Mageta the Lion has always seemed like a very interesting commander to me- he's Day of Judgement on a body, and he survives through it to boot! Plus, he has awesome flavor text ("In the jungle of war there is always a Lion"). He practically screams "Make me your general!"
I tried to build this as a voltron/stax list, with a focus on recursion (If I'm going to discard cards to Mageta's ability, I might as well find a way to use those cards). I'd love any and all comments and critiques!
I don't think you have enough threat density. Your playing two completely different decks in one (voltron/stax) which is normally fine, but your general is pretty dependent to both plans of attack and he is not very efficient at either strategy. A 3/3 for 3WW that gives your opponent a turn to swing all out at you before you wrath, then costs 2WW TAP your general (Remember your playing voltron with a 3/3 and you really want to attack into this newfound clear board) and you have to discard two cards which in mono white can really be a problem with. I don't know what your budget is but Land Tax could help here. I really would try to find more ways than mind's eye to draw cards. I think Thalia, Guardian of Thraben might be better suited to the voltron/stax route although I love the flavor of Mageta the Nazi.
Here's my attempt:
1x Mageta the Lion
Land (36)
1x Drifting Meadow
1x Dust Bowl
1x Eiganjo Castle
1x Emeria, The Sky Ruin
1x Flagstones of Trokair
1x Kor Haven
1x Maze of Ith
1x Mistveil Plains
21x Plains
1x Secluded Steppe
1x Strip Mine
1x Temple of the False God
1x Terrain Generator
1x Thawing Glaciers
1x The Tabernacle at Pendrell Vale
1x Vesuva
Artifact (20)
1x Caged Sun
1x Claws of Gix
1x Crucible of Worlds
1x Crystal Ball
1x Darksteel Plate
1x Extraplanar Lens
1x Gauntlet of Power
1x Mind's Eye
1x Sculpting Steel
1x Smokestack
1x Sol Ring
1x Swiftfoot Boots
1x Sword of Feast and Famine
1x Sword of War and Peace
1x Sword of the Paruns
1x Tangle Wire
1x Thran Dynamo
1x Wayfarer's Bauble
1x Whispersilk Cloak
1x Winter Orb
1x Austere Command
1x Breath of Life
1x Cataclysm
1x Dust to Dust
1x Resurrection
1x Rout
1x Steelshaper's Gift
1x Wrath of God
Instant (9)
1x Condemn
1x Enlightened Tutor
1x Faith's Reward
1x Oblation
1x Path to Exile
1x Return to Dust
1x Rootborn Defenses
1x Second Sunrise
1x Swords to Plowshares
Enchantment (13)
1x Aura of Silence
1x Crackdown
1x Ghostly Prison
1x Indestructibility
1x Journey to Nowhere
1x Luminarch Ascension
1x Oblivion Ring
1x Prison Term
1x Proper Burial
1x Rule of Law
1x Seal of Cleansing
1x Sigil of the New Dawn
1x Sphere of Safety
1x Argivian Archaeologist
1x Darksteel Colossus
1x Eternal Dragon
1x Glory
1x Solemn Simulacrum
1x Stoneforge Mystic
1x Stonehewer Giant
1x Sun Titan
1x Twilight Shepherd
1x Weathered Wayfarer
1x Yosei, the Morning Star
Planeswalker (2)
1x Elspeth, Knight-Errant
1x Karn Liberated
I tried to build this as a voltron/stax list, with a focus on recursion (If I'm going to discard cards to Mageta's ability, I might as well find a way to use those cards). I'd love any and all comments and critiques!
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