It's a tiny detail, but I do not like the name of the new font, Beleren. It's just another sign that we'll probably have to suffer through his presence for many more years.
Determined Bountyhunter1W
Creature- Human Soldier (u)
As Determined Bountyhunter enters the battlefield, name a card.
Determined Bountyhunter has protection from the named card.
2/2
Nutcrowned Elder3G
Creature- Elf Druid (u)
When Nutcrowned Elder enters the battlefield, put two 1/1 green Squirrel creature tokens onto the battlefield. T: Add G to your mana pool for each token creature you control.
2/2
I don't feel that the +1 on a 2 CMC 'walker can't be 100% upside. There are some positive effect with low enough impact. Brainstorming:
Lands you control gain 'T: Add one mana of any colour to your mana pool.' until end of turn.
Add 1 to your mana pool.
Look at the top card of your library, if it's a land out it in your hand.
Gain 1 life.
Shuffle a card from your graveyard into your library.
Untap target nonland permanent.
Target land becomes a 2/2 creature until end of turn.
The more I look at this the more I think my first ability is too strong. I'm thinking if I changed the +1 to "Lands you control gain 'T: Add one mana of any color to your mana pool.' until end of turn." then it seems more fair. If she can't net mana on her own, do you think the 0 is fine where it is?
Unwelcome Tyrant4RR
Creature- Dragon (U)
Flying
When Unwelcome Tyrant enters the battlefield, gain control of target land for as long as you control Unwelcome Tyrant.
5/5
A lot of people complain about the weakness of Tibalt. I love his flavor myself, but I've been having fun trying to conceive of some strong but balanced 2 mana planeswalkers.
Here's one I like:
Aszra WyrelGG
Planeswalker- Aszra (m)
(+1) Add one mana of any color to your mana pool.
(0) You may play an additional land card this turn.
(-5) Target land becomes an 8/8 green Elemental creature. It is still a land.
1 Loyalty
Criticism please!
Also: Do you guys have any 2 mana walkers you want to share? Let's see what sort of cool stuff salvationgoers have been brewing.
Why not just cut the 5/5 Greater Demons from the original version? I'm sure it has some meaning to the Berserk story line but the Marit Lage knockoff is about enough. It'll save about a third of your text.
Don't forget about the sign in blood life.
Creature- Horror
When Vision of Sadism enters the battlefield, target opponent sacrifices a tapped creature.
2/2
It kills the vulnerable not because it is easy, but because is is most pleasurable.
Instant (u)
Exile target creature attacking you. Remove all creatures you don't control from combat.
Creature- Bear (r)
Whenever Pugnacious Brownhide attacks, Pugnacious Brownhide fights another target creature.
Whenever Pugnacious Brownhide wins a fight, put a +1/+1 counter on Pugnacious Brownhide.
3/3
Creature- Human Soldier (u)
As Determined Bountyhunter enters the battlefield, name a card.
Determined Bountyhunter has protection from the named card.
2/2
Creature- Elf Druid (u)
When Nutcrowned Elder enters the battlefield, put two 1/1 green Squirrel creature tokens onto the battlefield.
T: Add G to your mana pool for each token creature you control.
2/2
Enchantment (r)
At the beginning of your upkeep choose a permanent at random. Put a token into play that is a copy of that permanent.
The more I look at this the more I think my first ability is too strong. I'm thinking if I changed the +1 to "Lands you control gain 'T: Add one mana of any color to your mana pool.' until end of turn." then it seems more fair. If she can't net mana on her own, do you think the 0 is fine where it is?
Creature- Dragon (U)
Flying
When Unwelcome Tyrant enters the battlefield, gain control of target land for as long as you control Unwelcome Tyrant.
5/5
Here's one I like:
Aszra Wyrel GG
Planeswalker- Aszra (m)
(+1) Add one mana of any color to your mana pool.
(0) You may play an additional land card this turn.
(-5) Target land becomes an 8/8 green Elemental creature. It is still a land.
1 Loyalty
Criticism please!
Also: Do you guys have any 2 mana walkers you want to share? Let's see what sort of cool stuff salvationgoers have been brewing.