The general theme to this deck is to poop out a ton of tokens which then combos well with the rares in the deck.
Some of the cards in your deck look like they could fit into this one well through. Especially Gyre Sage. Also I think Archangel of Thune would fit into yours very well. And I think yours is going to run into the same problem the original I'm basing mine off of did. Your creatures are too easy to destroy. You might want to sideboard Indestructibility and/or Alpha Authority as well, in order to keep some of your more vital creatures alive when facing decks with a lot of creature killing stuff.