MTG Salvation

This is my commander deck which i love but have yet to buy, i feel this deck isnt focused enough and would like y'all opinions on it

Hi, and welcome to the MTGsalvation forums!

I think you are more likely to get a quality response if you have your decklist visible in your original post, rather than a link to another website to view your deck. If you need help formatting, there's a handy link in my signature below that will help you with learning the formatting on this website.

Also, I just tried to use your link, and it took me an error page, so I'm afraid you didn't even paste the entire link.

I've used Marath, Will of the Wild a lot and would be happy to provide feedback once I can easily review your decklist.

thank you for telling me this, ive updated it all and im hoping you enjoy the deck i built

Your list looks good! Marath is great because he (she?) is so versatile, so there can be many different builds. What you build depends on your preferences, play style, and card availability. I’ll mention some cards that I’ve really had a lot of luck with in my Marath deck, but I understand if these cards do not fit your preference, play style, or you might just not have access to them.

• Token doublers or buffers: Doubling Season, Anointed Procession, Parallel Lives, Divine Visitation, Primal Vigor, Beastmaster Ascension: I’ve found that these either help you build a token army quickly, or kill with an army even more quickly
• Finishers: you’ve got plenty of powerful spells, but there are a few cards that I think help my Marath deck finish off the table: Purphoros, God of the Forge, Craterhoof Behemoth, Avenger of Zendikar, and Kamahl, Fist of Krosa
• Big mana: my Marath deck is very mana-intensive, and so I try to help generate large amounts of mana. Mirari's Wake, Zendikar Resurgent, Growing Rites of Itlimoc, Xenagos, the Reveler
• Tutors: some groups like tutors, others hate them. I understand both sides. If your group is OK with them, or if you prefer to use them, I’d consider Natural Order, Birthing Pod, Chord of Calling, and Tooth and Nail
• Card draw: we lack blue, so good card draw is harder to come by. But we have access to quite a few great ones: Skullclamp, Mentor of the Meek, Sylvan Library

All in all, good list! Good luck and let me know if you have any specific questions.

While your suggestions are really good, most are just too expensive for my budget

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While your suggestions are really good, most are just too expensive for my budget

Fair enough. I'd at least add some more card draw to your deck, and Mentor of the Meek is a $0.50 card on TCG, might be worth considering.

I will along with zendikar resurgent, im also getting rid of ravenous balmoth and maybe obsidian fireheart. They just dont help enough in the way i need them to, mostly balmoth since im not constantly spitting out beasts in my opinion

So i playtested the deck via proxies against a friend's commander deck and i won 2 times (3 if you want to count the misreading of a card) and it read quite well at least in a 1v1 commander match. So now im certain in buying the deck now ^-^

Marath is great for being a swiss army knife in your command zone.
To get more value of his ping ability, giving him deathtouch via Basilisk Collar, Nightshade peddler or similar means turns him into repeatable removal, while Keen Sense makes for a potent draw engine.