I think I liked the first version's chest in that it was a bit more ethereal. I like the overall feel of what you are going for.
I often see Centaurs where the proportions just don't feel right (especially if the human body/torso is too big relative to the horses') - but your proportions feel well balanced.
Not exactly sure what you mean by ethereal, In the first one i felt his head seem a little big in relation to his chest. Also, as he is a Chieftain, I thought he should look a little more powerful. (and i REALLY didnt like the chest-hair thing he had going on. look a little too wild to me).
I'm calling the second one the final. Id love to add some other spirits poking out, but honestly real life is getting in the way and I dont have a lot of free time
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i like the card just fine. It wont see much (if any) play in constructed so he will be nice and cheap. As a budget EDH player, i love me some cheap planeswalker.
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So, first I had a Sharuum deck, but she got out of control, and I found that I had too many options and never could settle on what to run. Then it became a Karn deck. I wanted to challenge myself, but i found it wasnt very consistent. While fun, it seemed to only win off of explosive starts. I wanted to change my artifact again and that lead me to Slobad.
There are a few card in there I'd like some opinions on, as well as a few im considering:
Furnace Celebration - seem like it could be a very consistent source of damage Ashnod's Transmogrant - works with Salvaging Station and i dont have to worry about protecting it (like liquimetal coat and silverskin armor) Tower of Fortunes - the deck makes a lot of mana, but is 8 for four card worth it? Dragonstorm - there's a few very useful dragons in the deck (steel hellkite, hoarding dragon) Sunstone - Seems awesome with snow cover lands. Mana isn't usually a problem, and I also often aim to destroy all lands anyways
Im also considering:
Kuldotha Phoenix - Metalcraft is easy, 4/4 hasty flier that comes back post wrath Slag Fiend - Big man for R, too bad its not an artifact. Lightning Crafter - 3 ping'r is sweet, saving a goblin from a wrath also seems sweet
That's some fantastic art there. I'm torn on whether I prefer his old cloak or his new one. His old, bulkier one has a sort of leader-y feel, but I do love the writing on your take.
Completely intentional. When i was sketching him, i thought, "Hes a Creature - Human Warrior, his old outfit felt a little more... Shaman-y. Plus I really wanted to play around with his armor, instead of covering him up
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Looks nice man, although is it annoying to take out your deck everytime you want to shuffle? Just seems to me it'd be annoying to get your hands in there to get your deck each time. I do have enormously large hands though to be fair.
its lined with soft fabric, just tip it and the deck sides out!
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My art:http://artofalexr.weebly.com/
GGRRBorborygmos EnragedRRGG
WWxxKemba, Kha RegentxxWW
RRxxSlobad, Goblin TinkererxxRR
BBBBPhage the UntouchableBBBB
RWGHazezon TamarGWR
BBWWObzedat, Ghost CouncilWWBB
GWBKarador, Ghost ChieftainBWG
GGUUVorel of the Hull CladeUUGG
BBRRRakdos, Lord of RiotsRRBB
UUWWDaxos of MeletisWWUU
GGGGYeva, Nature's HeraldGGGG
UUUUTalrand, Sky SummonerUUUU
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My art:http://artofalexr.weebly.com/
Not exactly sure what you mean by ethereal, In the first one i felt his head seem a little big in relation to his chest. Also, as he is a Chieftain, I thought he should look a little more powerful. (and i REALLY didnt like the chest-hair thing he had going on. look a little too wild to me).
I'm calling the second one the final. Id love to add some other spirits poking out, but honestly real life is getting in the way and I dont have a lot of free time
GGRRBorborygmos EnragedRRGG
WWxxKemba, Kha RegentxxWW
RRxxSlobad, Goblin TinkererxxRR
BBBBPhage the UntouchableBBBB
RWGHazezon TamarGWR
BBWWObzedat, Ghost CouncilWWBB
GWBKarador, Ghost ChieftainBWG
GGUUVorel of the Hull CladeUUGG
BBRRRakdos, Lord of RiotsRRBB
UUWWDaxos of MeletisWWUU
GGGGYeva, Nature's HeraldGGGG
UUUUTalrand, Sky SummonerUUUU
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My art:http://artofalexr.weebly.com/
cleaned up
GGRRBorborygmos EnragedRRGG
WWxxKemba, Kha RegentxxWW
RRxxSlobad, Goblin TinkererxxRR
BBBBPhage the UntouchableBBBB
RWGHazezon TamarGWR
BBWWObzedat, Ghost CouncilWWBB
GWBKarador, Ghost ChieftainBWG
GGUUVorel of the Hull CladeUUGG
BBRRRakdos, Lord of RiotsRRBB
UUWWDaxos of MeletisWWUU
GGGGYeva, Nature's HeraldGGGG
UUUUTalrand, Sky SummonerUUUU
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My art:http://artofalexr.weebly.com/
not as fast, but personally i got bored stealing wins with hasty infect guys.
oh ya, and Corpsejack Menace
GGRRBorborygmos EnragedRRGG
WWxxKemba, Kha RegentxxWW
RRxxSlobad, Goblin TinkererxxRR
BBBBPhage the UntouchableBBBB
RWGHazezon TamarGWR
BBWWObzedat, Ghost CouncilWWBB
GWBKarador, Ghost ChieftainBWG
GGUUVorel of the Hull CladeUUGG
BBRRRakdos, Lord of RiotsRRBB
UUWWDaxos of MeletisWWUU
GGGGYeva, Nature's HeraldGGGG
UUUUTalrand, Sky SummonerUUUU
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My art:http://artofalexr.weebly.com/
GGRRBorborygmos EnragedRRGG
WWxxKemba, Kha RegentxxWW
RRxxSlobad, Goblin TinkererxxRR
BBBBPhage the UntouchableBBBB
RWGHazezon TamarGWR
BBWWObzedat, Ghost CouncilWWBB
GWBKarador, Ghost ChieftainBWG
GGUUVorel of the Hull CladeUUGG
BBRRRakdos, Lord of RiotsRRBB
UUWWDaxos of MeletisWWUU
GGGGYeva, Nature's HeraldGGGG
UUUUTalrand, Sky SummonerUUUU
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My art:http://artofalexr.weebly.com/
FINAL:
GGRRBorborygmos EnragedRRGG
WWxxKemba, Kha RegentxxWW
RRxxSlobad, Goblin TinkererxxRR
BBBBPhage the UntouchableBBBB
RWGHazezon TamarGWR
BBWWObzedat, Ghost CouncilWWBB
GWBKarador, Ghost ChieftainBWG
GGUUVorel of the Hull CladeUUGG
BBRRRakdos, Lord of RiotsRRBB
UUWWDaxos of MeletisWWUU
GGGGYeva, Nature's HeraldGGGG
UUUUTalrand, Sky SummonerUUUU
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My art:http://artofalexr.weebly.com/
Ramp
1 Lotus Bloom
1 Sol Ring
1 Mana Vault
1 Thran Dynamo
1 Everflowing Chalice
1 Caged Sun
1 Extraplanar Lens
1 Basalt Monolith
1 Koth of the Hammer
1 Solemn Simulacrum
1 Mycosynth Wellspring
1 Expedition Map
Tokens
1 Thopter Assembly
1 Myr Battlesphere
1 Genesis Chamber
1 Mirrorworks
1 Prototype Portal
Untap
1 Dross Scorpion
1 Voltaic Key
1 Clock of Omens
Tutors and Draw
1 Memory Jar
1 Tower of Fortunes
1 Scrabbling Claws
1 Phyrexian Furnace
1 Kuldotha Forgemaster
1 Hoarding Dragon
1 Dragonstorm
1 Goblin Matron
1 Goblin Recruiter
1 Silverskin Armor
1 Liquimetal Coating
1 Ashnod's Transmogrant
1 Myr Landshaper
Removal and Wraths
1 Steel Hellkite
1 Duplicant
1 Spine of Ish Sah
1 Karn Liberated
1 Viashino Heretic
1 Oblivion Stone
1 Nevinyrral's Disk
1 All Is Dust
1 Blasphemous Act
1 Magmaquake
1 Earthquake
1 Starstorm
1 Jokullhaups
1 Obliterate
1 Decree of Annihilation
Graveyard Stuff
1 Goblin Welder
1 Trash for Treasure
1 Salvaging Station
1 Scarecrone
1 Trading Post
1 Nim Deathmantle
1 Codex Shedder
1 Myr Retriever
1 Arcbound Reclaimer
1 Lodestone Golem
1 Blood Moon
1 Pithing Needle
1 Sunstone
1 Platinum Emperion
1 Darksteel Forge
Goodstuff
1 Rings of Brightearth
1 Hellkite Igniter
1 Furnace Celebration
Lands
1 Valakut, the Molten Pinnacle
1 Urza's Tower
1 Urza's Mine
1 Urza's Power Plant
1 Urza's Factory
1 Mishra's Factory
1 Darksteel Citadel
1 Blinkmoth Nexus
1 Buried Ruin
1 Ghost Town
1 Reliquary Tower
1 Great Furnace
21 Snow-Covered Mountian
There are a few card in there I'd like some opinions on, as well as a few im considering:
Furnace Celebration - seem like it could be a very consistent source of damage
Ashnod's Transmogrant - works with Salvaging Station and i dont have to worry about protecting it (like liquimetal coat and silverskin armor)
Tower of Fortunes - the deck makes a lot of mana, but is 8 for four card worth it?
Dragonstorm - there's a few very useful dragons in the deck (steel hellkite, hoarding dragon)
Sunstone - Seems awesome with snow cover lands. Mana isn't usually a problem, and I also often aim to destroy all lands anyways
Im also considering:
Kuldotha Phoenix - Metalcraft is easy, 4/4 hasty flier that comes back post wrath
Slag Fiend - Big man for R, too bad its not an artifact.
Lightning Crafter - 3 ping'r is sweet, saving a goblin from a wrath also seems sweet
Thoughts?
GGRRBorborygmos EnragedRRGG
WWxxKemba, Kha RegentxxWW
RRxxSlobad, Goblin TinkererxxRR
BBBBPhage the UntouchableBBBB
RWGHazezon TamarGWR
BBWWObzedat, Ghost CouncilWWBB
GWBKarador, Ghost ChieftainBWG
GGUUVorel of the Hull CladeUUGG
BBRRRakdos, Lord of RiotsRRBB
UUWWDaxos of MeletisWWUU
GGGGYeva, Nature's HeraldGGGG
UUUUTalrand, Sky SummonerUUUU
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My art:http://artofalexr.weebly.com/
Who's Ashnod? what does her plane look like? I find the original a little dry and mechanical. Maybe a phyrexian version?
I'm thinking doing a full art with floating text style (Example)
Thoughts?
GGRRBorborygmos EnragedRRGG
WWxxKemba, Kha RegentxxWW
RRxxSlobad, Goblin TinkererxxRR
BBBBPhage the UntouchableBBBB
RWGHazezon TamarGWR
BBWWObzedat, Ghost CouncilWWBB
GWBKarador, Ghost ChieftainBWG
GGUUVorel of the Hull CladeUUGG
BBRRRakdos, Lord of RiotsRRBB
UUWWDaxos of MeletisWWUU
GGGGYeva, Nature's HeraldGGGG
UUUUTalrand, Sky SummonerUUUU
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My art:http://artofalexr.weebly.com/
any idea whats my best options?
GGRRBorborygmos EnragedRRGG
WWxxKemba, Kha RegentxxWW
RRxxSlobad, Goblin TinkererxxRR
BBBBPhage the UntouchableBBBB
RWGHazezon TamarGWR
BBWWObzedat, Ghost CouncilWWBB
GWBKarador, Ghost ChieftainBWG
GGUUVorel of the Hull CladeUUGG
BBRRRakdos, Lord of RiotsRRBB
UUWWDaxos of MeletisWWUU
GGGGYeva, Nature's HeraldGGGG
UUUUTalrand, Sky SummonerUUUU
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My art:http://artofalexr.weebly.com/
Completely intentional. When i was sketching him, i thought, "Hes a Creature - Human Warrior, his old outfit felt a little more... Shaman-y. Plus I really wanted to play around with his armor, instead of covering him up
GGRRBorborygmos EnragedRRGG
WWxxKemba, Kha RegentxxWW
RRxxSlobad, Goblin TinkererxxRR
BBBBPhage the UntouchableBBBB
RWGHazezon TamarGWR
BBWWObzedat, Ghost CouncilWWBB
GWBKarador, Ghost ChieftainBWG
GGUUVorel of the Hull CladeUUGG
BBRRRakdos, Lord of RiotsRRBB
UUWWDaxos of MeletisWWUU
GGGGYeva, Nature's HeraldGGGG
UUUUTalrand, Sky SummonerUUUU
=========================================
My art:http://artofalexr.weebly.com/
GGRRBorborygmos EnragedRRGG
WWxxKemba, Kha RegentxxWW
RRxxSlobad, Goblin TinkererxxRR
BBBBPhage the UntouchableBBBB
RWGHazezon TamarGWR
BBWWObzedat, Ghost CouncilWWBB
GWBKarador, Ghost ChieftainBWG
GGUUVorel of the Hull CladeUUGG
BBRRRakdos, Lord of RiotsRRBB
UUWWDaxos of MeletisWWUU
GGGGYeva, Nature's HeraldGGGG
UUUUTalrand, Sky SummonerUUUU
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My art:http://artofalexr.weebly.com/
its lined with soft fabric, just tip it and the deck sides out!
GGRRBorborygmos EnragedRRGG
WWxxKemba, Kha RegentxxWW
RRxxSlobad, Goblin TinkererxxRR
BBBBPhage the UntouchableBBBB
RWGHazezon TamarGWR
BBWWObzedat, Ghost CouncilWWBB
GWBKarador, Ghost ChieftainBWG
GGUUVorel of the Hull CladeUUGG
BBRRRakdos, Lord of RiotsRRBB
UUWWDaxos of MeletisWWUU
GGGGYeva, Nature's HeraldGGGG
UUUUTalrand, Sky SummonerUUUU
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My art:http://artofalexr.weebly.com/
I used to mess around with make set pieces for Warhammer and other miniature games, so I decided to make something for MTG (specifically Commander)
(note: my photos make it look a fair bit lighter then IRL)
What do you think?
GGRRBorborygmos EnragedRRGG
WWxxKemba, Kha RegentxxWW
RRxxSlobad, Goblin TinkererxxRR
BBBBPhage the UntouchableBBBB
RWGHazezon TamarGWR
BBWWObzedat, Ghost CouncilWWBB
GWBKarador, Ghost ChieftainBWG
GGUUVorel of the Hull CladeUUGG
BBRRRakdos, Lord of RiotsRRBB
UUWWDaxos of MeletisWWUU
GGGGYeva, Nature's HeraldGGGG
UUUUTalrand, Sky SummonerUUUU
=========================================
My art:http://artofalexr.weebly.com/
GGRRBorborygmos EnragedRRGG
WWxxKemba, Kha RegentxxWW
RRxxSlobad, Goblin TinkererxxRR
BBBBPhage the UntouchableBBBB
RWGHazezon TamarGWR
BBWWObzedat, Ghost CouncilWWBB
GWBKarador, Ghost ChieftainBWG
GGUUVorel of the Hull CladeUUGG
BBRRRakdos, Lord of RiotsRRBB
UUWWDaxos of MeletisWWUU
GGGGYeva, Nature's HeraldGGGG
UUUUTalrand, Sky SummonerUUUU
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My art:http://artofalexr.weebly.com/
1 Kemba, Kha Regent
More Tokens!
1 Elspeth, Knight-Errant
1 Elspeth Tirel
1 Geist-Honored Monk
1 Increasing Devotion
1 Mobilization
1 Springjack Shepherd
1 Thopter Assembly
1 Thraben Doomsayer
1 Twilight Drover
1 White Sun's Zenith
ETB Triggers
1 Cathars' Crusade
1 Court Street Denizen
1 Goldnight Commander
1 Mentor of the Meek
1 Soul's Attendant
1 Soul Warden
1 Suture Priest
Creature you control get...
1 Ajani Goldmane
1 Angel of Jubilation
1 Crescendo of War
1 Crusade
1 Intangible Virtue
1 Phantom General
1 Raksha Golden Cub
1 Adventuring Dear
1 Argentum Armor
1 Bone Saw
1 Explorer's Scope
1 Golem-Skin Gauntlets
1 Infiltration Lens
1 Leonin Bola
1 Moonsilver Spear
1 Mortarpod
1 O-Naginata
1 Pennon Blade
1 Shuko
1 Skullclamp
1 Swiftfoot Boots
1 Sword of Body and Mind
1 Sword of Feast and Famine
1 Sword of War and Peace
1 Sword of Vengeance
1 Vorrac Battlehorns
Tutors and Synergies
1 Brass Squire
1 Leonin Abunas
1 Puresteel Paladin
1 Quest for the Holy Relic
1 Stoneforge Mystic
1 Stonehewer Giant
1 Diversionary Tactics
1 Hour of Reckoning
1 Kor Sanctifiers
1 Oblivion Ring
1 Phyrexian Rebirth
1 Revoke Existence
1 Seal of Cleansing
1 Terminus
Graveyard
1 Marshal's Anthem
1 Mine Excavation
1 Remember the Fallen
1 Revillark
1 Sanctum Gargoyle
Other Goodies
1 Odric, Master Tactician
1 Ashnod's Altar
1 Brave the Elements
1 War Report
Lands
1 Drifting Meadow
1 Secluded Steppe
1 Windbrisk Hieghts
30 Plains
Very straight forward deck.
With Kemba able to have multiple tokens enter the battlefield each turn (along with cards like Increasing Devotion, Springjack Shepherd and White Sun's Zenith), Cathars' Crusade and Goldnight Commander are the most common ways the deck wins.
Court Street Denizen, Diversionary Tactics, Leonin Bola and Odric, Master Tactician clear the way for your army of tokens to attack (and get in with the Swords of This and That)
Open to suggestions, I know theres a lot of cards in there that could use a serious upgrade
GGRRBorborygmos EnragedRRGG
WWxxKemba, Kha RegentxxWW
RRxxSlobad, Goblin TinkererxxRR
BBBBPhage the UntouchableBBBB
RWGHazezon TamarGWR
BBWWObzedat, Ghost CouncilWWBB
GWBKarador, Ghost ChieftainBWG
GGUUVorel of the Hull CladeUUGG
BBRRRakdos, Lord of RiotsRRBB
UUWWDaxos of MeletisWWUU
GGGGYeva, Nature's HeraldGGGG
UUUUTalrand, Sky SummonerUUUU
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My art:http://artofalexr.weebly.com/