And I'm busy going through the first pack with Mikaeus the Lunarch, and I pull 2 Doran, the Siege Tower? I realized I missed Captain Sissay after I opened everything. The other Doran's ink is a bit smeared, has this happened to anyone before? I also recorded this so I've got video proof.
When Dr Horrific enters the battlefield, put X 1/0 expiriment tokens onto the battlefield, where X is the number of cards in your graveyard. When Dr Horrific leaves the battlefield, exile those tokens.
t All tokens you control get +X/-X where X is how much expiriments you have on the battlefield.
Issues with it:
1. The mana cost. Too much mana of one colour. Also, you know you can type RRRRR in mana brackets and it will turn out like RRRRR? Mana costs like this are just hard to read.
2. The ability. Deal X damage to each creature and to the player equal to the number of basic lands? Sounds POWERFUL. Too powerful for the cost, because you'll be dealing at least 5 or more mana most of the time. Also, if you go first thats pretty much gonna wipe your opponent's board to and you'll be able to swing for the kill. Too powerful.
3. The additional cost. Drawing 3 cards as part of an additional cost is weird. If you only had Thermogenic Explosion in your hand and played it, it'd refill you hand with 3 cards. That not only feels very blue, but you can't counter it as its a COST. Costs aren't supposed to be GOOD. So you've worded the cost wrong. Also, it would make far more sense for a player to sacrifice a land as an additional cost instead of their hand. That would also help to balance it. Plus it'd feel far more red. Red has a history of destroying its own lands for temporary gain.
Finally, flavour and simplicity are king when designing card. A card can be good design without having much on the card provided that its got a strong flavour and it simply expresses that flavour.
Risk to Take RRBBBUBU
Sorcery - Uncommon
At the beginning of your upkeep, you may sacrifice all of your creatures and deal damage equivalent to half of all their power + toughness to target player and every creature he controls.
Thermogenic Explosion deals X damage to target player and each creature he or she controls. Where X basic lands you have in play. As a required cost to play Thermogenic Explosion, discard your whole hand and draw 3 new cards.
I'm actually completely fine with it. I really am not a fan of Captain Sissay and Doran has more value as well.
Edit: Also if anyone wants to see the video just ask me and I'll upload it to youtube
Artifact - Equipment {UC}
Card Text: Equipped Creature gets +3/+-1 and First Strike
Oracle Text: An incredibly powerful katana that sacrifices all defence for speed and power.
Creature - Human Soldier {UC}
Haste
2/2
-Rare-
Creature - Mad Scientist
When Dr Horrific enters the battlefield, put X 1/0 expiriment tokens onto the battlefield, where X is the number of cards in your graveyard. When Dr Horrific leaves the battlefield, exile those tokens.
t All tokens you control get +X/-X where X is how much expiriments you have on the battlefield.
1/1
"Ah! More monkeys!"
Common
Creature - Human Merchant
t Draw a card, then Discard a card, if you discarded the card you just drew, draw a new card.
0/1
Creature - Goblin Mage
Common
R Deal 1 damage to target player or creature.
1/1
Thank's, I'm new to this.
Sorcery - Uncommon
At the beginning of your upkeep, you may sacrifice all of your creatures and deal damage equivalent to half of all their power + toughness to target player and every creature he controls.
Sorcery - Mythic Rare
Thermogenic Explosion deals X damage to target player and each creature he or she controls. Where X basic lands you have in play. As a required cost to play Thermogenic Explosion, discard your whole hand and draw 3 new cards.
Instant GG[MANA]g[/MANA]
Uncommon
Colossal Impact deals damage to each player depending on how much land the user controls.