Making progress! - I've listened to a few suggestions and have gone to a few local card shops. This is my revamped deck. It's currently at 84 cards and I'm trying to use my maybeboard to fill it out and make it as strong as possible.
I'd really appreciate any advise on ways to improve my deck/idea. If there's anything that just doesn't fit that I'm blind to, feel free to point it out.
edit: This actually doesn't work due to the ruling that Mind Over Matter discarding a card is not an effect, but a cost. So it doesn't trigger Library Of Leng.
However, if you run an eldrazi lord(Ulamog, Kozilek, Emrakul), you can still combo without Library of Leng and not mill yourself to death.
I dont know why but as I read your list, it feels more like a Hand Hate kind of deck with pillow fort ideals. Its not a bad list but I think you might have some mana problems getting the right colors in play. Alot of 2-3 mana dependant colors of each color. My Wife has a Pillow fort deck that had the same problem 2-3 mana dependant cards of all 3 colors and it was easily fixed by doing alittle of rework and the deck works really well now.
How we fixed the deck was decreased the devotion on most cards, almost cut all the cards that have more than two devotion to a single color. (Note I said Almost) if your heavy in one color you can probably get away with a few cards having a higher devotion.
Drawing was her issue also. But she found once she built up her pillow fort and was well protected she could afford to dump life into draw tools such as Greed and Erebos (The one in my signature isnt up to date...just realized that)
I'd really appreciate any advise on ways to improve my deck/idea. If there's anything that just doesn't fit that I'm blind to, feel free to point it out.
Combos & Synergy
Gain life and kill someone - One of the most common kill combos.
Sanguine Bond or Vizkopa Guildmage
Wall of Reverence or Swords to Plowshares
Serra Avatar or any large card.
Gain life and make huge monsters
Cradle of Vitality
Wall of Reverence
Serra Avatar
Duskmantle Roulette - We all bleed together
Duskmantle Seer
Strionic Resonator
Optional - Polymorphous Rush
Infinite Combos
Gain infinite life, opponents lose infinite life
Mind over Matter
Pristine Talisman - Literally the perfect mana rock for this combo
Oloro, Ageless Ascetic
Library of Leng
Optional Psychosis Crawler to get the job done quicker.
Exquisite Blood and any land/mana rock can be used in place of pristine talisman
edit: This actually doesn't work due to the ruling that Mind Over Matter discarding a card is not an effect, but a cost. So it doesn't trigger Library Of Leng.
However, if you run an eldrazi lord(Ulamog, Kozilek, Emrakul), you can still combo without Library of Leng and not mill yourself to death.
Cookie cutter infinite life/loss of life combo
Exquisite Blood
Sanguine Bond or Vizkopa Guildmage
6 Oloro, Ageless Ascetic
Creatures 11
5 Bloodgift Demon
5 Divinity of pride
4 Evil Twin
2 Grand Abolisher
5 Psychosis Crawler
6 Purity
7 Serra Avatar
2 Vizkopa Guildmage
4 Wall of reverence
4 Rhox Faithmender
4 Windborn Muse
Sorcery 6
6 Merciless Eviction
4 Diabolic Tutor
6 Plea for guidance
4 Supreme verdict
3 Toxic Deluge
4 Wrath of god
Artifact 11
3 Crawlspace
0 Everflowing Chalice
3 Pristine Talisman
1 Sol Ring
3 Chromatic Lantern
5 Venser's Journal
4 Well of lost dreams
4 Witchbane orb
4 Phyrexian Processor
4 Vedalken Orrery
1 Library of leng
Enchantment 15
3 Archmage Ascension
2 Blind obedience
1 Bloodchief ascension
4 cradle of vitality
3 dictate of kruphix
4 dissipation field
4 greed
4 kismet
1 phyrexian reclamation
5 sanguine bond
3 Ghostly Prison
6 Mind over Matter
2 Greater Auramancy
5 Exquisite Blood
3 Rhystic Study
2 cyclonic rift
3 render silent
1 swords to plowshares
Lands 37
1 Arcane sanctum
1 azorius chancery
1 azorius guildgate
1 barren moor
1 caves of koilos
1 command tower
1 dimir guildgate
1 esper panorama
1 godless shrine
5x island
1 Jwar isle refuge
1 mana confluence
1 opal palace
1 orzhov basilica
1 orzhov guildgate
4x plains
1 reliquary tower
1 rupture spire
6x swamp
1x temple of deceit
1 temple of enlightenment
1 temple of the false god
1 terrain generator
1 transguild promenade
Maybeboard
8 Ashen Rider
7 Angelic Arbiter
1 Telepathy
2 Vampire Hexmage
4 Vampire Nighthawk
7 Diluvian Primordial
0 Tormod's Crypt
10 Dread Cacodemon
2 Strionic Resonator
3 Dimir Doppelganger
6 Planar Cleansing
4 Duskmantle Seer
8 Sphinx of the Steel Wind
5 Subversion
5 Consuming Aberration
2 Lim-Dûl's Vault
5 Azor's Elocutors
6 Pristine Angel
3 Spectral Searchlight
4 Crypt Ghast
3 Hero's Downfall
4 Day of Judgment
7 Grave Betrayal
7 Tidal Force
2 Serene Master
Just something to keep in mind
As for suggestions I would greatly recommend checking out Phyrexian Processor, Windborn Muse, Silent Arbiter, and Rhox Faithmender.
Then of course the pillow fort Enchantments I am sitting here wondering why your not running them Propaganda, Ghostly Prison, Sphere of Safety, and Norn's Annex
BURPerfectly Suited to Mindless Carnage, ThraximundarRUB
URBOckham's Mindrazer = Nekusar the MindrazerBRU
UBRMarchsea makes all the Men do Stupid ThingsRBU
GWBThe Best Offense is Defense, Doran 2.0BWG
XRDaretti, Artifact ShenanigansRX
RKrenko the Don of the Goblin MobR
GFreyalise and Elves have pet HydrasG
WArmy of the Heavens, Lead by the Angel of HopeW
BDrana, The Removal BloodchiefB
UAzami, Knowledge is PowerU
WBDaxos is Enchanting Enchantments to Enchant more EnchantsBW
GRI got 99 Permanents but Primal Surge ain't One, Ruric TharRG
GBNel Thot's Sacrificial SwarmBG
WRWifey's Wrath - Gisela Blade of GoldnightRW
WUPillowfort Tron - BrunaUW
XXThe TriadXX
Do you have what it takes to survive?
I was planning on getting a phyrexian processor eventually However I was unaware of the others. I'll look around for them!
The pillowfort enchantments that I don't have yet....mostly because my local store was out of the first two, I didn't know about the others.
edit: One thing I'm noticing, is that I lack a good amount of draw power to make use of Library of Leng, Reliquary Tower, and Venser's Journal.
Drawing was her issue also. But she found once she built up her pillow fort and was well protected she could afford to dump life into draw tools such as Greed and Erebos (The one in my signature isnt up to date...just realized that)
Also you might want to look into a Chromatic Lantern
BURPerfectly Suited to Mindless Carnage, ThraximundarRUB
URBOckham's Mindrazer = Nekusar the MindrazerBRU
UBRMarchsea makes all the Men do Stupid ThingsRBU
GWBThe Best Offense is Defense, Doran 2.0BWG
XRDaretti, Artifact ShenanigansRX
RKrenko the Don of the Goblin MobR
GFreyalise and Elves have pet HydrasG
WArmy of the Heavens, Lead by the Angel of HopeW
BDrana, The Removal BloodchiefB
UAzami, Knowledge is PowerU
WBDaxos is Enchanting Enchantments to Enchant more EnchantsBW
GRI got 99 Permanents but Primal Surge ain't One, Ruric TharRG
GBNel Thot's Sacrificial SwarmBG
WRWifey's Wrath - Gisela Blade of GoldnightRW
WUPillowfort Tron - BrunaUW
XXThe TriadXX
Do you have what it takes to survive?
3 Archmage Ascension
2 Blind Obedience
1 Bloodchief Ascension
4 Cradle of Vitality
3 Dictate of Kruphix
4 Dissipation Field
5 Exquisite Blood
4 Frozen Æther
3 Ghostly Prison
2 Greater Auramancy
4 Greed
4 Kismet
6 Mind Over Matter
1 Phyrexian Reclamation
3 Propaganda
3 Rhystic Study
5 Sanguine Bond
Creature
5 Bloodgift Demon
5 Divinity of Pride
7 Drogskol Reaver
4 Evil Twin
2 Grand Abolisher
5 Psychosis Crawler
6 Purity
4 Rhox Faithmender
7 Serra Avatar
2 Vizkopa Guildmage
4 Wall of Reverence
4 Windborn Muse
2 Cyclonic Rift
3 Render Silent
1 Swords to Plowshares
Sorcery
4 Diabolic Tutor
2 Exsanguinate
6 Merciless Eviction
6 Plea for Guidance
4 Supreme Verdict
3 Toxic Deluge
4 Wrath of God
Artifact
3 Chromatic Lantern
3 Crawlspace
0 Everflowing Chalice
1 Library of Leng
4 Phyrexian Processor
3 Pristine Talisman
1 Sol Ring
4 Vedalken Orrery
5 Venser's Journal
4 Well of Lost Dreams
4 Witchbane Orb
8 Ashen Rider
5 Azor's Elocutors
5 Consuming Aberration
7 Diluvian Primordial
3 Dimir Doppelganger
10 Dread Cacodemon
4 Duskmantle Seer
2 Lim-Dûl's Vault
7 Planar Cleansing
8 Sphinx of the Steel Wind
2 Strionic Resonator
5 Subversion
0 Tormod's Crypt
edit: Removed spectral searchlight from maybeboard, Chromatic Lantern can replace it.
I would like to fill in my deck with my maybeboard if possible, but if there are better suggestions feel free!