Hey whats up, welcome to the forum ! If you stroll/search around somewhere you can find out how to wrap your cards and decks to get some links on them so others can give you more input faster. I went ahead and did it for you in my post.
Now as for your deck it looks pretty good to start with, I'm not sure what your card budget is so i wont suggest anything to crazy, and of course take my suggestions with a grain of salt. At the end of the day it's your deck and how you want to play it
To start i think Kor Duelist might be a better choice then Fencing ace because the duelist works well with Basilisk Collar. to mention Hada Freeblade is a nice one drop soldier.
I'd play Sun's Champion over Tirel any day. The three tokens being a + ability is huge, and the wipe is reusable. Tirel's +1 is just not that good. The 6 cmc does suck, but Tirel is worse than Elspeth, Knight-Errant and is still more expensive (mana wise). If you can't get Knight Errant, sun's champion is the way to go.
I'd play Sun's Champion over Tirel any day. The three tokens being a + ability is huge, and the wipe is reusable. Tirel's +1 is just not that good. The 6 cmc does suck, but Tirel is worse than Elspeth, Knight-Errant and is still more expensive (mana wise). If you can't get Knight Errant, sun's champion is the way to go.
I'm confused Elspeth Tirel doesn't have a +1 its a +2, its nice one at that 1 life per creature is decent sure there are cards that do it better but i like it and won off it when i needed it and it sets you up for either tokens or a possible needed board wipe next turn.
Yeah Elspeth, Sun's Champion's cmc does suck but me personally i wouldn't play it I've had better luck with the latter but that is me and my opinion i respect and understand yours.
And i didnt bother mentioning Elspeth, Knight-Errant because i dont know this person's budget and shes the most expensive out of the two also assumed this person owned both of the ones in the list they provided already.
Plains x24
Planeswalkers:
Elspeth, Sun’s Champion x1
Elspeth Tirel x1
Creatures:
Odric, Lunarch Marshal x2
Odric, Master Tactician x2
Crusader of Odric x2
Precinct Captain x2
Captain of the Watch x2
Preeminent Captain x1
Veteran Armorsmith x2
Veteran Swordsmith x2
Mirror Entity x1
Fencing Ace x2
Oketra the True x1
Angelic Overseer x2
Enchantments/Instants/Sorceries/Artifacts
Raise the Alarm x2
Murder Investigation x2
Nomad’s Assembly x2
Gift of Orzhova x1
Ethereal Armour x2
Basilisk Collar x2
Celestial Flare x2/Pacifism x2 (which one should I use?)
24 Plains
Planeswalker
1 Elspeth Tirel
1 Elspeth, Sun's Champion
Creatures
2 Fencing Ace
2 Precinct Captain
2 Veteran Armorsmith
2 Crusader of Odric
1 Mirror Entity
1 Preeminent Captain
2 Veteran Swordsmith
2 Odric, Lunarch Marshal
1 Oketra the True
2 Odric, Master Tactician
2 Angelic Overseer
2 Captain of the Watch
2 Ethereal Armor
2 Murder Investigation
2 Pacifism
1 Gift of Orzhova
Artifacts
2 Basilisk Collar
Spells
2 Raise the Alarm
2 Nomads' Assembly
Now as for your deck it looks pretty good to start with, I'm not sure what your card budget is so i wont suggest anything to crazy, and of course take my suggestions with a grain of salt. At the end of the day it's your deck and how you want to play it
To start i think Kor Duelist might be a better choice then Fencing ace because the duelist works well with Basilisk Collar. to mention Hada Freeblade is a nice one drop soldier.
As for Veteran Armorsmith and Veteran Swordsmith you could probably replace them with a few copies of Field Marshal or Honor of the Pure and just to note i think Elspeth Tirel is faster then Elspeth, Sun's Champion if you have a copy of Tirel use her alone instead or even grab another one if you can. Lastly Pacifism all day.
I'm confused Elspeth Tirel doesn't have a +1 its a +2, its nice one at that 1 life per creature is decent sure there are cards that do it better but i like it and won off it when i needed it and it sets you up for either tokens or a possible needed board wipe next turn.
Yeah Elspeth, Sun's Champion's cmc does suck but me personally i wouldn't play it I've had better luck with the latter but that is me and my opinion i respect and understand yours.
And i didnt bother mentioning Elspeth, Knight-Errant because i dont know this person's budget and shes the most expensive out of the two also assumed this person owned both of the ones in the list they provided already.
I personally like Elspeth, Knight-Errant i run her in my Bant Exalted list.
4x Champion of the Parish
3x Thraben Inspector
3x Precinct Captain
4x Thalia's Lieutenant
3x Fiend Hunter
4x Field Marshal
2x Mentor of the Meek
3x Daru Warchief
3x Palace Sentinels
2x Knight-Captain of Eos
3x Angel of Glory's Rise
2x Captain of the Watch
17x Plains
4x High Market
3x Emeria, the Sky Ruin
Most of the best Soldiers are also humans like Champion of the Parish,Thalia's Lieutenant, and Palace Sentinels. Why not take advantage of that fact? I think what you're really missing are two cards: Emeria, the Sky Ruin and Angel of Glory's Rise. In tandem, these two almost ensure you can win the early aggro game, but have enough steam for longer games or games with more players.