I have a good feeling after reading the story. The character was described well...it contains less action and more contemplation, and I like it.
Maybe the only disharmony is that Kentaro looks very young at his picture, and it was a bit difficult to imagine him as an experienced and respecteds ensei...but being young and being experienced needn't be mutually exclusive, especially in the times of war...
EDIT: Another discussion about the story runs in Rumor Mill just now. It will be probably moved here and merged.
http://www.wizards.com/default.asp?x=magic/bok/kentaro
What do you think of it?
Maybe the only disharmony is that Kentaro looks very young at his picture, and it was a bit difficult to imagine him as an experienced and respecteds ensei...but being young and being experienced needn't be mutually exclusive, especially in the times of war...
EDIT: Another discussion about the story runs in Rumor Mill just now. It will be probably moved here and merged.
Let this great clan rest in peace (2001-2011)