You don't need more than 20 land in this style of deck.
Brainstorm is better than Preordain given that your list has 8 Fetches. You also probably want to test Mystic Remora over Ponder since that card is insane in the right metas. Make sure that you read the Oracle text because it affects each opponent and not just one!
Where you play Aethersnipe I personally tested Raven Familiar since the Tyrant takes care of bounce in the lategame and I wanted more dig + ramp in the early game. Not saying that you should 100% make this swap (I honestly didn't test it extensively) but it's something to consider.
Otherwise the deck is mostly stock. Coiling Oracle is a decent substitute to Baleful Strix and Shardless Agent is "fine" but unnecessary in multiplayer. I could be wrong but Raven Familiar was the closest substitute that I could find since it digs the most cards for 3 mana. Obviously Sea Gate Oracle is better value when you don't immediately pitch it to Food Chain but I liked Raven Familiar more when I tried both out since it has more upside. That being said we're talking single digit games played here so I don't put that much faith in my findings.
4 Misthollow Griffin
3 Manipulate Fate
1 Tidespout Tyrant
4 Deathrite Shaman
4 Ponder
4 Preordain
4 Coiling Oracle
3 Mulldrifter
2 Fierce Empath
1 Emrakul, the Aeons Torn
3 Æthersnipe
4 Breeding Pool
4 Terramorphic Expanse
4 Evolving Wilds
6 Island
6 Forest
I think the deck may have a little to much land with all these cantrips. Any suggestions are welcome.
Brainstorm is better than Preordain given that your list has 8 Fetches. You also probably want to test Mystic Remora over Ponder since that card is insane in the right metas. Make sure that you read the Oracle text because it affects each opponent and not just one!
Where you play Aethersnipe I personally tested Raven Familiar since the Tyrant takes care of bounce in the lategame and I wanted more dig + ramp in the early game. Not saying that you should 100% make this swap (I honestly didn't test it extensively) but it's something to consider.
Otherwise the deck is mostly stock. Coiling Oracle is a decent substitute to Baleful Strix and Shardless Agent is "fine" but unnecessary in multiplayer. I could be wrong but Raven Familiar was the closest substitute that I could find since it digs the most cards for 3 mana. Obviously Sea Gate Oracle is better value when you don't immediately pitch it to Food Chain but I liked Raven Familiar more when I tried both out since it has more upside. That being said we're talking single digit games played here so I don't put that much faith in my findings.
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