This card is stupid, its really powerful, but it doesn't match its color at all and 5 is NOT enough for a card that could destroy two ridiculous permanents. either way, it says his or her way too many times.
Wow, there is a lot of "hate" on there for the winner. Is that the prize? Maybe I don't want to win...
This card is very clever. I really like the idea and the strong attempt at executing it in a feasible way. Most people wouldn't have been able to come up with a version of this that was anywhere near as close to printable, if they hadn't been given yours as a starting point.
I agree that giving black targetted artifact removal is probably not something WotC would do, and the LD issue is a serious one. As is, the card would definately be rare, not uncommon, and probably should have a different cost (3BB? 3WB would be nearly perfect).
Proposed "fix": Change cost to 2BB, change to "creatures" instead of "nonenchantment permanets". Alternate proposed fix: Change the cost to 3WB or 4WB and change it to just "permanents". Oh, it might need a name change as well.
All my comments are intended as constructive criticism.
you know what would make this card better? change the name to Fowl Inspiration and change the artwork to have the pages coming out of the book to being chickens. lol. sorry, i had to say it.
i hope not too many people missed the honorable mention at the end of the first post: "
Malfegor's Limerick :symu::symb::symb::symr:
Sorcery
Destroy target creature or land.
Discard every card in your hand.
For each card discarded
Return up to two target
Creatures to their owners' hands. A demon will not be published and a dragon will not be critiqued. "
WOW! that is hilarious! i absolutely love it! great card. should have won. i would love to see this in an un- set. props!
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Wow this has to be one of the best user created cards I have seen, good in head to head but really shines in free for all, so it gives a bit to everyone. Nice creation!
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This card is very clever. I really like the idea and the strong attempt at executing it in a feasible way. Most people wouldn't have been able to come up with a version of this that was anywhere near as close to printable, if they hadn't been given yours as a starting point.
I agree that giving black targetted artifact removal is probably not something WotC would do, and the LD issue is a serious one. As is, the card would definately be rare, not uncommon, and probably should have a different cost (3BB? 3WB would be nearly perfect).
Proposed "fix": Change cost to 2BB, change to "creatures" instead of "nonenchantment permanets". Alternate proposed fix: Change the cost to 3WB or 4WB and change it to just "permanents". Oh, it might need a name change as well.
All my comments are intended as constructive criticism.
Great job, and congratulations!
The Simic: we have glow-in-the-dark milk and self replicating cookies.
"We do not see things as they are. We see them as we are." Anias Nin
"The search for love is but the honest searching out of everything that interferes with love."
"When my heart is at peace, the world is at peace." Chinese proverb