MTG Salvation

Here's a deck I have not seen!! Been working on this one for a little bit.  I feel like I need an experienced eye to view my rookie ish mistakes.

This is a black white firststrike deathtouch deck.

With Teysa envoy of ghosts.

I want it to be a multiplayer deck that gets its board status up as fast as it can while scaring away anyone from wanting to attack and then becoming over powering thru the use of some recursion.

I feel like I need help with synergy, protecting myself, and getting it not so top heavy.

Here's my deck list.





there may be some very rookie mistakes. Please let me know.

I really want to know what to take out.

I have a little lifelink that's not really synergizing with anything else. The recursion doesn't really synergize that well.
It's top heavy and other then that I feel like it's pretty strong. I'm not an experienced player so I'm sure there are some staples I'm missing. Please help and don't flame too hard if I made some bad desicions.

Please helppp

Hmm. Well a lot of your deck is "low impact" when playing EDH you kind want cards that have big effects on the game so you can shift momentum in your favour.

Most of your deck is recent cards is it just a budget deck or are you willing to put more money into it.

I think you will want more token production, e.g lingering souls, since you can give everything first strike and deathtouch why not give those abilites to expendable creatures. spectrial procession, pack rat, Conqueror's Pledge etc. Intangable virture is extremely good when everything has deathtouch allowing you to attack and defend. Not to meantion how good "going wide" is with a lot of your creature enhancements. I'd want a couple of anthems to improve the tokens power. Any of the Sorins would be good in the deck.

I'd remove most of the bad deathtouchers. I like Vampire nighthawk as a creature so I'd keep that, grave titan, opiomancer has other uses and cain wanderer seems ok then I'd then cut the rest.

I'd like to see some more card draw, that seems to be your most glaring missing part to your deck, you have skullclamp which obviously gets way way better once you add token generation but black has lots of card draw options phyrexian arena, underworld connections as well as sign in blood effects there are some "sacarfice a creature draw a card effects" around which works well with tokens.

I'd want some Sacrifice outlets to go with the tokens and some "whenever a creature dies" effects to take full advantage, grave pact/dictate of erabos formost amoung them.

I'd cut a lot of the high mana cost things that aren't directly improving your tokens, it isn't really worth the slots for the required ramp if you can have a bit impact with less mana.

Something else to consider is that trample works very well with deathtouch allowing you to only have to deal 1 damage to the blocking creature.