscience, Tetsuko Umezawa, Fugitive or The Mirari Conjecture.
Right off the bat, I'd Drop Tezz and Omniscience. Then take the land count to at least 23 for now. Then I'd decide what kind of deck I want. There's plenty of Izzet decks for inspiration: Enigma Drake, Wizards, Enchantments.
Then go from there. Sometimes it's better to trash an idea. Not all decks can make it.