MTG Salvation

Not to be rude but for the sake of everyone reading could you spend a few minutes organizing your list into something a little easier to read? Use paragraph breaks & sub headers like so:

//Commander
1 Jenara, Asura of War

//Creatures

//Draw, Dig, Search

//Countermagic

//Removal & Bounce

//Utility

//Recursion

//Mana Fixing & Ramp

//Lands


It looks like a good start. You have a lot of bigger spells that don't seem to be very impactful unless you are already winning. I think you could stand to cut some of the bigger spells to add a few smaller bodies & spells to help you smooth out your mana & draws. Once you have things a little more tidy when can work on that.

Thanks.

Okay for starters here are some suggestions for basic cuts:

Sylvan Primordial is banned so that's easy.

I would cut the Guildgates for their Khans of Tarkir equivalents:
Blossoming Sands
Thornwood Falls
Tranquil Cove

Stolen Identity > Clever Impersonator
Rampant Growth > Sakura-Tribe Elder - Ramp for the same cost but you get a better top deck late game.
Hour of Reckoning > Supreme Verdict - Cheaper, uncounterable, & not enough token makers to justify the extra cost of Hour.
Rain of Thorns > Relic Crush - Cheaper, instant speed, hits most of the same targets.
Krasis Incubation > Faith's Fetters - Incubation seems like a slow way to buff your own guys so I'm assuming it was intended for your opponents creatures.
New Benalia > If you want scry lands I would go with the Temples from Theros block. Temple of Enlightenment is the costliest at $3. The other 2 less than $2 each.

Other cards I would want to add but don't have an immediate one-for-one cuts in mind for:

• Bant Panorama
  
• Coiling Oracle
  
• Farhaven Elf
  
• Eternal Witness
  
• Solemn Simulacrum
  
• Capsize
  
• Selesnya Signet
  
• Azorius Signet
  
• Simic Signet
  
• Darksteel Ingot
  
• Gilded Lotus
  
• Ponder
  
• Impulse
  
• Counterspell
  
• Evolution Charm
  
• Regrowth
  
• Swords to Plowshares
  
• Path to Exile

Some of the cards that seem iffy to me are:

• Banishing Stroke
  
• Saving Grasp
  
• Voidwalk
  
• Roiling Waters
  
• Crackling Counterpart
  
• Hunter's Insight
  
• Wild Pair
  

You might want to start there. You have a lot of big spells but I'm concerned you don't have enough lands, artifact mana, & ramp to start deploying them in a timely manner. I would focus on the ones that are going to be solid options whether you are winning or behind (Terastodon, the U & W Primordials, Sphinx of Uthuun, Prime Speaker Zegana). Good luck!